Reading Reviews for A Heavenly Betrayal
73 Reviews Found

Review #26, by Night_Witch The End

17th November 2008:
Breath takingly brilliant story... Now about this epilouge. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Hehehehe... I'm afraid that'll have to wait a bit, though!

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Review #27, by Mauge Lies and Choice

10th November 2008:
I love thiis story so far. I think you're really good at writing, I haven't written so many reviews 'cause as soon as I end one chapter I want to start reading the next asap (sorry :D) so, here it goes, you're awsome!!!

Author's Response: Geez, thanks! I do hope to hear from you again.

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Review #28, by thrufirewithoutaburn The End

18th October 2008:
SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Please!! You are such a talented writer and your story is amazing!

Author's Response: I have some other projects that come first, but I won't say no... thanks!

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Review #29, by Sarah The End

12th October 2008:
I can't believe that this is the end!!!
Oh,, Please!! Write a Sequel! I love this story,,,
I wanna know how it really ends!! Oh Please, write a SEQUEL!!! I love love love this story!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I probably will... when I get the time! Thanks again for sticking to this story until the end.

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Review #30, by slytherin_princess89 Disturbance in the Corridor

27th May 2008:
yep, heating up just as they ought to be:)

Author's Response: lol, thanks :)

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Review #31, by durmastrang_fluer Words and a Bag

20th May 2008:
pretty good chapter
try lengthing ur sentances tho

Author's Response: thanks, it gets better afterwards.

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Review #32, by durmastrang_fluer Night Walk

3rd May 2008:
Very interesting, only one part confuzzled me. :)
Really, you must HATE me criticizing your every chapters! I don't mean any harm though, I just like to give my opinion. As I respect you deeply and your work, would you please check out my newest series? It's called, "A Year To Remember"

I came across you by someone mentioning you in a review that I came across. I'm pretty glad I did. *smiles warmly*
Excellent writing, do keep up the good work! And if you would, please check out my series. I'd love to hear what you think of my writing


Author's Response: ... and your opinion is very appreciated! To be honest, I like researching the people who leave a review (thanks!) so I'll surely check out your work. Until then ~

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Review #33, by durmastrang_fluer A Promising Year

3rd May 2008:
Thats pretty good, except the last few paragraphs (the ones after the three *'s). I think you're an excellent writer though and have a bit of talent still holding back. Don't be afraid to use your craziest ideas or to plump up your sentances a bit more.
All I can say is; you're wonderful! Please take my advice in a good way as I mean no harm to it. *smiles*


Author's Response: geez, thanks! I'll definitely take your advice and let loose next time. *smiles* to you too! Thanks again.

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Review #34, by DracOsWiFe Beautiful

13th April 2008:
I luv this story!!! i cant wait to see how things work out!! update soon please lol

Author's Response: thanks! I'm going as fast as possible ^^

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Review #35, by alexc33 Beautiful

5th April 2008:
Gosh I am just in love with your story!

Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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Review #36, by crazybibliophile Heated Up Match

25th March 2008:
You HAVE to write more, this is so incredibly good!!

Author's Response: I WILL!! lol
I'm glad to see you're enjoying it!

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Review #37, by crazybibliophile Making Decisions

25th March 2008:
All the Draco/Maria stuff is so sweet... and of course your plot is completely awesome as well. :D

Author's Response: Why, thank you so much!
I couldn't resist throwing in some fluff... even though it's essentially a drama ^^

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Review #38, by crazybibliophile Hogsmeade

25th March 2008:
This is EXTREMELY amusing...but poor Malfoy... XD

Author's Response: oh, his time will come ;)

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Review #39, by crazybibliophile Ravenclaw Vs Hufflepuff

25th March 2008:
Ha, Roger Davies is so funny... this is fantastic.

Author's Response: It's a shame he's only mentioned a couple of times in the books... hehe

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Review #40, by crazybibliophile Exposed

25th March 2008:
Your story is so awesome! I love it!!

Author's Response: thanks for reading!

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Review #41, by crazybibliophile Disturbance in the Corridor

25th March 2008:
This is SO great... 10/10.

Author's Response: thanks for the rating!

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Review #42, by crazybibliophile Calming Draught

25th March 2008:
"Is it true you actually hit Malfoy? Congratulations!" Hermione said.

"Is he going to miss class?" Harry added.

"Was he whimpering?" Ginny inquired.

"Was there blood?" Ron asked.

"I can’t believe you ruined his face!" cried Pansy.

Hilarious. Absolutely hilarious. XD

Author's Response: haha, thank you!

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Review #43, by crazybibliophile Words and a Bag

25th March 2008:
this is so cool... Maria is extremely awesome. :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you like her; OC's are always a bit hard to deal with...

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Review #44, by crazybibliophile A Promising Year

25th March 2008:
This is such a good beginning, I really like it!

Author's Response: thanks!

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Review #45, by pheonixfawn33 Heated Up Match

22nd March 2008:
yet another great chapter.

Author's Response: woah, thanks a lot!

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Review #46, by Chloe Dumbledore's Predictions

22nd March 2008:
Your story makes me really happy. I love it. just an FYI.

Author's Response: Geez, thanks! I'm glad to hear that ^^

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Review #47, by rnl1993 Night Walk

20th March 2008:
awww cute chapter i like it a lot

Author's Response: Thanks! It gets better ;)

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Review #48, by DamselInDistress Night Walk

15th March 2008:
nnn cute :) as u said, not expected!!! OOoh, the rumors, eh :) who believes those anyways :D

Author's Response: Exactly my point - hehe. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

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Review #49, by Vespidae Senseless

5th March 2008:
Thanks for the update. I think its good so far. You're doing a good job of exploring both sides of things and not taking any easy or simple view points. Some minor copy/editing issues, but overall, very nice. Keep it coming.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll make sure to triple-check the chapters before submitting them, thanks for telling me. I'm glad you like it! Thanks again for your support.

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Review #50, by Vespidae Saviour

27th February 2008:
Writer's block? Looking forward to another chapter--I've been enjoying this.

Author's Response: Thank you! So have I...

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