Great Chapter, it was so funny to see poor Sisi flipping like that. And man, that was a quick birth, maybe cause it was her second one. I like the nickname Sis gives Severus. And I hope that when she talks to her cousin she informs her that if she can't be polite to her new father, she'd better not say anything. We have that ruel in my house with certain in-laws. Let's see, names for Harry & Sisi's kids .. .How about Angelica Lily (Angel for short)? Ronald James (RJ for short) or Caelestis Severus (Cal) or maybe Serena Margo? I'm not sure of the ratio of girls/boys, that's why I put two girls names and two boys. Oh, and will Sirius and Ginger have kids too? I'd love to see Sirius as a dad? I'm trying to determine if he would be too permissive or maybe a little strict, seeing as he doesn't want his kids to grow up as wild as he was.

Author's Response: Right on! :D ((*cough* I'll make sure that Sirius knows! *cough*)) Then again... what about Ginger's view on the strict policies of her old home... Ooo...

Oh well, thank you for your suggestion of names. :] I'm pretty much in for Caelestis Severus -- haha! I hope that you like the names that I chose though:

Charles James Potter, Genette Lily Potter, Albus Caelestis Severus Potter (because the older siblings love to make fun of their little brother... but he holds up the tradition of four names... such as Marcella Eileen Berenice Snape...).

Thank you for your wonderful review, Snapegirl!

Your writer,
~Meli♥
P/s: I hope that no one reads up the names because I'll be in for a mishap... ;]

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Actually, this was pretty funny, getting Sirius to own up to his mistakes, something which he never really did in Rowling's books, in my opinion. And you know, it does take a lot of guts to admit that you were wrong, however long ago it might be. What's Ginger's worst memory? I'll be looking forward to seeing Harry and the rest of them soon and also to the sequel. Hey, don't be discouraged, I like your writing. Otherwise I wouldn't read it. One more thing, maybe you could have Gin admit she had a serious crush on Severus, wouldn't that knock Siri for a loop?

Author's Response: Oh... now that's a good plot twist (Gin admitting that she had a serious crush on Severs... I don't know...).

I know about Ginger's worst memory now! ((It's just come up to my brain while reading this wonderful - and enlightening - review of yours!!)) Tell you what? I'll tell you about it later!

Thank you for your review, Snapegirl, for you are quite right about the mistake thing. I kind of see it hard for myself to agree that I said something wrong. I feel sort of embarassed in a way...

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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Aw Marcy sounds sooo cute! I want one! lol

Author's Response: Asewome! (Let's not start a whole sale, right? ;])

I'm glad that you're liking the fic. :D ((I hope that the banner's finished...))

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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Oo I can't wait for the one-shot! Who's Lucy and Genette? Are they the children that we don't yet know about? Please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm not too sure about Lucy, but Genette is pretty much obvious (2nd child to Harry and Cicily ;] Just so you know).

I'll put up the one-shot by the time it's Christmas or around that time. I hope that you'll like it, honestly. :D

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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Ouch. Daria really doesn't like death eaters, does she? Maybe it's a good thing that she wasn't invited to the wedding then, huh? The drama never ends. lol

Author's Response: True, true. :D

Thank you for leaving me a review (I'm also glad that you like the fic so far!), Asian!

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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So yeah. Your stories pretty much rock my sox. lol they're just that cool.

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

((Yours is pretty much just as awesome. Will you update soon?))

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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Hahaha I love how Ginger keep having whole conversations with herself. lol She sounds kind of like a crazy person.

Author's Response: Haha... I talk with myself sometimes, but in my head. I consult myself before I do something. It's sort of like a decision-making theory. Talk to yourself to make sure that it's okay to do something.

Oh well, that's the way she sees it (apart from believing that her conscious is her brother... - my fault about that!).

I'm glad that you're liking the sequel so far. :D -- This makes me happy, as you can see. :]

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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Whoops! lol I didn't realize that you had already posted the sequel until you told me. So yeah, good chapter and I'm glad that there's a sequel!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, asian! I was kind of concerned about the loss of reviews and all... oh well, I hope that you like this sequel. (I'm still adding on to it... just to let you know...)

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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I thought the part with Sirius and Ginger cooking was very sweet. I'm glad she wasn't mad at him for looking at her diary.

I can't wait to see the horrible memory.

Oh and here's another kind of Italian chicken (and I do know what I'm talking about since I'm 100% Italian, and second-generation, since my dad came over from Italy when he 19) Chicken Marsala--it's to die for, it's a chicken cutlet lightly breaded with a marsala wine sauce and sometimes the sauce has mushrooms. Yum!)

I was glad Sisi defended her mom and Sev to her snotty cousin. How dare she say my Sev is UGLY! I would've socked her one. Obviously she's blind, cause Sev is a sexy beast!

Happy Thanksgiving!

10/10

Author's Response: Here ye, here ye! ((Sev as a sexy beast, of course ;]))

Oh, Daria might come back on her knees pleading to be forgiven later. -- But who knows...

I didn't know that you were 100% Italian! :D How awesome is that???? :] Thanks for giving the name of the food. I'll be sure to mention it later (seeing as Cicily loves chicken...).

The horrible memory will come as soon as my dear old Muse is back. I'm afraid that he'll be gone forever. :(

Thank you for coming around to reaview, Snapegirl. You're reviews cheer me up every single time.

If you're still looking for a banner maker try this site out: http://www.the-dark-arts.net/request.html

Follow the directions and you're set. :D

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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I really like the name Sev and Margo picked out, Marcella Eileen Berenice , that's very poetic and pretty. Did you know that Marcella means warrior girl in Latin? I have a character named that in one of my other stories, that isn't a fanfic.

Does Sirius's worst memory have anything to do with the fact that his family might have had some kind of grudge against the Byerlys, or that he believed once that purebloods were superior to Muggleborns? I'm thinking that's a typical thing, since when you grow up with prejudice you absorb it, until you start thinking for yourself and either realize it's wrong or decide to embrace it. As for the other part of my theory, I'm thinking sort of a War of the Roses theme here--you know a feaud between the houses of Lancaster & York, or Romeo & Juliet?

Just a thought. And I'm glad they asked Harry to be Marcella's godfather, it was very thoughtful. Oh and will Gin be expecting after they get married?

last question, do you know anybody who likes making banners, 'cause I can use one for some of my other fics, especially Shadow Puppets and my new one-shot, A Friend In Need. Let me know, thanks!

Author's Response: Okay I will - though I have no idea who could make banners here. There used to be a place called "The Dark Arts" or something odd like that that made banners for other people. Have you joined the HPFF forums? There might be someone there that might be willing to make a banner or consider another site.

Oh, there's also MNFF (Their Beta Forums), but they only want their own members to be on there, so be careful if you're looking for a banner maker there (Ms.HermioneGranger is on there, but I think she's on break ever since she finished my two banners: Ugly Beauty & Vivian's Special Gift... so I'm not sure...)

Thanks for keeping up the ideas. :) I think that they are absolutely brilliant, but I'm sort of feeling dull this week. No one else is bothering to review. *sigh*

Thank you for being here though! ((The loner I spoke of in the responce to your other review... will probably remind you of someone... I'll let it be a surprise, mind!)

Your writer, reviewer, & friend,
~Melina♥

P/s: Ginger might be expecting, but you never know... Besides, Harry and Cicily will probably buy the cafe. :] Just so you know, dear Snapegirl. :D

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Do Sev please! I'd really like to get inside his head . . .among other things. Harry too, does he keep a journal? Or Cicily? Or how about Lily? Now that would be pretty interesting, especially since she could reveal a lot about James and Severus. Food for thought, right?

Author's Response: Haha... :D I was planning on Severus' being a pensive and Lily's being found somewhere, but I don't know where...

(Oh, Severus' should appear in this fic after the baby's born, just so you know -- Margo travels through their house looking for something to soothe the baby while Severus is teaching...)

Your writer/escritora,
~Meli♥

P/s: Next chapter is mostly Ginger's first year-first feast. :D [Ame]

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Oh I'm so happy that Sev and Margo are having a girl! What will they name her, I wonder? Maybe Lily? Or Eileen? And I'm happy that everyone's getting married too. I think that Sirius is going to admit that he kissed what's her name (I've forgotten) in the closet that day and wished it was Ginger. or perhaps there's some nasty secret prank that he performed on her that she never knew of, or that he used to think he didn't love her or maybe it's about the way he nearly got Sev killed with the werewolf incident, did Ginger know that?

Post soon.

My next chapter's up too, so check it out! It's got a great battle scene.

Author's Response: I have no idea what's going to happen (I'm in planning so far... as to what Sirius' journal will hold, but here's a clue: first year to his last or present year). :D

Thanks for coming and reviewing, Snapegirl! I'm going to update Behind the Sketches later. :) Be sure to review (and I totally can't wait for your next chapter!!)!

Oh, thanks for commenting (those ideas are fabulous! I'll just make some plot twists -- but I will credit thou word!).

I'll post soon. :)

Your (artsy & psychological) writer,
~Meli♥

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