I KNEW IT! I knew he seemed too nice!! What a jerk!!
On another note, I love Malfoy

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Definitely an interesting chapter. I still have a very weird feeling about Mark. He's peculiar.

Another good chapter. Well done. :)
I enjoy how each chapter makes you want to get to the next! Which is where I am currently headed. :)

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This was a very original Draco/Hermoine story. Good job! :)

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No! Not Crookshanks! I love that ugly cat. :(

I like Mark although it feels like there is something.. off about him. Hmm. Maybe I'm just imagining things!! I like that Draco warned her, and I loved the cliffie. What a great place to end the chapter!

I don't think Draco is all that 'evil'.. personally I agree with what he is doing, maybe not his methods but I agree with most of it. The aurors are just upset because they couldn't catch them but a bunch of people that weren't trained to do so could.

Well done, great chapter!

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I'm surprised that Harry didn't make sure it didn't get out about what happened in his office, he's supposed to be incredibly protective over her. Although Ractor does seem pretty tricky.

I wonder how long it will take for her to prove that she was telling the truth and I hope she gives Harry heck for not believing her!

Great chapter :) Well done, can't wait to read the next one. :)

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Well that mix of potions sure made a severe result! I was a little disappointed with how quickly the after-effects were healed. It seemed like something that severe would take a little more effort to fix.

On another note, I enjoyed this chapter, this story is very interesting. You've done a wonderful job with it so far. Well done. :)

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Hermione never learns does she? She always seems to end up at the manor and has to try to escape. I thought she was smarter than that. O.o

I can't wait to see what happens with the explosion. What will Draco's reaction be? Interesting, interesting, interesting!!

Great job!

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Well.. that's what that potion was! I just thought it was a sleeping draught to make her rest while they brought her back to her apartment!

I wonder what she will say to Draco, she does seem incredibly angry. Which I have to admit, I would be too!

Once again, a well written chapter. Detailed and informative. I enjoyed it.

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I really enjoyed this chapter - Draco has shown he cares while outwardly showing nothing. Hermione seems desperate to prove Harry wrong.. which isn't going very well.

I love Twinkle. What an adorable house elf!

I can't wait to see what Hermione does about the hunters!

Great chapter, well done :)

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Wow! That Fynn sure is a manipulitive man! I don't like him.

Draco fell for that a little easily I think, he is still rather egotistical which works for him. I liked his little joke with Hermione, I thought that was funny.

Please of please make Hermione beat that Fynn guy - he sure deserves it!!

Great chapter, well done :)

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Wow. This chapter went really fast! I didn't expect her to break out that quick! I never really pictured Hermione to be the type to sleep with someone in that kind of situation. Then again.. she DID get pretty hammered first!

Draco was incredibly cruel in this chapter, he kind of has that good guy bad guy split personality thing going on! I like it.

This was a great chapter, I enjoyed it! Well done! :)

P.S Whenever I see your chapter title I think of Austin Powers' 'Daddy wasn't there'.. I have no idea why but it is now stuck in my head. :)

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This doesn't seem like a very good situation for Hermione. I like that Draco makes sure nothing happens to those that haven't warrented it though, I thought that was a good touch. I can also definitely seem him leading some sort of group like this, I think he would have pretty good leadership skills until the group tried to overthrow him. Hmm.. I wonder if that would happen in this story? Hehe.

Your description of the room that she was brought to talk to Draco in was very well done. I could see it coming to life as I read. I wish you had of added the same amount of description into the room she's being held captive in.

All in all, a wonderful chapter! On to see who is creeping at her door!! :)

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What an interesting idea, I like the concept. I thought this chapter was pretty well written, I enjoy the idea of Harry being overly protective of her - I think that is very plausible.

I can definitely see Hermione getting frustrated with not being allowed in the field, I for one wouldn't enjoy working so hard in school to sit behind a desk all the time!

I also think it's very.. Hermione-ish to take matters into her own hands, to act criminal to find the hunters. I am very curious to see what happens next!! Great chapter, I really enjoyed it :)

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Wow. This was the first story that I've read by you but now I'm so excited to read more! Well done! I read your author's notes, and I'm not sure how old they are, but I'm sorry about your relationships and your author's status. You are a brilliant writer, and I'm sure you're a great person to boot, so try not to let it get to you. :) Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

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Omg the humor in the beginning of this chapter is brilliant!!! I love draco saying hes gonna kill harry like voldemort never did. Too damn funny lol!!

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that was an amazing story! i love it! the ending was a bit sad because the hunters were disbanded and some of them were killed..i kind of like how loyal they were to draco..i hate the ministry and harry for being unfair...

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Oh, and sorry to bother you with another review. :P This has nothing to do with this chapter specifically, but...

I absolutely adore how sweet Draco is when he gets into a relationship with Hermione. How he blushes when he compliments her, how he's protective and jealous when she's around other men, how he shows his feelings through hugs and kisses rather than words...and his constant care of her, even though I can tell that he gets quite tired of tending to her injuries so frequently. XD But I also liked how you began the story with him slightly hostile toward her even after their sexual encounters...I really liked the one where he thought she was a prostitute and that she actually had the skills of one. XD I also absolutely LOVED the Amortentia bubbles scene, how he had to bring her back by making the better reality. ;) I can't imagine what trying to turn a sleeping person on would be like. :P

And...I LOVE THE BANNER. They look so fierce in it, especially Hermione. I think you could tone down the dark factor a bit for Draco, because that's not his true character in this story, but I still love the design and the coloration and the general technique used. Even if you didn't make it, good job getting it. :D

Anyways, I won't annoy you with another super lengthy review again. :P Once again, this story is fantastic.

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Wow. Uhm...this story has rendered me speechless. It was one of the best pieces I have ever read, and I like that it doesn't revolve around Draco's and Hermione's relationship as much. Instead, it focuses around the action, just like J.K. Rowling does. :)

Your ideas were so imaginative and the plotline was so intricately planned. For example, I actually thought Mark was a pretty nice guy and that it was going to be the age-old scenario where Draco got all jealous and they had to compete for Hermione and then at the final showdown, Draco does something really sappy or heroic and wins her over. But when you made Mark the enemy? I was totally not expecting that, and when Crookshanks died, I was pretty creeped out too.

Backtracking, I really liked the beginning of the story, what with Harry's protectiveness. I think the best part there was how Hermione set the Hunters up to capture her and by then, Draco was already feeling an obligation to keep her with him. I really liked how determined she was, and she kept coming back to Malfoy Manor intentionally or unintentionally, even after her memory was wiped. Starting the sexual stuff then was a nice touch too, because that's a reasonable way for the attraction to blossom. :P

Moving onto Hermione's raid...oh my...that was...quite overwhelming. The spells they were auctioning? So gruesome, and even though I can't see them, I already feel disgusted. The idea of the auction and the origin of the spells was very creative, I don't think I've ever read anything like it. :) I also like how quick-witted Hermione is when her cover is almost blown, and she even manages to cater to the audience through her stress.

Also, I must admit, this story has made me develop a stronger hate for the Ministry of Magic and even Harry. XD I loved the touch of Hermione's nightmare about choosing between her heart and her mind...incorporating the Weasley twins to help her make that decision was definitely effective and very believable, as it was canon and that's their character.

And finally, the ending was slightly abrupt and cheesy, because she just had a near-death experience and the ending recalls a memory that Draco would not have realistically remembered at that period in time...But that's just specifically for this chapter. Overall, the story was absolutely beautiful and I love it to death. I might even try more of your writing! :D

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Yay! They get to be together! :3 By the way, what does TDA mean?

Author's Response: It stands for The Dark Arts; it's a site where artists make graphics for stories, chapters, etc.

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oh my word,poor draco! i almost burst out in tears when i read the chapter..it was realy excellent and a real treat to read. oh and i loved the way you describe the kissing bit,it was so intense

Author's Response: Thank you :) I spent a lot of time trying to put all of the emotion I could into that scene and I'm glad it paid off.

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This is my absolute favorite story. Ever. You should write more novels about them!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've debated it, trust me, but I'm starting a new story now that I'll begin posting soon on my fanfiction dot net page :)

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what!? dropped dead? what was that about?
10/10

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hi! i am reading your story for the first time and i love it! i cant wait to read more ;-)
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it.

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Amazing story! Completely made me procrastinate from my studying - good job! Keep it up :)

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Really good!! But I want more!!! :L .I thought Luna might come into this, I thought she would publish Hermione's story in the Quibbler or something :P 8/10---> only because of the ending was too soon!! Otherwise very good x

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