wow! great chapter hun! loved how Louis stood up to Ted and that Arthur made a cot and that it was given to Louis! it would be interesting if Freya showed up at Louis' house saying that she had been kicked out because she chose to be with Louis, and that Freya's parents could regret how they acted towards this pregnancy and to what Freya and Louis had done... can't wait to read more!^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thank you my lovely! Louis definately stood up to Ted, he's not going to let him bully him into a decision.
Arthur is the best isn't he? :D
Ahh Freya turning up? Who knows? :D You'll find out soon hehe.
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You go, Louis! Stand your ground, be brave. Don't worry, your tag team is coming to punch his face, ring and all! Yeah, made sure of it! I love Louis so much more, every time I read. He's showing that he's mature and adult and can handle this responsibility with his family.
Dom cried! That's was sweet. I wanted to join the hug. Heck, I'll join anyway... *hugs*
That cot is adorable. I'm so glad Louis got to see it and have it and his little girl will love it. I cannot wait for her to be born and for Louis to have his family. It'll be adorable and amazing and... There isn't enough adjectives in the world to describe the cuteness.
Awesome chapter. Cannot wait for more.
Sam.Author's Response: Louis is definitely standing his ground! He won't have Ted telling him what he can and can't do.
Oh yes the tag team will so be there!! Go Horatio and Bill!!
Yep Dom cried :D She's so cute bless her! :D
I love the cot idea, I just had to have it in there. It would make sense that Arthur would build one for someone. :D
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OHMYGOD!!! YAY! :D
Bless Louis for taking the bull by the horns and deciding to go to Freya's despite knowing her dad may be there and not let him see her.
I'm so, so, so glad that Louis got to see Freya! I'm so happy for him right now.
N'awww, so much Louis/Freya I can't handle the cuteness and their having a baby girl!! *Insert me awwing about a zillion times here*
Shame her dad had to ruin the moment, It'll be interesting to see what happens next since Louis has been caught. I hope he allows Louis to be a part of Freya and his daughter's life.
I can't wait for the next chapter and fore more Louis/Freya action!!
Soph xx :DAuthor's Response: Louis really wanted to see Freya, so he didn't care what he would face in going to see her.
Aww Louis and Freya are cute together, but there's a lot of issues at the moment that they need to sort out, which her father won't let them do. And yep a little girl :D
Her dad is not a nice person at all! The next chapter is up my lovely! So I hope that you like it.
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loved this chapter! now I wonder if Louis will stand up to Ted and say that he wants to be there for Freya... and I wonder if Freya will have to choose staying with Louis, in case her parents kick her out... anyway, I can't wait to read next chapter to see what happens!^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: :D Thank you hun!
Louis is finally getting brave enough to stand up for what he believes in and what he wants, so he's not going to take Ted kicking him out very lightly.
And with Freya... well that would be telling :D
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Kieron! You mentioned Kieron! I'm so glad you've added him to this story. :D
Vic and Dom are just so lovely, even giving their niece Dom's room. My siblings would never do a thing like that for one of us. I love that Vic's the Quidditch obsessed one in the family. It's awesome to see.
Aww, he's smiled seeing the scan. That was just adorable. I really wanted to hug him right then.
This chapter was amazing. I loved it. :)
Sam.Author's Response: I had to mention Kieron, he is so awesomely awesome!
Vic and Dom are like the perfect sisters, if that was me, I'd tell my brother to use his own room and stop taking mine haha.
I wanted to have a different person obsessed with Quidditch in the family so I chose fashion and make up obsessed Vic :D
Yep he's being all cute and I just want to hug and squish him!
You're amazing Sam!! :D Thanks for reading and reviewing :D Report Review
I love this story.
It's great to read a pregnancy story from the side of the father for a change, very original.
I really can't wait to read what happens next.Author's Response: Yay!! I'm so happy that you love this story :D
Thank you for saying that it is an original idea, I've never seen a story from the point of view of the father so I'm glad that you like it.
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N'aww this chapter is so adorable. I love that his family are so supportive!!
Louis and Horatio = awesome bromance! :D
Louis, Vic and Dom = cuteness overload, so adorable. I love that they're willing to share so that Freya and the baby can have a room and stay. ASDFGHJKL!! I love them so much. If Freya's parents do kick her out at least shelll have somewhere to stay .
Can't wait to see more progress on the Freya front. I really hope she and the baby will use the room at somepoint :)
Soph xxAuthor's Response: Louis's family are very supportive, they're the best family :D
Ah yes Louis and Horatio do have a good bromance. They're very good for each other.
I'm so glad that you like Louis, Vic and Dom, they're such good brothers and sisters. Aww :D I'm so glad that you love them :D
I hope you continue reading to find out more :D All of your questions will be answered.
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I'm glad that Louis' family is being supportive of his situation, though I wish that Freya's father would let Louis see his daughter so they could discuss how things will go... though I wonder if Freya's parents will kick her out if she chooses to stay with Louis at his house. can't wait to read the next chapter!^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Louis has the best supportive family ever, they're all so good to him and all talk to each other, which is good. Unlike Freya's family.
I'm so glad that you liked this chapter.
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OMG. Louis' family are so sweet, especially his sisters. I just wanted to join in their group hug, then discreetly push them away so it was just me and Louis. ;)
I know I say this often, but I really hope Louis gets to be a father, even if Freya is out of the picture. I just want the baby to have that room now that Vic and Dom have suggested it.
I really can't wait for more now. I'm just so excited to see how things progress. :D
P.S. Thank you for the shout out and for the compliment about my stories. :)Author's Response: Aren't the Weasleys like the best family ever! :p I think that we should definitely join the group hug, don't worry I'll distract the others so that you can have Louis all to yourself :p
Aww he'll get his chance, don't you worry. Louis is not going to let his baby get away from him without a fight.
Your stories are awesome!! I love them so much, so you are very welcome for the shoutout and compliment :D
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Loved it. You need to update faster, please.Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try and update it as fast as I can :D Report Review
Hey there - thanks for re-requesting, as I love this story so much! I wish I could've gotten around to reading more sooner, but I just don't seem to have as much time as I'd like for reading and reviewing fanfiction. Sob.
Anyway, this chapter was everything I was hoping it would be. I think Freya and Louis' parents reactions were absolutely perfect, and I liked the contrast between them, too. Though it was clear Bill and Fleur still disapproved of what had happened, they weren't outright horrible and at least showed support for their son, which was great to see. I also want to say that I loved your characterization of Fleur in this. She was definitely a lot more mature, sophisticated and grown up than she was in the books but there is definitely something of young Fleur still there, too, which is cool to see.
Oooh, Freya's parents, especially her father, are not particularly pleasant people, are they? In saying that, I would definitely like to know more about them. Why does her father act the way he does? And why doesn't her mother stand up for her? What does she really think? Though I don't really like her parents at this stage, I definitely think they add a very interesting dynamic towards the story - it is definitely important that there is some strong antagonism towards the pregnancy.
I actually like the fact that Freya is going to have to be homeschooled. Not because I want she and Louis to be apart (they are so cute together) but because it would make absolutely no sense for a pregnant teenager to stay at Hogwarts, and you have definitely covered that in this chapter, so good on you! I also loved Flitwick in this chapter. He was a little bit awkward, which I found quite amusing.
Anyway, this was another awesome chapter - nice work!
Courtney:)Author's Response: I'm glad that you're liking the story so much :D That's okay hun about not having time.
I'm glad that it's everything you wanted it to be, and that you like Bill and Fleur, Ted and Diane's reactions. Bill and Fleur are definately the best parents and being supportive unlike Freya's parents.
Yay, so happy that you like my Fleur, I was worried that I wasn't going to pull it off and people would find her too non canon.
Yeah they're not nice people, I'm not a fan of Ted, I think that he just wants what's best for his daughter, but only thinks he can get it from threats and being angry and controlling. I'll have to dig deeper into the whole Ted thing and explain him more :D
I'm glad that you like that she's going to be homeschooled, it didn't make sense to me to have her staying at Hogwarts as I thought it would be too difficult for her to be there. But it is sad that she's not with Louis and her friends.
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I feel bad for Freya because her parents aren't letting her seeing Louis so they can talk about the baby. and I would like to see Louis confronting Freya's dad so he could prove to him that he'll always be there for Freya! can't wait to read more!^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Freya has very mean parents, they're going to keep acting this way for a while now. A confrontation between Ted and Louis? That might be a possibility :p
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Ohmygod!! Freya's letter!! All the feels.
I really hate Freya's dad for making her think like that. And I hope to god she doesn't choose adoption, but somehow I can see her either listening to her father or just leaving the baby on Louis' doorstep and then her parents whisking her far, far away.
If Louis does have to raise the baby then Horatio can definitely be mummy. He'd be great :)
This chapter is just perfect! and I LOVE it!!
Can't wait for the next one
Soph xAuthor's Response: It's so sad!
It's definitely all Freya's dad that's making her act like this. I hate him too, he's not a nice person, he doesn't realise what he's doing trying to protect his daughter.
Something is going to happen, that will change everything.
Horatio would be the best mum in the world! He's awesome!
Thank you so much for the review and I'm so sorry that its taken me so long to reply to it. The next chapter should be out soon :D Report Review
He was the reason she was feeling like this, he was the reason she wasn't happy, it was all him.
I'm sorry, but I agree with Horatio. It is Freya's fault just as much as it it Louis' and I will not accept him saying otherwise. Since I'm merely an outsider and not a part of this story, I shall leave it to Horatio to smack him on the side of the head.
I said before that I don't like Freya and that's true, kinda. I just don't know what to think of her. It seems obvious that she cares for Louis, but in the long run? I'm kinda thinking she'll listen to her father. And I don't want that to happen, because I really don't like him.
I'm scared for Louis and what will happen if he has to raise the kid alone, but he'll have his family, so I know he'll be okay. I don't want him to lose his baby because of Freya's dad and Freya herself, whether she listens to her father for him or for herself.
So, I'm kinda thinking Louis will or should meet someone else. Because I feel so sad for him now.
But I love that you bring out all these emotions and thoughts in me. I loved this chapter and I love this story. I can't wait for more. :D
Sam.Author's Response: I agree with Horatio as well, he needs to make Louis see sense, but sadly I think that it'll take a while before Louis realises that it's Freya's fault too. Haha if you want to make an appearance and shake some sense into Louis you are more then welcome to :D
You can hate on Freya, it's okay. She's being very childish through the entire thing so far, and poor Louis is just letting her get away with it as he's worried about upsetting her. Ahh who knows if she'll listen to her father? Well I do... and you do :D
As for Louis, he's going to be so glad that he has his supportive family around, that's all I'm going to say. He'll need them a lot more then he thought soon enough.
Aww all the emotions! They make me so sad :-(
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You... You... You stopped! Cliff hanger!
I love Louis' always-there-to-help family. It's what he needs right now, apart from word from Freya (which he's obviously gotten and... Gah, no, saying nothing! :P). I never thought of Molly and Lucy as twins before, in my head Molly is older, but I like it. It's new and different. It totally adds to how different your story is to others. :D
I loved this chapter and I really need the next one and I hope she doesn't hurt him, but if she does, I hope it makes him determined to look after the baby (Sam... ;)) and he finds someone awesome.
Sam.Author's Response: I'm sorry! Don't hate me! :D
Louis's family are the best family in the world, they're very loving and always there for each other.
I always thought of Molly being a few years older, but whilst I was writing this I just wrote them as twins and thought, huh that doesn't sound too bad, so I'm glad that you think it's new and different.
Haha Sam is still a lovely name for the unborn baby, who knows? Maybe we'll find out the name soon enough?
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Louis... *cue tears* ;(
I seriously just want to hug him now, I never want to left go because I fear that if I do, he'll break. They're breaking him, killing him - I hope it is her parents stopping her and she's not just ignoring him. I couldn't stand that. At least I get why they would stop her; it's not like they like him or anything.
I hope she's okay, though, and the baby... And Sam is an awesome gender neutral name. ;)
Sam.Author's Response: Awww he's very thankful for the hugs, he really needs them. They are definately breaking him slowly :-(
Yep it's her parents stopping her from contacting him, but he'll get to hear from her soon.
Haha Sam is a very good name for the baby :-p Report Review
Ooh, I do not like Freya's parents. They are angry and uspet, I get that, they did something stupid and then lied after all, but to say those things to a boy? To Louis? Oh, I hoped Bill lost control for a second; that dad of hers needs to be taught a lesson.
I applaud Louis for standing up to him and saying he's keeping the baby. It's not their choice, it's Louis' and Freya's decision, and he should at least get to see her. I am really glad Fleur chose to stick by his choice, even while she's angry. At least Louis won't be alone if Freya left.
Oh, this chapter brought out so many emotions, I actually love it! I love being so pulled into a story.
I loved this chapter!
Sam.Author's Response: I don't like them either, especially her dad. Louis definately doesn't need to be spoken to like that. I think that if other people weren't there, then Bill would have taught him a very valuable lesson :D
Yep Louis is always going to be there for his baby, so he could only think of standing up for the love of his life and their child.
Yay! I'm so happy that you're loving this story :D Report Review
Horatio is an awesome name. Horatio seems like an awesome friend. So the name definitely suits him. I like that he's trying to protect Louis and stop him from doing stupid things.
As for Louis, I just want to hug him. She is putting him through so much, it's like she isn't taking into account that he's just as scared about this, that it's all about her. That's what I like most about you writing this from a male postective; even if she doesn't see, we readers know how much Louis is effected.
I hope you don't think badly of me, or think that it effects my view of this story (I don't, I love it). But you know I'm a die hard Louis fan and I refuse to see him so hurt and broken, so I don't really like Freya. Maybe it'll change, maybe it won't. Right now - after reading in your summary about the prospect of raising the baby alone - I kinda hope he finds someone new and is happy with his baby and her. But that's just because of what's she's doing; I also hope she sees sense and they're okay with the baby together.
I guess I'll find out. :)
I'm glad people know now, the teachers and the parents soon. Especially them. Teenagers being scared is understandable, but telling someone definitely would be the right thing to do.
Great chapter, Tammi.
Sam.Author's Response: I'm glad that you like his name :D He is definately going to be the best friend that Louis will ever have. I love writing him.
I know what you mean, I want to hug him too. Nope sadly Freya is mainly thinking about herself, which isn't good for poor Louis. Aww I'm so glad that you like that, that makes me so happy.
That's fine, I don't really like Freya either and I'm the one writing her, Louis is definately too good for her. He'll be happy eventually it's just whether or not Freya is in the picture. But yes you'll see soon :D
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*Accepts cookie gratefully*
The realism continues! One thing I never understood was the fact that people who have children at Hogwarts still manage to keep up with all their classes, and live in a dorm with three others who all just seem to dote on the child. The teachers also seem to be oblivious to the fact that some one is pregnant/has a baby in their dorm and life seems to continue as normal (partying, etc.)
Wheras is this little jem of literature, Louis and Freya are facing expulsion, and while not many face this in RL if they have a child at school age, a lot tend to do school online as raising a child and doing homework is not easy! In any way, shape or form!
I respect you so much for this, honestly I do!
I salute you!
Siriusly89Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed the cookie :D
Yep, Freya will definately not be keeping up with her school work in the upcoming chapters and there's going to be a major consequence to everything. I do find it strange that in other stories they can just stay at school whilst everyone else takes care of the baby withouth any problem. Although I have read quite a few that are like that and have been quite good, I just never imagined it to really happen.
Aww thank you so much! It means so much to me that you said that :D
Thank you so very much I actually love you :D Report Review
Emm. . . hi. . . Siriusly89 here with your insanely late requested review (what have you been waiting now, like 11 days? More?) I sincerely apologise and wish to inform you that it usually doesn't take this long! I promise!
Oooh! A teen pregnancy fic from the boys perspective! This is new! I like how this doesn't make it humorous, and Louis and Freya actually seems scared of what their parents will think. The despair was full on, and I like that as usually its 'oh dear, we are going to become parents at sixteen' then the girl cries for a bit, the boy cheers her up and everything is grand.
That doesn't happen in real life.
So, kudos for you for making this very realistic :)
And because you had to wait so long, your getting another review :DAuthor's Response: Hey, I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this review, RL has gotten in the way.
Aww thank you so much for getting around to the review, and for the extra one, I didn't mind waiting :D
I wanted this story to focus on the seriousness that teens have to go through, I didn't want it to be a humour fic at all. Louis and Freya are terrified.
Thank you so much for your kind words :D and once again thank you for the review and for reviewing my other chapter, you're the best! Report Review
First I want to say I'm so sorry this review took quite a while-real life has started getting in the way . Sometimes I wish I could just live on the internet, because I'm anti social like that!
This was another great chapter and I love the fact that Louis' personality is starting to shine through. I can definitely see traits of both his mother and father shining through-he is clearly headstrong and determined, like Bill, but I think he is a bit more serious, which is always great (and unusual) to see in a male character in next generation.
The thing I love most about this story is that it is believable, not at all cliche or annoying and that it is told through the father's eyes and that he sees all the problems of teen pregnancies and is being logical about it. Okay, admittedly that was way more than the one thing I like best about your story...but I've never been very good at maths.
Anyway, I thought the spreading rumours you talked about in this chapter were a nice touch, mainly because they made this chapter feel so real. If I'm being honest, there have been several girls at my college who have left school after becoming pregnant and the rumours have spread like that spreadable butter you get in tubs.
I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next...especially how Freya will react to the secret of her pregnancy becoming...not so secret. Oh, and I also can't wait to see their parents reactions.
Courtney:)Author's Response: I'm really sorry this has taken me so long to reply to, Real life huh? I wish I could live on the internet too and not be sociable at all :D
I didn't want Louis to come off as another dead beat dad who didn't really care about things affecting him. I think it's definately Bill that has kept him level headed and able to deal with serious issues like this one.
Yay, I'm glad that you think it's believable, I was worried that it wouldn't come across as too believable at all. Aww you're amazing! :D
Oh yes, I can't imagine many people not spreading rumours, I remember rumours being spread back when I went to school, yes definately like the spreadable butter :D
I can't wait for you to read more, I really hope that you'll enjoy it as much as you've been enjoying these other chapters.
All of the reactions are coming up soon :D
Thank you once again Courtney! :D Report Review
This was such a sweet chapter-I loved all the new characters you introduced. I think the reason I especially enjoyed the scene with Dom, Victoire and Louis was because the sisters were so great together, and in Dom and Vic stories, we rarely see them getting along. Also I haven't read a lot of stories where Dom and Vic and Louis are all together. Drunk Dom was great!
Aw, I already love Horatio-he is a total guy and just says things like they are without mucking around, which I love. I think Louis is going to have to rely on him a bit in the future to tell the truth.
I also liked the realism in this chapter-how there are actually consequences to getting pregnant while still at school and everythings not all la-de-da.
Keep up the great work!
Courtney:)Author's Response: Aww thank you so much for reviewing :D
I'm so glad that you're enjoying this story. I was always fascinated with why people always made Dom and Vic hate each other, sure they're sisters, but I get on with my sisters so it didn't make sense to have them hate each other so much. So they're like best friends in this story :D
I love Horatio too, he sticks up a lot for Louis, so Louis is going to rely on him heavily.
Thank you so much for your kind words, you've made my day so much with this review :D Report Review
I have the uncanny feeling this letter is not going to be very good news...Author's Response: Aww don't think that just yet, it might not be :D Report Review
YES! A LOUIS CENTRIC STORY! I HONESTLY LOVE YOU RIGHT NOW!!!
Okay, weirdo moment over. I apologize profusely but, if you couldn't tell, I just love Louis so much and we don't see many stories in which he is the central character...or even stories which he is in at all. So by having this story from his point of view, you are already doing something original and unique, which I love. Also, there are already quite a few Albus/OC pregnancy stories out there...though of course, none (that I've seen) which are told from the father's point of view.
So many pregnancy stories are cliche and over done-they start with a party, a large bottle of Firewhiskey and two 'enemies' having a one night stand. I love the fact that your take on things is completely different-that Louis and Freya are already in a relationship and clearly love each other very much. I love how much emotion you were able to put into this first chapter. I felt so bad for Louis, and I just wanted to run up and give him a big hug!
I am now super interested to find out where this story is going to go-will Louis and Freya's relationship be tested? What more will we find out about their characters? I would also like to know more about Bill and Fleur as parents, as I haven't read an awful lot about them in next generation.
Great first chapter.
Courtney:)Author's Response: Aww thank you :D I love you for reading and reviewing this chapter.
You can continue with weirdo moments, I really like them hehe.
That's ok, I'm beginning to love Louis now he really needs to be featured in more stories.
I really wanted this story to be a lot different to the pregnancy stories I have read so I wanted to change things up, which is why I wanted this to be from the fathers POV, there's a lot more coming up that's a lot different then the other stories I've read.
Louis would appreciate the hug :D
There will be more Bill and Fleur in this story don't you worry!
Thank you so very much hun! :D Report Review
OH MY GOD! YAY!!!
*Does a happy dance*
I'm so glad Freya's owled him. I just hope it's a nice letter and not one that says she doesn't want to see him again. Please be a nice letter.
Really intrigued now and can't wait for the next chapter :)
Soph xxAuthor's Response: I'm so glad that you're happy and I love the dance :D *joins in the happy dance*
The next chapter shall be up soon, so you can see :D I promise not to keep it too long though hopefully in the next few days :D Report Review
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