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Review #26, by Maelody Meeting the family

4th March 2014:
Hey! Sorry it took a bit to get this read and reviewed! I read it yesterday but got really sleepy afterword and had to sleep! Other than that, blackout has had me going everywhere haha.

I worry so much about Freya! I can tell she's just not feeling this. You're foreshadowing, I just know you are! I'm so worried! With the whole talk of never leaving the country and such, I can't help but feel that that's exactly what she does. Either that, or she goes to Hogwarts without him knowing, forcing him to stay behind and not get to go to school, because he wouldn't want to put that sort of burden on his parents. :( Louis! I love you so! Just leave Freya and join Horatio and I forever and ever! We'll raise Samantha and teach her to speak wolf! :D

Of course Bill wouldn't want to pass up Sammy! Such a proud grand daddy! :D And Molly! Just... SQUEA! You wrote her so perfectly! Her first great grand child! She must feel old haha ;).

Freya is still caught up in just being with Louis. I understand depression after giving birth, but it doesn't seem like she's willing to accept help. She just wants her boyfriend. I feel bad for being angry at her, and I know it's a real thing, and real people go through it, but it's sad for sure. :( At least Samantha will have Daddy Louis, Momma Horation/Victoire/Dominique, Aunty Molly, Uncle James (it's cool you connect all your stories, by the way! I've always wanted to do something like that, but I have too many stories now xD), and grandpa Bill and great nana Weasley! Heck! Samantha will be the most loved baby ever! Louis doesn't have anything to worry about! Except, you know, Freya realizing this too and ditching him with her. :( I just really get that feeling she's going to do that to him! :'(

As always, this was wonderful, and you're just amazing, mah dear! :) I'm so sad and yet excited to see the end of this! A sequel will definitely be awesome, too! :D Really can't wait to read what you have in store for the next chapter! :D

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Review #27, by potterfan310 Meeting the family

28th February 2014:
I just don't know what it is, but Freya irks me (is that even a word?) I do feel sorry for her and at times she really does need a hug but other I just want to shake her and tell her this is now her reality and for her to snap out of it.

Aww Molly is great! I love her and I think you've got her characterisation spot on! All I can say is aw that has got to be the sweetest thing, Molly and Arthur with baby Samantha. ♥

OH MY GOD, WHAT!! Is this linked to Abigail and Potter Boy?? (I did see the A/N at the end, eventually after I stopped freaking out) because I think my jaw just dropped and I just freaked out a little. Aww it makes me sad they split but very happy they got together because it means I can read it from Abigail's POV!

James does still have feelings for her just like he did from the very start. I still don't think I'm processing this information because SQUEEE they did get together.

And now I'm just getting distracted by that but onwards;

No, no, no. My bad feeling is back (once again) Louis saying he would feel like a part of him would be missing if Freya moved to another country has made me think. I'm either reading between the lines or something but I mean what if she does? Are her parents secretly planning to take her away?? I have so many theories it's killing me.

"I hope you'll always feel like that."

"I will, Freya. There's nothing you can do to make me stop loving you." He told her, kissing the side of her head.

That sentence is going to be the death of me, OH MY GOD FREYA YOU CAN'T JUST SAY THAT AND NOT EXPLAIN! It's this very sentence which worries me so, so much.

I am going to burst with excitement/nervous that is to come with every chapter.

I love, love this and I can't wait for the next one!
Soph x

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Review #28, by Maelody Koukla

10th February 2014:
OMG! 8 chapters left? A sequel? I can't wait!

Again, can I just awe at Uncle Horatio and Molly? In all, he has to be my favorite reaction and affection! My favorite character! Can I have him to keep forever? I love him! :3

Why do I have this sinking suspicion that Freya isn't really in her room sleeping? Idk why, but I feel she's left. Maybe it's cause I don't trust her with the whole new baby bit. But how sad that would be for Louis! Louisio to the rescue!! :D

Samantha! I wanna see the baby! I love babies! Baby baby baby! :3 I bet she's the cutest little girl ever. She's gotta be, like, one eighth Veela, so she's gotta be the best!

Bill is the most attached? How sweet! :D Papa Weasley is the bestest! I want to be a Weasley!

I'm so glad to be caught up now! I totally can't wait for updates now! And for a sequel! You've stayed so committed and done so well! This story is amazing, and you're awesome for writing it! :D it's so good to be caught up with everyone else! I love everything. Mainly and mostly Horatio, but everything nonetheless ;)

Can't wait until the next update! It'll suck having to actually wait now! Haha but I can do it.


Author's Response: Yep, only 8 chapters left of this one, which are all planned out so just need me to write them. I'm so excited for the Sequel too! So I hope that you love it!

Yes you can awe at Uncle Horatio and Molly. :D You can keep him forever! :D Horatio is so awesome, I love him. :D

She is in her room sleeping, don't worry, she's just tired. Louisio to the rescue definitely!

Haha, she's Louis's baby, of course she's cute! :D and like you said she's 1/8 Veela, so she has got to be the best.

Bill is the most attatched, she shall be very spoilt by him. I want to be a Weasley too!

I'm so glad that you've caught up too! I have honestly loved getting your reviews! It's made me so happy! And I couldn't not finish this story, I really enjoy writing it and I have so many ideas for the sequel.

Thank you so so much for reading and reviewing all of the chapters, you seriously have made my whole life! I'm so happy and I have loved reading every single one of your reviews! :D

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Review #29, by Maelody What kind of dad will you be?

10th February 2014:
Besides the depression Freya seems to be going through, I'm loving this chapter! The conversation on wha sort of dad Louis will be was the best. Horatio never stops amazing me. :3

Though, how come he couldn't stay longer than visiting hours? I figured that since he is the daddy, and the fact Sam was early, he'd get the right to stay. My friend's husband did with my godson. Horatio, on the other hand, was sweet for staying to take Louis home! He's the best friend ever for everyone!

Ok, one last chapter and I'm caught up! See you in just a few!

Author's Response: Poor Freya, she has a lot of emotions running through her, which she isn't dealing with very well at the moment.

I know where I am, they don't have enough room for fathers to stay in the hospital with them, especially if they get moved to a ward with the other mothers. So I was just basing it off of that. :D

Horatio is totally the best friend that Louis could ever have!

Thank you for reading and reviewing! You're the best!

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Review #30, by Maelody Next day delivery

10th February 2014:
She had Samantha! She had the baby! Oh my goodness! She did so great! And she apologized, and everything was great! Awww! I'm happy again! And Horatio and Molly kissed! Such a lovely chapter! But her parents weren't there! D: how sad!

I got really nervous when he said the room was quiet, but seeing as how he said Freya was well, I grew less worried haha. Ah! I'm just so happy! I have to move on now! I'm so almost caught up, too! :D

Author's Response: YES!!! SHE HAD THE BABY! :D Happiness all around! And she did apologise! And Horatio and Molly kissed! That one was planned for a while now. :P That was always going to be when they first kissed, hehe.

Nope, sadly her parents weren't there to see her.

I'm so happy that you're happy! :D

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Review #31, by Maelody Anger

10th February 2014:
Oh, Freya! You upset my Horatio! If I didn't have a thing against you before, now I do! No one hurts my Horatio!

Spoiled little girl -.- and to think, poor Louis doesn't know about the money her parents ARE sending. Tired or not, Louis had a right to snap at her. Being pregnant does not give you liberty to say whatever you want. Poor Molly! I like her blanket! :(

Anger is certainly the feeling I got from this chapter. Anger toward Freya. Gr.

Otherwise, you did a great job portraying the emotions in this chapter! I read it during my work break. Now that I'm done with my workout, I can read to the end! :D

Author's Response: There's a lot of angry feelings towards Freya for hurting poor Horatio, it made me angry at her too. I am particularly fond of Horatio.

Yes, she is a very spoiled girl, poor Louis not knowing about the money though. She's very sneaky.

Louis had been keeping his feelings bottled up very well, so he was entitled to snap, and you're right, she doesn't have the right to do whatever she wants.

I like her blanket too! Freya needed to be more grateful.

Haha I had a lot of anger towards her too in this chapter.

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you're enjoying this story so much. :D

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Review #32, by Maelody The one where Horatio makes Freya cry

10th February 2014:
I know it's probably well past your birthday now, but can I have a stale piece that is left ? :D

So I couldn't sleep with my phone right next to me and your story being brought up on it. So here I am. Again.

Still not really liking Freya's attitude. Actually, it's starting to sound like she's in this entirely for Louis. She doesn't like his friends, she feels like a burden to his family, she's keeping a secret from him to keep him happy and avoiding her parents, and she can't say she loves him. I think she needs a wake up call. One from my beloved Horatio.

Haha, sorry, but all I could think about Nikolos having a thing for Russians is that he must be really enjoying the Olympics right now xD. But it's good that they must be getting somewhat along.

So either Horatio is in denial of his feelings, or he really doesn't technically want to like anyone. OR! Maybe my love for Louisio is real and he's holding out for Louis!? I like that plan! :3

Vic is so sweet! I swear, I could only wish to be the big sis she is. She would be a great role model for any family member!

Ok, well I think I'll keep reading til I'm either caught up or too exhausted! See you when I see you! :)

Author's Response: It just so happens that I saved some slices! *gives cake*

Haha I hope you didn't stay up too late and get tired, but thank you for continuing to read and review! :D I appreciate it.

Freya is very Louis orientated, she just wants to be around Louis and nothing more at the moment. She definitely needs a wake up call, maybe Horatio will make her see how selfish she's being?

Haha, that is a very lucky coincidence! He is definitely enjoying the Olympics! :P Yes, Horatio and Nikolos are actually talking to each other, which is very good for them. No fights yet.

Ah, Horatio is in denial definitely but he can't let go of his love for Louis! :D LOUISIO 5EVA! :D I like that plan too.

Yes! She really would be! I wanted her to be a lot different to how she's normally portrayed in stories, she loves her siblings.

Thank you so much for all of your amazing reviews! :D

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Review #33, by Maelody Final scan

10th February 2014:
OK, I had to do one more just to leave it off even!

Oh no! I knew she wasn't into this! And she even resents Louis a little! How sad! :( Though I figured she was just into it for him.

So her parents are writing her and giving her money? I guess they're not that bad, but I don't see why she wouldn't return to them. Especially since she can't even mutter the words "I love you, too" to Louis anymore.

The scan was really cool! I loved Louis' excitement! That's what I was like when I saw my godson's final scan (when I could actually tell he was looking like a human baby xD). So cute!

Horatio is back! Yay! And he knows how to juggle! Double bonus!

What's the big deal with the Turner guy? Sheesh, those girls and their crushes on famous people. And how funny that Horatio gets stuck having to help out anyway! I love that kid. Seriously. Mabe I should start shipping Maecio! Nah. I'd miss my Louisio too much! :3

OK, now I'm going to bed. I'll continue on when I get home from work! Hopefully I'll be caught up today! Whoo! :D


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Review #34, by Maelody Preparing

10th February 2014:
Awww! They've come up with a name! I'm so excited! It's a little weird saying it together, but I think that's just cause I don't know many people with the middle name being full on Kimberly. Samantha Kimberly Weasley though! How cute! :D I can't wait!

It's so sad to see that Freya still isn't into this whole thing. I just wish that some part of her would realize she decided to be with the man she loves and have the baby with him, but sometimes it feels like she just wants to be with Louis, and forget the whole baby fact. I get where she's coming from though, it's just sad. Like, I wish she'd realize that she can't turn back, and what is done is done. Everyone loves her, and they've super accepted her! It's also sad though that she's not really ever happy with Louis. As we've learned from Horatio in previous chapters, she's not a generally happy person. That sucks!

Speaking of Horatio, I miss him! And Molly! When is Louis going to invite them over to make them get together? Even if Molly doesn't come, at least I can dive into my full Louisio daydream! :D

Author's Response: Yep, they've come up with a name! :D Haha it does sound a bit weird doesn't it? I've never noticed it before.

Oh, Freya, she is a very strange character, just when you think she might be alright and along the same lines as Louis, she does something that makes you think differently.

Yes! She does need to realise what's done is done! She's just not a very happy person in any situation I think? Poor Louis.

Awww Horatio will be back soon! He can never stay away from Louis for long. Haha Louisio is so going to happen!

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Review #35, by Maelody Going home

10th February 2014:
Ooooh! They're going to do a no-no! ;) Well, at least they can't do much more than what they've already done haha.

So it sounds to me that whatever happened between Dom, Kieron (is that how it was spelled?) and Nikolos happened on a drunk night. I'm sort of playing it out in my head already. I'll have to wait and see if I am right.

Alyssa is cute, and I love the relationship she has with both brothers. It's good to know that Nik is trying with one of his siblings at least. I mean, I know he is trying with Horatio, but some things can be just too late.

Awww, Molly and Horatio on the train was just too cute! And poor Steven! He just got totally friend-zoned! Either that, or they're secretly dating. I wonder where they snuck off to. Maybe to have a good snog?

Can't wait to read more! Sorry that these reviews are so short! I just want to make sure I let you know everything that is just awesome, but I also want to catch up as quickly as I can! I'm addicted! :D

Author's Response: Haha yes, yes they are.

Ah, Kieron, Nik and Dom are complicated definitely, but Nikolos will talk about it soon and tell Horatio and Louis what is going on between them all.

Alyssa is so cute! Her brother love and protect her a lot, so they won't ever let their fights with each other be seen that much in front of Alyssa. Horatio and Nikolos clash a lot and Horatio can't forgive Nikolos for some of the things that have happened in the past, which shall be explained.

Horatio and Molly are the cutest! I love them! :D Haha oh Steven! Steven and Lucy are close friends, possibly more. :P

Your reviews are pure awesomeness! They make me so happy! :D I'm so glad that you're addicted to this story. :D

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Review #36, by Maelody Sleepless

10th February 2014:
Awww! See, I really think Louisio should be a thing! I'm shipping them so hard right now! That's weird, too, cause I don't normally do that sort of thing.

I don't like Leanne. And the fact Albus didn't really say anything to stick up for his cousin sort of upset me. They must not be terribly close. Though I feel his exhaustion pain. I do that to myself all the time. It's an awful idea to sit outside, too! You sleep no matter where you are and then BOOM insta-sunburn! Haha

Are those creatures real in the books? I don't remember them, but they sound so cute! I imagine them being sloth-like, but fluffier and maybe different colors.

I don't like Port either.

Yay Hagrid for jumping in! :D

I like the tid-bits we learn in your writing without having to be downright told. Like how Nikolos must be incredibly smart. I really want to know more about him. I don't think Horatio is giving him the chance he deserves.

OK, moving on! You're doing so great! I'm so hooked! :D

Author's Response: I ship Horatio/Louis so much too! They would be a perfect couple and you have no idea how hard it is to not put them together! Maybe one day? (in my mind)

Oh Leanne, she isn't that nice a person. And Albus isn't that great a person in this either, they're not that close, but Albus is only really close with Fred. (I'm going to write about them in a different story)

Haha Poor Louis getting sunburn on his face.

Yes! They are! I found them in fantastic beasts and where to find them, I thought that they sounded awesome! That's how I imagine them too! *highfives*

I hate Port!

Hagrid will always stick up for the Potters/Weasley families.

Aww I'm so glad that you like those, Nikolos is quite smart, he just doesn't use it how he should, he uses it in ways that will get him in trouble. Horatio and Nikolos have a lot of issues that need sorting out.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :D

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Review #37, by Maelody The trouble with letters

10th February 2014:
I laughed so hard at Horatio! Oh my goodness! "That bird was sent to kill!" Best thing ever! Easily my favorite character in any fan fiction ever ;).

Oh no! Freya sent a sad letter! I can see where she is coming from, but if she's beginning to think that her parents are right, then I really do feel that she's thinking for them more than she is for herself! I hope Louis can get to her before she has anything else to say abou tit!

So Nikolos has a job at Gringots? Doing what? Guarding something underground? I agree with the boys. He's been in Azkaban. I'm sure the've done background checks, though. Something else is going on there. Heck, Bill was probably the one who hired him!

OK, moving on now! :)

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Review #38, by Maelody The name game

10th February 2014:
Yay me for already knowing the Greek words! :D

Molly and Horatio were just too cute in this chapter! I think I shall call them. Moltio! Not the best, but I like it ;). Anyway, the cooking, future kid name, and the many good dinners in the future were just all too cute!

I wonder why Horatio doesn't like quidditch? Or was that mentioned a long time ago and I've forgotten? If so, could you please re-enlighten me? :)

Samantha Weasley. I like that! Simple, but very fitting.

I'm worried about Freya. She seems really complain-y. I know pregnant women have discomfort and such, but she seems to be pretty unhappy. And the fact she doesn't want to talk about names. It really makes me think more and more that Louis definitely will be doing this on his own.

I think this is one of my favorite chapters so far! :) This story is getting more and more cute/funny the more it goes! I'm having so much fun reading and reviewing it! You're doing a great job!

Time to keep on a goin'!


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Review #39, by Maelody Apparation lessons

10th February 2014:
I think I forgot to review the last chapter. Oops! Well, really, I just feel bad for the relationship between Horatio and his brother. And to get in a fight because Nikolos just wanted to tell him about a new job? That's not letter worthy? Hmmm. Something tells me Horatio needs to give him another chance.

I like Rob. He seems like a pretty cool dude. And pretty honest. It's funny that technically the school year is almost over and were just now meeting him though ;).

Oh dear! Molly lost her foot! And Lucy has a close male friend! No more Horacy :(.

Alright! Moving on! :)

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Review #40, by Harry and Ginny Koukla

9th February 2014:
aww they are sooo cute!!! everyone looking after baby Samantha and Louis commenting on Horatio and Molly's relationship was adorable! can't wait to read more!^_^


Harry and Ginny

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Review #41, by Maelody Missing you

9th February 2014:
"Horatio, stop trying to lick my face!"

Best line ever! This is why I LOVE Lousio! It's just like my best friend and I! Seriously. I lick her face all the time. I get the same reaction! xD Yay for Horatio! (By the way, I've totally completely warmed up to the names now! :))

Lucy and Molly as twins, eh? I probably read this way earlier on in the story, and probably commented on it then, too, but I don't remember. I just sort of jumped back in where I left. Anyway, that's cool. I've read a few stories where they're twins, and it's kind of cool that Percy would be the one who winds up with twins. It definitely runs in the family.

I like Lucy. Lucy seems pretty spazzy! I think she definitely wants to see Molly and Horatio together, but at this rate, I sort of would love to see her with him. You know, a little Horacy?

OK, I promise to stop ship mixing your characters now! :) I'll move on like a good girl! :)

Great job so far, by the way! :) I'm still totally hooked!


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Review #42, by Maelody Getting back to normality

9th February 2014:
Aw! Freya is at his house! As awesome as that is, and relieving that she's left her dad, it's sad there had to be a fallout! And on the first day back? Phew! Good thing Flitwick is a nice guy! (Hopefully in this case, too!)

I thought the Molly/Horatio bit was cute. I hadn't even realized he was looking at anyone. I'm sort of really in love with Lousio haha! But I guess we can't all have what we want ;).

Alright! Moving onward! :) Can't wait to catch up! (I've got a ways to go!)


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Review #43, by Maelody Standing up for what you believe in

5th February 2014:
I'm back! And wow did I miss this story! I still love everyone! If even more if that's possible! :D Arthur, oh my goodness, was so wonderful. That gift, and the story behind it, I was in awe!

Am I even making proper sentences right now?

Goodness I missed reading this! Now I'm back and I have lots of catching up to do! :3

As for Ted, I sort of see where he's trying to get at, but I love what Louis shot back at him with, "Do you even know what's in your future?" That was just so perfect! Aaaah!

Anyway, I'm done squeeing now. I have to catch up! Forgive me if my reviews turn out choppy and whatnot, or sporadic. I just want to catch up quickly! :)


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Review #44, by potterfan310 Koukla

4th February 2014:
Aww yay baby Samantha's home!

Dom is such a proud auntie! I love the Weasley-Delacour family all in the kitchen with the baby, such a sweet moment. ♥

Embarrassing baby pictures are the worst, poor Louis. But I really hope they so them to Freya, or maybe Horatio as he's more likely the have the most fun with them :p

Horatio is just perfect! I love that he's gone so overboard and is nearly as excited as Louis. Plus Horatio and Molly, eek!! ♥ He's so cute as well, "You are my Koukla and Uncle Horatio loves you very much" - ASDFGHJKL ♥♥ so much cuteness!

Haha agreeing with Molly, that certainly is the best time to pass babies back :)

Eight chapters!?! What? Ahh so much could happen between then, both good and bad (please not bad, please not bad). Sequel, YAY :D I can't wait ♥

So much fluff, so much cuteness (And not just because of the baby :p)

Can't wait for the next one.
Soph ♥

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Review #45, by Harry and Ginny What kind of dad will you be?

18th January 2014:
sorry I took so long to review! *hides* aww I loved this chapter! it was sweet how they all were acting with Samantha and I'm curious to see what was Freya going to say to Louis... maybe that her parents are making her leaving Louis or something? can't wait to read the next chapter!^_^


Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: That's perfectly fine hun! *hugs* Take all the time you need. :D

They all love Samantha, none of them want to be away from her. Freya however is going through a lot of emotions right now.

Next chapter is up :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #46, by HufflePuff_Blitz What kind of dad will you be?

11th January 2014:
Fantastic! I love how happy Louis is. keep being awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you :D I love when Louis is happy, awww you keep being awesome as well!

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Review #47, by Elin Too late to say sorry

6th January 2014:
*fandom screeching*
this is just fabulous- well done!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much! :D

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Review #48, by theblacksisters Maybe you should have waited?

4th January 2014:
Thanks for cookies! *takes a bite*
Anyway, I don't read teen pregnancy a lot, but I've never seen it done in the father's perspective. I think that counts as an original cliche-don't you?

Author's Response: I'm glad that you like the cookies :D

I hope that you enjoyed reading this, I was hoping to have this more original and have it from the fathers perspective. :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #49, by potterfan310 What kind of dad will you be?

4th January 2014:
Aww poor Freya *Hugs to her* I feel so bad for her that her parents haven't turned up.

Horatio is one of my favourties and he truly is a best friend! I love that he made sure Molly was home before coming back for Louis, he's such a good person.

AHHH!! MOLLY AND HORATIO!!! YAY ♥ Horolly? Matio? Hmm neither sounds right, but yay ♥

Louis and Horatio are just perfect and I love them together, they have such a bromance going on. They balance each other out as well I think, Louis being calm and responsible, Horatio being mad and a little irresponsible.

Aww no, I've got a bad feeling again. Not sure whether Freya's still tired or whether she's going to have the baby blues? Either way I'm pretty sure the title is going to come into play soon, maybe?

Aww the ending is just perfect, as their such a cute little family.But I can't help wonder what Freya was going to say, maybe her parents have said something to her? So many curious thoughts! I can't wait to find out and read on!

Loved it ♥

Sophie :)

Author's Response: She does needs hugs *hugs her too* she does go through a lot with her parents.

You have made my day saying how much you like Horatio, he is honestly my favourite character to write and I love him so much! I want to keep him. And he cares a lot about Molly and Louis, he has a lot of love in his heart. :D

YES!!! MOlly and Horatio has finally happened!! Mmmm Horolly, Matio... we'll figure out a name for them. Molio? Haha.

I'm so happy that you love their bromance, I honestly love writing that and sometimes I'm worried it's just turning into a giant Louis/Horatio bromance story. Haha :D They do balance each other out and I think that if Louis didn't have Horatio or the other way around they wouldn't be the people that they are.

Aw *hugs* It's okay, Freya is going through some feelings, and as for the title coming into play soon? There's only 8/9 chapters left of this story so possibly? :P

Yep they're such a cute family, and you have so many thoughts! I love it :D

More shall be up soon! I just need to write it but I can say that it's entirely planned out. :D

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Review #50, by Harry and Ginny Next day delivery

13th November 2013:
aww I loved this chapter! it would be interesting to see Freya's parents going to visit her in the hospital and apologizing for how they acted with her! can't wait to read more!^_^


Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you loved it! As for her parents? We'll see :P

Next chapter is being written now :D

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