Oh no this chapter was so sad, poor Marissa and Sirius as well. They need to admit their love for each other.

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James gives the best pep talks ever! Yay Lily made the team!

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Brilliant! I love that the charm hit Rebecca, and Sirius saying what he did.
So glad Lily forgives them, And the flashback was cute.

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Go Marissa And Rebecca signing up Lily to the try outs. Oh no Peter keeps disappearing :-(
Oh Remus and Rebecca so want each other. The whole list was fantastic.

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Lily wearng Marissa clothes and chasing Peter is brilliant! :-D
I love James and Rebecca they're so funny!
This chapter is hilarious!

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I just had the scene where Sirius grabs Marissa playing in my head and nearly burst out laughing.
Can we all oggle Sirius? :-D
Yay Lily is playing Quidditch

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I wonder if they're actually going to make Peter go in the girls dorm?
Rebecca and Remus flirting aye?

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I think Lily just wants any excuse to yell at James :-D Good chapter!

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I love the flirting between Marissa and Sirius

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Oh James I think Lily was over reacting though.
I liked this chapter :-D

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Ahh! James has a sister and it's Rebecca, that makes this so much more better. I can't believe he yelled that loudly in front of McGonagall. I'm excited about them sharing a common room.

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This is a very good first chapter, you introduced everyone very well and I can't wait to see them all interacting.

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i love this story! and I love how you guys are pulling quotes from movies like "Hook" in this chapter and "Robing Hood: Prince of Thieves" in a previous chapter. It makes it that much more marvelous of a story :)

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omg amazing you just have to continue i might die if you dont please pretty please with sprinkles on top :)

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i love it great job
8/10
moo! moo!
cows wa here!
can you please use the word fluberdigalion in your next chapter

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i must say Marissa is annoying the crap out of me i hate her!!

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om gosh. i love it.

10/10

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haha. ilike the comment about floo powder. it is funny. I love tis story

10/10

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Yay. It is role reversal but i love it.

10/10

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haha. i love this story. please don;t let it end.

10/10

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stupid remus. Stupid James.

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that was so funny. Haha Marissa in the cubboard. Yu guys wrote that so well. It was hilarious. haha. They are all so funny.

10/10

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Remus is right. What on earth is going on??? huh. lol

I like it.


10/10

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No your wrong.You can't do that .Remus will be crushed too and then Rebecca.This is like some evil kind of merry-go- round. Ahh./

10/10

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what! what. i thought she kissed him back, I'm going to cry now. Oh my gosh.oh my gosh.This is horrid. Arghh *runs off to read next chapter*

p.s 10/10

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