very intersting just makes you want o read on :)Author's Response: That's good :) I hope you like the rest of it just as much. Report Review
no magik.oh noes poor albus :(Author's Response: yea, i know :( Report Review
dun dun duh
more pelase?Author's Response: lol...hun you got it in three words. :) look out for the next chapter when the queue reopens in January. I will post it in the first few days. I promise.
Ah.I feel so bad for poor Albus.he's not dead though right? RIGHT?!? But I think I can understand where this giving up kids that lose their magic idea is coming from. It would be horrible to be living in a house with two siblings and a father that can perform magic while you are not able to do so.but then how can someone give up their own kid?? Poor Harry, he just can't catch a break.:'( I'm sad now, you really know how to depress a girl.Pleeease don't give up on the story, I love it! And I think you're great! Please update soon, you have no idea how long I've been waiting for this chapter!
LanaAuthor's Response: welll.I cant really say what's going to happen with Albus' future, that would be just silly for me to give away the plot :)
Yea, I got a lot of feedback saying Harry wouldn't give up Albus, as you've said, it is his kid, but if Harry takes his own devoted love for his son and himself out of the picture, he knows deep down it's for the best and for Al to have a much happier and loving life than the one he would have with him, his sister and brother. It's a complicated situation, and one I did feel terrible for putting Harry in, but I had do it. :'( I didn't want to, as Al is my favourite kid, but I had to be one of them, and seeing as James is the master-mind and oldest of the three that can think of what to do when he needs to and Lily is barely on the scene; he was the last one standing.
Oh, I haven't totally given up on the story,it's just I have other stuff to write now so it's not going to be on my mind all the time when it comes to sitting down and spilling out the words.
Awe, I really love you honey. I'm always really anxious when I post up a new chapter and wondering what people think of it and you always make me fell so much better in what I have written. Thank you for being such brilliant support. I probably would've given up on this if it wasn't for your wonderful words. I think their the only reason I'm still writing it; knowing I have someone who still likes it and is waiting for updates. :)
I'll give you a little hint: his fate will be answered in the next chapter. :) Wether good or bad, I'm not saying. tehe. Report Review
Welcome back! Please keep on with the story.
It is so interesting and you never fail to keep me on the edge of my seat.
Poor Albus. He was always my favorite out of all of Harry's children.Author's Response: Awe, cheers. I'm happy to be back :)
I will try my very best to keep writing it. I mean, I'm telling myself that I will keep writing it, because I would hate to leave it hanging after two years of working on it, but my originals are taking over from it, so I have very little time to work on it. I will update, I just don't know when. :) Report Review
So Far brilliant story 10/10. Haven't time to read all the chapters you have written, but have added your story to my favourite story list so that I can find it again when I can. Expect more reviews as I read.
PS Pity Ginny died kind of broke me up abit.
Your fellow wizard
Magicmuggle01Author's Response: Awe, thanks for adding it to your favs. I hope you enjoy the rest of it :)
Yea, I didn't want to kill her, but then there wouldn't be a story. lol.
thanks! Report Review
write more immediately, i beg you to write more!! PLEASEAuthor's Response: tehe...for some odd reason I'm not writing it chapter-by-chapter anymore, but more of scenes and whatever I feel like writing. So I dont know when the next update is, because I want to be two chapters ahead of myself when I update :)
You are so good with cliffhangers.
I hope that isn't a ransom note.
Are you going to do a chapter from the kids' point of view?
It would be interesting to see what James and Albus are thinking at this point. Report Review
Wow this.chaptet was awesome. Sory if i.cant write.well.im on my phone. Im out with my friends at the.pub and am reading and reviewing your story lol. I bet its a ransom note - also I like how.this.story keeps.moving from one problem to the next! Is there.going to be harry/hermione action? I am so excited for the rest of.this! I still.hope.ginny is.alive somehow.Author's Response: haha,sorry for not writing back sooner. :( But you need to know how much each one of your reviews make me sooo happy. Seriously! They always make me smile. :)
Can't believe you actually read my story while being out, that's more than I could have asked from anyone. lol, you're insane.
I really can't say anything about the note, you'll just have to read the next chapter to find out :D I think your one of the few people that like the problems poor Harry keeps stumbling into :p But to answer your question, sadly, no there is, after seeing the movie I'm a harry/hermione shipper, but this story was planned before I saw the movie, so it hasn't got any of them :( wish it did now, but if I changed it it would just seem force or just weird. -sigh-
You're one BRILLIANT reviewer, I always look forward to hearing from you and what you've got to say about the chapter in question :)
omg omg, cliff hanger much
update now, pleaseAuthor's Response: I know...I always seem to end on some sort of hanger.lol. I find it hard not to :P
As always I will update ASAP! :) Report Review
Okay so I just read this story...it started of amazingly and I loved it, but in the latest chapters I have a feeling that you're fighting to stretch the story and you ended up pulling it by the hair. I won't go saying that Ron would never even dream of laying a finger on Hermione or that Hermione would actually stay with him until Harry came to save her, because this is not an actual canon story, so no canon character are expectable. BUT in your story Harry has actually defeat Voldemort, so that's canon, but seriously from there on it's like you created a whole different version of Harry. You're making him react to thing, like his kids gone missing or the big bloke hitting on him, or his time in Azkaban like he's a regular guy, but that's the thing he is not a regular guy. He is a Harry freaking Potter and he had enough guts to stand against Voldemort and say all of those things he did to him and that's not a guy who would need Bruce to save him. Sorry, if I'm harsh it's just that I love Harry Potter and that I thought this story is gonna be amazing, to be frustrated afterwards. It's not such a big deal for me, I'll just go and read another story, but don't you hear what your regular readers are telling you? This is not how Harry is and grieving for Ginny's death is not an excuse, Harry grew up with grief being his second nature.all the more reason to be terrified for his kids as well and not hear to no Hermione no Dean and no anyone and go balistik. Sorry again, I'm only saying what I'm sure the others don't because they know you better.Author's Response: Okay, just to answer your main point, Harry doesn't want to get in more trouble than he's already in and is keeping his mouth shut to get through his stay there and get his children back as soon and smoothly as possible. But when he does get the children then that's when Harry comes back to life, it's when he doesn't care what's going to happen anymore.
I am listening to what my readers are saying, but they don't know what's going to come up while I do, so I know that what I'm writing is the right thing and not what the readers want to read. I know what's right and wrong for the story.
Also, theres a way to talk in a review, without sounding ratty. Report Review
Bloody hell i love this story but can't you make the kids safe and with Harry already jeez, your killing me with it i swear.plz update soon, ill be holding my breath Report Review
No, no, no, no, no.this isn't fair :'( I was so super excited that the kids were coming back that I couldn't actually believe that I was reading those lines...though, to tell you the truth I find it a bit difficult for a five year old and his even younger siblings, one of them a baby I might add, to actually been able to run away and do it so good that a force of Aurors wouldn't be able to find, but whatever...Anyway I don't understand Harry, I mean he's acting too calm for himself, I mean the Harry who run to the Ministry to save Sirius based on a dream and went into the chamber of Secrets to save Ginny from the Basilisk, would hesitate to go out and search for his own kids in fear of publicity and because of what one stupid Auror said? Dunno, I gotta admit I loved the twist with the kids gone missing when we all thought we had a reunion chapter waiting for us, but still I need Harry to overcome the insecurities he may have from Ginny's death and from Azkaban and become the hero we all know him to be. It's just not like him to lay low, when he has proven again and again that he has a stronger backbone than anyone in the Ministry, Auror or not. Anyway, I think i may (just may) have gotten a bit long winded here (again). All in all I love this fanfiction and I love those characters you've created, now I just want Harry to have the guts to finally sort this whole mess out, find his kidd, adopt Luna's kid and live happily ever after. Oh, Hermione too. So you'd better get into writting and posting really soon.
LanaAuthor's Response: Okay, first it's only presumed that James ran off by himself, it's not stated in stone that that's what happened yet. They're only putting all the clues together and this is what they are coming up with.
Harry was on the verge of going, and wasn't listening to the Auror, but really to Hermione when she also pleaded with him not to go. This made him aggitated, and that's why he went up to Luna, to get his mind of it and he knew if he stayed with them downstairs he wouldn't be able to stay put. He's also just out of prison, so he needs to not annoy the ministry more than he already has in such a short space of time.
Don't worry the Harry you know [and love] will come back in time :) He's just needs to find himself again. :P
Thanks! Report Review
I like this story and Harry's desperation in prison was very believable. Although your Harry is a bit spineless. His kids are missing and some junior auror asks to keep low profile. Why would he go with it? Why so much trust in Dean? Why not go public?Author's Response: I'm glad you liked when Harry was in prison. thanks :)
Now to answer what you said about Harry being spinelss, first of all, Hermione was the one that persuaded him to stay, if she hadn't asked him to; Harry would have gone. So it hasn't got anything to do with Dean, but with Hermione. Throughout this chapter he's on the point of leaving, it's why he left them in the kitchen and went to talk to Luna, to try and keep himself calm, and because he's just after coming out of Azkaban and hasn't had a proper night's sleep in days, he's not so tough.
why do i have a funny feeling its from ron saying he took the kids or somthingAuthor's Response: What, and hold them as hostages until Hermione comes back to him?? LOL, that would be funny, and a bit mean. :) Report Review
Yay! Harry is out of prison. Can't wait to see the chapter where he is reunited with his children; especially Lily.
Keep it up. Great story!Author's Response: I know!! yay!! It'll be out soon :) Report Review
I have read all 25 chapters and was very impressed with your story. I hve read a lot of fan fic and this is very different from any I have read. I look forward to your next chapters and I'm dying to know who killed Jinny and what Ron has to do with it.Author's Response: oh my! thank you!
Seriously, your review just made my day. :) I will update as soon as possible. Thank you so much for the nice comment. Report Review
AHMG amaze (:
please please update soon
i luff it xDAuthor's Response: hehe, hello again.
As always I will try my best to quick with it. :D Report Review
YAY! I cannot believe that Harry is FINALLY out! While I was reading the new chapter I was like yeah right, something it's gonna go wrong definitely.but it didn't! Yay! Though I'm pretty sure that Harry's woes are far from over at least he'll get his kids back! Please please update this weekend as you said, I just want them to get together! Btw I was re-reading your previous chapters the other day and I wanted to ask you smth..in the chapter Home Sweet Home?, you say that Lilly acts a bit weird, like looking around at nothing and laughing and such things, is that something that has been answered or I'll have to wait to see what's up? Anyway, please post soon oh and please make Albus be okay and don't lose his magic!
LanaAuthor's Response: Hey!
Yea, I was in such a good mood while writing this chapter. It was a nice change to not have something really sad or bad to happen to him. :) I will try my best to update at the weekend, the next chapter is written, it just needs a bit of editing.
Awe.I'm chuffed that you would take the extra time to re-read something I wrote. I'm happy you like it so much to do so.
Oh, and your question about Lily, the answer is nope, I haven't answered it yet, but it will be :) I'm delighted that you picked up on that little detail.
Cheers darling for another lovely review!.
Next Chapter please. His kids are coming home! yay! great chapter :)
AmazingAuthor's Response: Next chapter should be up by the weekend or early next week :D
.yep, they're coming home.
Awe, thanks for the lovely score. Report Review
This was really wonderful! It was kind of like a summary of what had happened so far, I liked that. I'm so looking forward to the reunion with the kids. Thanks for the thank you at the start of the chapter!Author's Response: I didn't even think of this chapter like a summary...wow! You're right. Oo I'm hoping to update again this weekend, -crosses fingers-
Oh, and thank you for making the siggy for me :) Still haven't gotten over it.xx
next chapter please i just have one thing say though
why you have leave us with serach a mean cliffy :'(Author's Response: I know :( but I had originally finished it on an even meaner cliffy, but I took pity and I couldn't finish the chapter with it, so voila! It's the one that it was left with :) Report Review
I was tearing up while reading all these chapters! Amazing job!! One of the best fanfics I have read so far!!
Keep it up!!Author's Response: .I'm speechless.
Thank you so much for saying such a nice thing. -hugs- I'm glad you liked it so far :) Report Review
Next chapter please! I really quite enjoyed this chapter and i can't wait to see if Harry gets out. But what's happened with Albus and his magic and when will Harry see his kids again ? :) Great chapter!
10/10Author's Response: Ahh!!
You've just posted the 300th review :D and I'm super happy that it's from a loyal reviewer.
You'll just have to wait for the following chapters. But it wont be without a few little bumps in the road. =)
thank you so much!!
very good start... very sad, I can't wait to read moreAuthor's Response: thanks.
I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapter that are currently up. :) Report Review
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