wow. what a story. when i clicked on it i didnt think it would be this good! and i love the way you wrote the group they worked so well together (:

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I've just finished your entire fan fiction. I think it was absolutely wonderful and I rather enjoyed reading it! Just some constructive criticism for any future stories: the huge paragraphs that came up became somewhat of a nuisance after a while. Despite that snag keep writing!

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so ellie confessed to sirius in dog form what really happened and suddenly they tollerate each other? i thought ellie would have at least had another screaming fit at him...
great story tho :D

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no! theres only 2 chapters left and things just got worse!! no! this story is so bloody intense!

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no! theres only 5 chapter left but is it enough time for everthing to be ok and for there to be a happy ending?!?!

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This story is awesome! I have just spent hours reading it! time to check for the sequel

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(:
FINALLY! I GOT TO READ THE LAST CHAPTER!
Do you know how much trouble I went through to get here?!
Right before I read "Apologise" the site crashed on me! Though finally, at midnight, I am able to finish this amazing fanfiction. ^.^
I LOVE it. I like how she spews her guts out unknowingly to Sirius in doggy form ^.^
I think it would have been cool if she was like "You look a lot like the dig that I fed last summer. I named him Rufus." That would have been coolio. though it didn't happen.
I also happened to LOVE LOVE LOVE the ending. ^.^ The oozing cheese was amazingly adorable. I like it a lot. And I love how he's wondering if he did the right thing in following her or not. ^.-
So, basically, the entire story was AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT!
I am so pumped to read the sequel.
-Haylenie

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This was great! I started and ended today, it was that awesome.
Keep writing! :)

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Why does it always rain on me? Is it 'cause I lied when I was 17?

Ahem, anyway =] Great chapter, I love the way Ellen just drifts off into her won world. And the voice in her head in italics is really funny =]

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I read this story yonks ago but didn't have an account so I'm pretty sure I didn't review at all. I can't remember most of this so I'm re-reading it! Was that chapter image there like a year ago...ish? =] 'Cause I don't remember it..but that could just be me =/ haha

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Aw! I like it. The song lyrics are a nice touch

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That was awesome. Just Sayin'

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Oh... poor Ella. Great chapter by the way! Loved it

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Aw, I wanted her with Sirius. :o pouty face
:):):)
Great chapter by the way

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Okay so I LOVE this story. But one thing is bothering me. Spelling.
Oh Vey= Oi vey
and
Crum Brulee- Creme Brulee
:)
8/10

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First off, GREAT storaqctey! Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading! Your main char at the same time. Your main character, Ellie was so relatable and new at the same time! This is one of the best Sirius/OC fanfictions I've ever read! Good Job! I love how you ended the story on a happy note. Because Sirius never gets married, other fanfictions make Sirius' lover leave Sirius or die. And that's never pretty...thanks for not making me cry at the end!

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Geez! This story is one of the most awesome ones I've ever read
I really and truthfully love it!
You have some talent...wow.
I don't know what else to say.
Oh, right! I have no clue if the sequel's already up, but I'm going to find out right about now.
And because I didn't want to review every single chapter I just give you 360 points now.

Greetings :)

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Oh nooo! Poor Remy! Aww, omygosh i feel for him! I liked Remus and Eleanor together!
But ah well sirius and Eleanor would be adorable too... i just need to get over remus and accept that its your story not mine :(

Anyway my favourite chapter so far :) Made me cry but soo good :)

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Wow this is such a good story, ive spent all morning reading it, and ive got to here so far. But oh no i like eleanor and remus! Please let it be them, i loveee remus! Although i love sirius too.

Really well written story, the only reason i havent commented on the other chapters is because i caouldnt wait to reads the rest. Only commented now because its lunch time, so have to tear myself away..

Great work!

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my favourite fruit is clementines as well :)

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I've read your entire story today, and I couldn't stop! I love reading about the Marauders when they were young, and you did a great job! The character of Eleanor was really well developed, and Aunt Eliza was so much fun!

I can't wait to read more of your writing. :)

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It was good dont stop writing

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Yay i like remus ;D keep their ship going

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u wrote this so well and it was very detailed, i congrat you on that note!! woohoo!!

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I'm speachless, just gobsmacked. This by far has been the best chapter in this story to date. I knew Remus knew, I knew Ellie knew (obviously), but I never thought in a million years that James knew as well.

I think I need to just sit a moment and just absorb all that has happened, the confrontation, the fight, everything was amazing.

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