this was so sad, and so good! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it and thanks for the wondeful rating =). Report Review
what a sweet story...one of the best stories of Ron and Hermoine i've read...aha..great job!^_^Author's Response: *Blush* Thanks! So sweet of you to say so! Report Review
This was really great! A lot of spelling mistakes, but the plot more than made up for it. I'm adding this to my favorites and I rate you a 9.Author's Response: Thank you! There were? Drat, I've checked this story so many times for errors. Oh well, mistakes happen. Thank you for the rating, much appreciated! Report Review
oh goshes! that was amazing! Author's Response: *blush* Aaaw shucks, thankies! Report Review
LOVED IT!!!!! It was amazing! You captured Ron better then any author I've ever read! This was beautiful! The title was brilliant! It grabbed my attention fast- nice job!! :DAuthor's Response: *blush* Aaaw, shucks thankx! Wow, thanks for the great compliment, *smods*. You are sweet, Thank you so much! Report Review
/Wow/. That was awesome. Depressing, but awesome. I've passed by this banner a billion times; I'm glad I read the story. Very nice one-shot. Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to mix humour with angst and I'm glad it turned out well. I'm glad you read this too ;). Thanks! Report Review
OMG! I loved it. I really love Ron, and usually hate seeing him with Hermiony, 'cause I just think that they make such a strange couple, but this really rocked. I've tears in my eyes!Author's Response: Oh thanks! So glad you enjoyed the fic eventhough it isnt your ship. *Hands Ligeia a kleeneex* Thank you for thye review! Report Review
this is an awesome story!!! it's sad but i love it!!!Author's Response: Yay!!!! Thank you for the multiple exclamation marks! Thanks for enjoying it! Report Review
it stunned me.Author's Response: Ooooh great review! Few words say so much! Report Review
I loved this story. Normally i don't write reviews but this one was greatAuthor's Response: Thanks! *blush* Aaaw, I'm honoured that you felt complelled to review my fic. Thanks! Report Review
Awwwww, I'm almost like crying here! My eyes have gone all watery and my sister is staring st me because I'm crying in front of the pc.......Anyway I thought this was really kind of, bittersweet. It was so sad but lovely because he loves her so much still and spent the rest of his life alone.......awwwwww! :-(Author's Response: Aaaaw! *hugs Ugly* and *hands Ugly a kleenex* I'm so touched! Thank you for enjoying this fic! Report Review
I thought it was good. You need to proofread bit, though.Author's Response: Thanks! Oh dear, I thought I fixed all the typoes, I'll check it again thank you for pointing it out. Report Review
That was really good! I am like crying right now!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!! Wonderful one-shot! The flashback part was really sad..........but it was sooo good!!! rating 10/10Author's Response: Yay!!! Thank you for the wonderful compliments! And for the awesome rating! Report Review
That was great. But god-damn it almost made me cry.
Good story. Good plot line. Good point of view from Ron's side of the love story .Author's Response: *Blush* Thank you so much for thinking it's great! Thank you, Thank you, Thank You! Report Review
Awww, so sad. I really liked it. Well done, great story.Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
This was a lovely idea for a one-shot and a truely intriguing read. You did such a magnificent job at portraying Ron that, at times, it really did feel as if I had stepped into his toughts. You have a wonderful comedic timing that suits him to a "t".
Which brings me to my beef, if you will. You did so spectacularly at making him seem loveable that when the time came for the tragedy of it all, it felt a bit manufactured. As Ron recalls Hermione's death, I struggle with believing that the words are his and not yours. I would have liked to see a more solemn Ron throughout or maybe more descriptive paragraphs. I just wanted more.
But please, do understand that I LOVE this fic and I LOVE your writing. Nothing I have said is meant to be taken as hurtful or deconstructive (I'm not even sure if that's a word). You are now one of my favorites!
Beautifully done, really. Author's Response: Wow....! This is one of the best reviews I've ever gotten! I feel so fuzzy :). Your compliments make me blush, it's so sweet of you to think of all these things!
Hmm.... maybe you're right, I was a bit stuck for that part. Hehee, I kinda stink at descriptions so yeah, that's something I'm working on trying to improve.
Oh shucks, thanks! Nothing wrong with constructive criticsm, as long as it's constructive ;). Yay! I hope you'll keep reading my other fics as well. I'm honoured to be one of your favorites, you have no idea :D.
Thank You for the lovely review! Report Review
Fab stuff! I love how emotional everything is, and please- whatever you do- don't stop writing!! x :) Author's Response: Aaaaw! *blush* Thanks for the kind words. I'll keep writing if you keep reading ;)!!!!
~Misty Report Review
OMG!!!!!! It was so cute! Yet so sad! Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Ah. So sad, but beautifully written! I love a good Ron and Hermione fic, and they are so hard to find now-a-days. It's pretty much the only ship I support, and write about. Ron and Hermione fics are a dying breed, and I'm so happy when I can find and read a great on like yours. You've made my day, regardless of how unbearable sad this story was. It had a sence of closure, and it was wonderful♥
JennaAuthor's Response: Aaah, thanks! *blush* Yeah, the site is being eaten alive by Dramione fics so I totally agree with you there. I'm sooo happy you think it's great!!! And I'm glad I made your day! Thanks for the awesome review!! Report Review
Awwwww! So cute! So sad! So--SNAPE?! I thought it was Malfoy! *rubs chin* Oh well. I loved this one-shot! I loved how Ron was still...well...RON, even in old age. I think my favorite line is "But it was also the year we lost a great old crack box, Albus Dumbledore." Old crack box! HA! I didn't like him much, but I didn't want him to die! *pouts* Ah well. Add to favorites I must!Author's Response: Yup, I love Draco too much anyway to make him kill *hugs Draco protectively*. Err, right. Also, I chose Snape coz it's ironic in the sense that it was Hermione that was always defending Snape but in the end, he killed her. Thanks! I always thought Ron would remain his cute little self even in old age. Hehehe, Alot of people seem to like that line. Hurrah! Thank you for granting me the honour of being in your favourites! Report Review
Okay and that didn't cut me off or anything. I don't remember what I said. I think I basically gushed about how gorgeous it was, said you had spelling and grammar errors, said I didn't care because it made me cry, and gave you a 10 :].Author's Response: Aaaw, thanks Heather! And thanks for the double review! ;) And don't worry about the cut off, it happens to me sometimes too. Report Review
I'm not actually crying but my eyes are all wet. :]. Haha. Anyways. This part was so beautiful. And Hermione, she took my heart with her. I love Ron anyway, and I love stories about him. And, for some reason, I like sad stories. I'm not morbid or anything Author's Response: Heheh, okay, you must be coming down with the flu or something ;). Aaaw thanks, I was worried I made him to mushy but I'm glad you enjoyed it! Nah, I don't think oyu're morbid either. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I love the beginning, and am immediately drawn in. I love Ron. :P
I’ve wondered off track. should be wAndered. ;)
Its too early to discuss it. should be it's.
A mixture of intense love at finally being with Hermione and heart breaking loss over Dumbledore overwhelmed us as we watched his funeral. The most wonderful thing that had ever happened to me was quickly extinguished by the harsh reality that is life. this is a wonderful paragraph. when reading HBP I never thought about ron and hermione's feelings when Dumbledore died...but you draw them out here wonderfully.
For there lying on the ground was Hermione.
this was a wonderful story. I think this is the first Ron POV story I've read that I've actually enjoyed, so well done!! *adds to favs*
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the typo update, must have missed those...
Aaaaw, thanks! I loved that paragraph too, I consider that one of my best *grins*. I'm glad you thought I conveyed their emotions well.
Yay!!! Thrilled you enjoyed it so much! It means alot! Thanks for the wonderful review! Report Review
Hey nice cute story. I liked the ending it ended every so sweetly but I personally think that Ron wouldnt start out like that, he would be depressed all the way. Also I like the memory although I dont know that he'd say good-bye more like "Dont leave.". But thats just my thoughts. Also there were some words that were so fancy pancy for Ronald xD lol. So hopefully you wont be offended, just some advice for next time. But all in all nice job!Author's Response: Thanks! Probably but I wanted to keep Ron as Ron-like as possible. I also wanted this story to stand out which was why I mixed in a bit of humour and angst together. I'm weird like that ;P. I suppose he would say that but the challenge I wrote this for required the 'good-bye' phrase so yeah. Hehehe, really? Like what? It would be helpful if you point out a few examples of fancy-pancy words ;). Not offended, don't worry. Thanks for thinking I did a good job! Report Review
that was really sweet. I always thought either ron or hermione would die in the final battle...guess we'll find out...Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! I'm not sure about who dies but as you said, we will find out. Report Review
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