Awwwww! That was the sweetest saddest story ever! It was well written because that's how Ron would actually write if he had a diary or was writing a biograghy of some kind. Wicked work. I hope you write more pieces.
Lots of love Jodie
Author's Response: Yay!! Thanks so much for the wonderful compliments!! I'm glad you think I kept Ron canon, I was worried about that. I will and I hope you'll still keep reading them! Thank You for the wonderful reviews!! Report Review
Aww, that was so sad and beautiful! Amazingly well written! Author's Response: Thanks for the sweet compliments!! Report Review
Oh...my...goodness. Just oh my goodness that was....amazing! That was really sad! I wanted to cry! My poor ickle Ronnikens is all alone left to die alone! NO! *wipes tear from eye* Lovely, just lovely take a nice 10 and slice of birthday cake!Author's Response: *Squeel* Thank you for the wonderful compliments!!! I'm sorry but Ron just loves her so much that according to him, noone can compare to hermione. Yay!!!! I get a 10 rating and cake! Hopes it's chocolate. Thankies! Report Review
oh my gah.....
That was such a great story, you know its good when you get to the end and sit for about 10seconds taking it all in and feeling on the verge of tears....
Anyway! Love it! 10/10 great writing ^^Author's Response: Wow! Really? ZOMG!! Thankies for thinking it's that good!!! Report Review
I liked it. It's pretty awesome how Hermione came back from the Killing Curse to say good bye. I think you did a good job at sticking to Ron's character, some fanfics I've read don't do that.Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like that part, I'm thinking of writing a one-shot from Hermione's point of view on how she came back from the killing curse. Thanks, I wanted to keep Ron as Ron-like as possible. Thanks for the review!! Report Review
Ron was in character. It was heartfelt. It was well writen. I am yet to find a down side...(Well, I don't think Snape is that evil but don't get me started on that.) Good story.Author's Response: Thanks! Thrilled that I managed to keep Ron canon. Thank you for the great compliments! Yay! No downside! (except Snape but what to do *shrugs*) Thank you! Report Review
One of the best stories I've read. REally good Had me on the verge of tears it was great keep writing stories.Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful compliments! I will keep writing stories and I hope you'll keep reading and reviewing them! Report Review
great Author's Response: Thanks Report Review
Haha--good way to pull readers into your story. I seriously am smiling right now. . . The beginning was COMPLETELY Ron right there. I really liked that. It seems rather as though there aren't a whole lot of descriptions, but I suppose that's Ron for ya, huh? And also, if she was hit by the Avada Kedavra curse, she wouldn't have any time to spare a goodbye before she died (but don't we all wish that?) So, all in all, good story, and you should be proud of it. I like how you sort of joke around although it's supposed to be a very serious environment. Every dark story needs a little humor, or else it is overwhelmingly angsty and no one wants to read something like that. . . well I don't anyway. So, nicely done and keep up the good work!
--Lairyfights, outAuthor's Response: Aww, thanks Hillary! Some people thought that this fic should have been more angsty but I wanted to keep Ron as in character as possible and he isnt angsty! Yeah, I kinda suck a bit at descriptions so there you go, but I am trying to improve ;). Yup, that's Ron. Yeah, alot of readers were confused about that part (Hermione somehow surviving long enough to say good-bye)so I'm thinking of writing another fic to explain it. I am very proud of it, thanks! I wanted this fic to stand out from the other r/hg fics out there, which is why i made it a dark, angsty fic with a bit of humour thrown in. Thank you and I hope you read my other works!
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Very cute and very Ron-esque. Brilliant :)Author's Response: Thankies!! Glad you think so! Thanks for the short but sweet review! Report Review
oh my that was sooo sad, but sweet! I can't believe i'm crying over a story. It was just so wow! I mean wow! bitter-sweet!Author's Response: Awww! *hands Princess a kleenex* Sorry I made you cry! But I'm sooo happy you think my fic is 'wow' worthy!!! Thankies for the review! Report Review
thats sweet.. i like the way u write through ronAuthor's Response: Thankies!! Glad you like my portrayl of Ron! Report Review
awwwww, that was so sweet! it was written in a very Ron-like way, and it was lovely. the humour you added in helped lighten the story and made it more believable, seeing as it was Ron that worte the story. it was sweet and sad, and I enjoyed it very much. Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't want to make it too angsty coz it is, as you say, Ron so i wanted to keep him as in character as possible. I'm glad you think the humour worked, I wanted it to stand out from the other ron/mione fics. Yay!!! Thanks for the great review!!! Report Review
aww....*tear tear*....you're tugging at the strings of my heart. so sweet and so sad. you're a fantastic writer yet i hate the tugging of my heart though. great, now im crying and rambling. lovely, brilliant job, dear!
LMWAuthor's Response: Aaaaw! I'm sorry. *hands LMW a kleenex* I'm glad you like my writing! but I'm sorry I made you cry! Thanks for the review! Report Review
sweet!!!! so cute, job well done... luv it , beautifully written!!! SO SAD, very. :(Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!! I appreciate the wonderful review! Report Review
Now that was adorable! You made Ron seem really sweet but at the same time you got the idea that he really was heartbroken. i liked the way you made it slightly humorous but in the end it was really sad *sniff* lol, great fic!Author's Response: Thankies Star! I wanted to make this rw/hg fic stand out from the rest by making it as Ron-like as possible, a mixture of humour and heartbreaking angst. I'm glad it turned out well. Thanks for the review! Report Review
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ur writing style reminds me of my friends.... of course..... she doesn't write like that on HPFF but in the notes that we pass in class =D, well IT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME AND GOING ON MY FAVORITES!!!!!!! ~sammy~Author's Response: THANKIES!!! Well, I wanted to make my writing style in this particular fic as believable as possible. LOL!! WOW, it means alot that you think this is good enough to be put on your favourites. Thank you Sammy and I hope you'll check out future fics from me. ;) Report Review
Well...the story is bittersweet. I mean, with Ron writing it, it can't stop being somehow funny, but the fact that Hermione and Harry( if I understood well enough) died...that't sad...very, very sad. Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to keep it as Ron-ish as possible. Yeap, Harry and Hermione died.... but they died for others.... Thanks for the review!! Report Review
I liked how your story showed how much Ron cared about Hermione and how he regrets his cowardice and hesitation in confessing his love. But I felt that your story kind of mixed humour and angst together which made the bittersweet feeling not as strong as if you just left it as angst only. The humour made it harder to process the seriousness of the story. The last half was really good, very sweet.Author's Response: The reason I mixed humour with angst was because I wanted it to stand out from the other rw/hg fics and also make it more memourable. Thank you for the compliments, the last part was a last minute addition. I felt it should have a bit more feeling, that was why I added it. Thankies for the review!! Report Review
OMG, I was gonna review this earlier, but tears almost fried the motherboard. It's so sad and sweet and lovely. Ok, I'm crying again now. *sob*. Keep it up. *Sob*Author's Response: Aaaaw!!! *hugs Beth and hands her a kleenex* Tears are the best compliments, they say so much more than words!! Thankies for the review!! Look out for more fics from me!! Report Review
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's Response: Thankies!!!!!!! More is on the way!!!!!!
Oh my God, that was beautiful. I hope it's not how you imagine the end of the books!? Probably not... But really, I loved this story. You're great at writing.Author's Response: Thank you!! Don't worry, I don't think thats how the 7th book will end. Thank you for thinking I'm a great writer and I hope you'll read my other fic and upcoming ones!!!! Report Review
I've read this before...but I love it...soooooo sweet and very well written.Author's Response: Thank You!! I'm glad you felt it was good enough for a second read. Thanks for the compliments and review!! Report Review
omg... i love it
its sooo sad but soo cute
i love itAuthor's Response: Yay! An extra review! LOL! Report Review
omg... i love it
its sooo sad but soo cute
i love itAuthor's Response: It's Cute??? I've never heard that before for this fic but thanks!!! Report Review
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