Gahhh I love this story. Please update

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Please update it, I check this story all the time, it is so good. Honestly, I'm glad that Sirius and Dollie broke up, she was just using him. I hope that she ends up with Remus but Sirius is being idiotic, it's not Remus's fault he's a werewolf.

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Socrates is not a greek philosophy but a Greek teqching system that says teachers ask you question you answer them so at this moment in time Lily Evans was wrong.

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Spirit, booster you say? Fabulous sounding!

Hello Misty,
Long time, no talk. We are both dreadful at this communicating business, but I thought I'd throw you a line and see what I could catch.

Hope all is well in your RL and that you haven't been held up by any unfortunate business. I was so glad to see you updating and editing about. I was really glad to get back into the swing of things.

Oh, my heart, my poor broken heart. Remus and I must have LOADS in commons because I feel like a masochist coming back to this story and realizing how it is all falling apart. I really must realize that this must break your heart as well if you are as attached to your Sirius and Remus as I seem to be.

I had to refresh myself a bit and just take a peak at the past few chapters and it all came thundering back to me like a face full of snowball. Your writing is exquisite and I loved this intermingled darkness and lightness. I feel that it is appropriate transition into what will be a rough few chapters I am sure. It is also aspiring to see you not giving up on a story.

Constant vigilance, my sweet Misty. Keep it up and best of luck in the future chapters! May the words be ever in your favor.

~Lindsey

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I like this story very much! : )

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I have all the current fan fics I'm reading bookmarked on my browser and I check them almost daily. The second I saw this had a new chapter I spazzed and accidentally ripped my headphones out of the port :P

ANYWAY. Wow. Such an intense chapter! After Viv found out she wasn't pregnant and the blackmail was no longer void, I thought she was going to end up with Sirius but then lines like "You're not the man I thought you were." and "I hate you and I'll never forgive you." come up and I'm like NO!

Poor Remus :( And Sirius! Sirius was a jerk and deserved that from Dollie but it still pains me. And ah, Remuuus! His best friend! Sirius should have known it was an accident and that Remus would never EVER do that on purpose! Man...

Great chapter! And no matter how long the updates, I will stick with this story to the end :)

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Update? ...Please? I was really looking forward to chapter 19. You left us at such a huge cliffhanger!! Please finish out the story? :D

Author's Response: I'm working on Chapter 19 as we speak! I promise it should be out within the next few weeks, at least before the month's over. Don't worry, I'll finish this story, by hook or by crook ;).

Thanks for leaving another review!

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Aww, my heart is aching so much for Sirius! You write so incredibly. I can feel the words and emotions I'm reading off the screen and it's just amazing. Please, I beg you to update a lot this summer! I need something to do and reading this story would more than satisfy me! :)

Author's Response: First off, welcome and thank you for leaving a review!! I love that you feel for Sirius, especially as he's only a template provided by JKR and I'm messing about with him. Eeep, you have no idea how much that means to this aspiring novelist. I always try to make everything I write come to life and it thrills me that you think it does!

When I first read this review, it got me pumped up to write and update this fic throughout summer. But real life and mild writer's block got the best of me and yeah. But I've gotten back in the groove and working hard on the latest chapter, which is going quite swimmingly. Stay tuned!

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Hullo Misty love,

I have been missing you dearly. I haven't had anyone to offer me a challenge of writing and I'm aching or something to write but what, I cannot figure out. We'll ignore all that for now, though, love because I need to address this beautiful story of yours.

You have done nothing short of incredible with this Misty because its not the love triangle or the complications of youth but the development you've taken with these characters. Sirius is beautiful and broken and sad while Remus is sweet and gorgeous and full of sorrow. They are beautiful tragic, broken romantic heroes, Mist.

I don't get tired of reading your stories and the development you've done with it. I'm emotionally invested in this story but I may be bias but I think my heart shattered a bit reading the last half of this. The calm before the storm. I almost wish you wouldn't update so everything can stay okay if even for a moment. Aw sigh.

I'm tearing up a bit thinking of each's fate and how it will play out. If reviews weren't 12+, I'd have a few choice terms about Sue but alas, what a snooky piece of lint. She is the gross dust beneath the washing machine.

Cheers to you m'dear, I hope to hear from you soon.

xox,
Linds

Author's Response: Linds darling, I give you free reign to shoot a good hex at me. I've been missing you immensely as well, it's just been taking me awhile to get back on the HPFF horse. I do have more than one challenge in mind for you, that is, if you're bold enough to accept it ;). Expect a message within the week.

You always see the best in this story, whether it deserves it or not. You describe the heroes so poetically, it baffles me that they are the same that I put to page. Sirius and Remus are slowly becoming the damaged men we've read about in the books. At least, that's what I'm aiming for. Interesting that you didn't mention Dollie. She is an undeniable catalyst of things to come though.

Exactly! This was the calm before the storm, before everything spirals downwards into disaster. Tempting as it is, I vow to keep updating, even if the hiatus is long between chapters, if only because you've been so loyal and stuck around so long. I owe it to you, Linds, and I can't wait for your reaction to how it all plays out.

That's a lovely PG way of putting it. Sue doesn't deserve such eloquence.

Ch. 19 is open on my desktop and progressing quite well. I've been having the most trouble arranging the sequence of events I have in mind for full dramatic impact but I think I've worked out most of the kinks. It's coming soon, promise! Before the month is over, hopefully!

Cheers too, dearest. I'm so sorry for my silence. *hugs*

infinity xoxo,
Misty

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I love the story not sure where your going from here, but i sure i'll be happy with whatever ending that you finish with.
I just want to say that I thank you for introducing me too Tonight I Can Write The Saddest Lines,Pablo Neruda and Twenty Love Poems and a Song of Despair. He is fast becoming one of my favorite poets, but Tonight I Can Write The Saddest Lines is by far my favorite of his.I must have read it about 30 times already, so thank you again.
Post soon! Bear x

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like this story and I do hope you'll like the ending just as much. It's still a long way off, I'm estimating roughly ten more chapters to go, give or take. It's always good to keep readers guessing, I wouldn't like to be predictable. ;)
You're welcome! Tonight I Can Write The Saddest Lines is one of my favourite poems of all time and when I first read it, I immediately thought of Sirius and Dollie's relationship and knew I had to incorporate it somehow.
Thank you for the review and hopefully the next update won't take as long as this one did.

~Misty

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I think it´s admiring that you´ve written this story for so long!
Six years for Merlin´s sake! xD
I hope you´ll continue writing it, and ultimately finish it. And I hope Remus get the girl but unfortunatly it rarely happens.
Thanks! ***

Author's Response: Oh gosh, has it really been that long? xD
It's probably more a testament to my procrastination than anything else but I appreciate the encouragement all the same. I fully intend to continue writing and finishing this up. It's my baby after all. I already have an ending in mind that I hope is satisfactory. Thank you for the review!

~Misty

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Please update!!! I completely adore this story and would be 'over the moon' if you posted another chapter. Many Thanks! Xx

Author's Response: Ask and you shall receive! Plus, I always appreciate a good pun ;). Hope you like the latest chapter! Thanks!

~Misty

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I'd surely prefer more :) but that one was quite extraordinary, fight scene was awesome. Wish it could last a little bit more, you know? As you can see it's never enough for a determined fan whatever you do :D As I'm one of them who read all of this chapters in two days. With excitement and joy. I'm looking forward to see what's going to be happen next. Best wishes, dear author :D

Author's Response: Thank you! The fight was one that I was terribly excited to write. Hehehe, I do kinda know what you meant. A part of me did wanted to make the fight scene longer but I was worried that I wasn't pulling it off well enough or that it would get boring or something.

These reviews have been an absolute joy and pleasure to read and respond. It's such a privellege to have someone review every chapter of a novel-length story and be so supportive of it. I can't thank you enough =D.

~Misty

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It was an amazing chapter. So excited and full of romance... I love Remus and yeah, I can't think of a Marauders fic without Werewolf Remus :D He's the best of them, always so thoughtful, gentlemen and handsome :))) I love him so much, you see? That's why this story is one of my bests of Marauder fics so far.

By the way, I really did liked the cliffhanger!

Author's Response: *high-fives*

I adore Remus as well, though Sirius is giving him a run for his money. My thoughts exactly *le sigh*

I'm happy to hear that you liked the cliffhanger. It was my way of being mean and suspenseful, muahaha.

Thank you!

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Oh poor gloves :( Good chapter except what happened to gloves :)


Just kidding, you're doing so well :D

Author's Response: Hahaha, don't worry, those gloves will make a reappearance. ;)

Thank you!

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I wonder why Vivian didn't want Lily to hear? Anyway I liked this chapter too, as usual :D

Author's Response: It's a silly girl pride thing, I guess. Vivian and Dollie are BFFs while Lily is BFFs (for now) with Snape.

Thanks!

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She is pregnant? You gotta be kidding? I mean, wow! It's a dangerous cliffhanger, which makes me wonder about the rest of story like a mad! Can't wait to read, so I'm done with this review :D

Author's Response: The pregnancy works out in the grand scheme of things. It's a good idea to take into account that she's just a teenage girl.

Thank you! So excited to hear what you think about the rest of the story.

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Another wonderful chapter! Like that story, yay!

Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you!

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Why nothing happened with that mistletoes? I waited for this impatiently while I was reading. I dissappointed a little, though. But still I have to say that it was a good chapter :D

Author's Response: Patience, my dear. Having them kiss so soon would ruin my ultimate grand master plan ;).

Glad to hear that you still thought it was good!

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That punch was good. But wish she did one more for James. He deserves either, anyway...


Like always, it was great :D

Author's Response: Ah well, she had no inkling of what James would eventually do to her.

Thank you!

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Another good one :D I'm moving on, then :)))

Author's Response: Haha, thank you!

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I really do like that private lesson thing. Especially while they were working on wand movements, I enjoyed a lot :)

And Sue deserves what she gets, doesn't she?

Author's Response: Sue's a nasty piece of work and she'll get exactly what she deserves. ;)

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He he he, Dollie is really funny :D All that damage she has done :D

You're really good at desciribing people's thoughts, I mean it's good to know what Remus thinks about both Sirius and Dollie.

It was an amazing chapter, like always you do :D

Want a suggestion? Well chapters could be much longer :) I'd be delighted as a fan of this fic :D

Author's Response: I'm so happy you think so! I do worry that Dollie tends to be very morbid and angsty most of the time. In my defence, I wrote this back when I was a teenager myself.

Remus seems like the type who would put others' happiness before his own, which was what I wanted to showcase. Thank you for the compliment!

Hahaha, a fair suggestion. If I could, I would make the chapters much longer but I worry about boring my readers. Thank you so much!

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Professor Dumbledore is the best ever! His soul is still young even he looks so old :D

I liked the song. And the way you changed the lyrics :D


Great and enjoyable chapter, like usual :)

Author's Response: Another ridiculously cheesy moment for me, hehe. I love that song to bits, I had to include it somehow, even if the eras aren't in sync.

Thank you for the review(s)!
~Misty

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Yeah, he worths everyting :D I mean Remus :)

"Dollie, will you let me be your boyfriend?" This was the best part of the chapter, I think. It's so romantic :)

Author's Response: Oh gosh, re-reading that line makes it sound really cheesy, hahaha! What can I say, I was a hopelessly romantic teen when I came up with that. But glad you liked it.

Thank you for the review(s)!
~Misty

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