So they're learning swordfighting? Lucky, I've been wanting to learn that since I starting reading Rurouni Kenshin XD, anyway good chapter, I hope to see the next one soon.

Author's Response: Yes they are. I know, I want to learn just for the heck of it. Thanks. The next one should be up soon. :)

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It's a really good story. I'm glad Draco's alright. I thought he was going to die.

Author's Response: Thanks. Nah, I wasn't going to kill him.Just hurt him a little, not kill him. Glad you liked it. :)

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That's sweat. I just have to say it is about time! I've waited forever to read the next chapter! Great Chapter though, write more!

Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't mean for it to take so long. College sucks. But I'm on break for two months so the next one should come more quickly. Thanks. Glad you liked it. :)

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Wow, that's really sad. I've never lost a loved one to drunk driving, but I think a girl who went to my school died that way a few years ago. Anyway good chapter, I eagerly await more.

Author's Response: I haven't either but some have come close to it. Thanks. I should be starting the next chapter this week.

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great chapter update soon plz
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks. I will.

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Hi! I love it. I read the first one and this one in one day... And I add this to my favorites too. UPDATE ~Jackie~

Author's Response: Glad you like it. I plan on doing working on the next chapter as soon as I can.

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No!!! Not Draco!!

Author's Response: yep, Draco :(

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great chapter love it update soon plz
100/10

Author's Response: thanks! I plan on starting chapter 13 this weekend so it shpuld be up soon!

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Wow, I think this is your best chapter yet. You did a very good job on the description. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it.

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i loved the first story and i love this one you are an awesome writer plz update soon
10/10

Author's Response: thanks! chapter 12 is currently with my beta and should be up soon. :)

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YAY! Jenny and HArry are speaking again!

Author's Response: yep, they are.

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Another great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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She's the traitor huh? I'm not all that surprised to tell you the truth.

Author's Response: You're not? Dang it.

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and also what does it mean by senstive topic or something?

Author's Response: I have no idea.

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its not working like at all i have tried but it isnt but if u send me the form through a review ehen it validates i can repost it as a review to u

Author's Response: I will not do it through review. I only take them through Pandora's Closet of The Dark Arts.


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i dont know how

Author's Response: Click on HPFF blog and look to the left. the link to the dark arts is there. Just click on it, register. Then go to HPFF requests. Before you go anywhere, read the requesting rules and copy the standard request form. Then go up to where it says'Specific Artist' and click. Look to the right and click 'new topic'. Put SunSation Gal 07 as the topic and paste the request from in there and fill it out completly. Hope this helped.


But the story HAS to be validated beofre you can request.

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hello havent read th is for a while, going realy good, i put up a new sotry n i was wondering if you could make me a banner for it review back on it when the chapter come up

Author's Response: Hi. Thanks. Glad you like it. If you want a banner, got to Pnadora's Closet or TDA and request me there.

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Awww.Poor Jenny. No offense, but Hermione was sort of acting ooc. Wouldn't she have comforted Jenny? That's just my opinion. It's really good.

Author's Response: She was. I thought about is as she has been Harry's best friend a long time and they and Malfoy have hated eachother since first year so I went with her getting made too. But she may be one of the first to become Jenny's friend again. That's for telling me that, you just gave me some really good input. Thanks.

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Wow, poor Jenny. But I'm sure Harry will come around evantually, write more soon

Author's Response: He will, in a chapter or so. I will. I plan on working on the next chapter tomarrow after my eye appointment. New contacts perscription, finally!

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ok

Author's Response: okay

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AH!!! KYLE ASKED JENNY OUT!!! *finishs spaz attack and returns to Earth and finishs reveiw* another awesome chapter!!! 10/10

Author's Response: Yep! He did. But right now it's just as friends, which may or may not develop into something more. I have'nt decided yet/ Glad you liked it. :)

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um...please don't take this as an insult, this is simply constructive criticism. I don't normally bug people about bad grammar since mine isn't great either. However, there are two things about bad grammar that really annoy me for some reason: When people use 'drug' as the past tense of drag instead of 'dragged', and when people use too many commas. The latter appiles to part of this chapter where your describing that cloak, I counted about 5 or 6 commas and that part. Don't get me wrong, I really liked this chapter, that just kind of annoyed me. Sorry if I sound offensive, I don't mean to be.

Author's Response: I don't. I'm just surprised my beta didn't see that like you have. I'll point it out to here when I send the next chapter to her. You don't. *looks around* okay, you kinda do. :)

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Boys, boys, boys. I wonder what Jen Potter shall do about this? =]

Author's Response: Yep. Girls got problems.

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Good Job! I love You can't stop the beat! Such a good song...and I like Mama I'm big Girl now!. lol so random. UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: I know! I love it too. Mama's a great song too but I love You Can't Stop the Beat! Randomness is a good thing! I will as soon as I can!

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..in a word to sum up my feelings about this chapter. YESH! =]

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it.

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