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Reading Reviews for Crazy Romantics
  
35 Reviews Found

Review #26, by K Chapter Six

9th May 2015:
Great story and you have a lovely funny writing style.

Just one thing - it would be much easier to read if you could use his and he's correctly. Here's an example from Chase's note to Albus:
In this sentence "I know you donít agree that his sincere and wants to explain his absence." the first 'his' should be 'he's' (an abbreviation of 'he is' while the second is correct as it reads 'his absence' meaning the absence that belongs to him. In the feminine this is easier as the first is 'she's' or 'she is' and the second is 'her'. I suspect you (and many others!) are confused by the fact that in spoken English his and he's sound very similar! The best way to check is to try the sentence replacing the his with 'he is'. If that does NOT make sense then 'his' is correct, if it DOES make sense then use 'he's'.

I hope this is helpful and I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you. I really appreciate the feedback. And I will endeavour to fix those grammatical errors. As I know from being an avid fanfiction reader myself it's really hard sometimes to follow a story if the grammar is poor. So any little improvements and prompts are welcome. I'm glad your enjoying the story.

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Review #27, by Lil lily71 Chapter Five

21st March 2015:
This is my favourite chapter it was hilarious. And I want to know what exactly happened in the library in third year. Update soon please. :)

Author's Response: It's one of my favourites too. Yes more clues about third year soon. Unfortunately not in the next chapter, but maybe the one after that. Sorry it's taken me so long to update and reply to your review. I really appreciate hearing readers thoughts about the story. It really helps. The next chapter is awaiting validation so hopefully it won't be long and I have chapter 7 half written so hopefully that won't be too long either. Thanks again. Happy reading :)

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Review #28, by Lil lily71 Chapter Four

21st March 2015:
Great chapter I love how it ended so funny. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad it made you laugh :)

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Review #29, by Lil lily71 Chapter Three

13th March 2015:
Love this chapter. Rose's pranks are so funny and poor Albus and the raspberry muffins. :)

Author's Response: I'm relieved you enjoyed it. I was a little worried it didn't all tie together. Yes Albus needs to work on his culinary skills, or for the sake of the wizarding race, he better not :) Thanks for reading. The next chapter is Awaiting Validation, so hopefully won't be long :)

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Review #30, by Lil lily71 Chapter Two

13th March 2015:
Great chapter! I really like the way you've written Albus.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Review #31, by Bweasly Chapter Three

11th March 2015:
I was having dinner while I was reading this and when the "-But what I want to know, who is the father? -MALFOY" thing happened I just couldn't help but laugh out loud and my parents started to give me strange looks XDDD this is getting so funny and so cute and idk I just love it :3

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I appreciate the reviews so much. I like that the story is igniting laughter. Thanks for reading :)

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Review #32, by Bweasly Chapter Two

6th March 2015:
That was very cute! I really liked the Albus part. Hope you update soon ^.^

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

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Review #33, by Bweasly Chapter One

5th March 2015:
I'm already loving this story! Can't wait for the next :3

Author's Response: Thank You. Chapter 2 is posted and Chapter 3 is Awaiting Validation :)

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Review #34, by Lil lily71 Chapter One

3rd March 2015:
Awesome chapter. Update soon please :)

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Review #35, by Taylah Chapter One

2nd March 2015:
i love this!! please write more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter is awaiting validation. So hopefully it won't be long :)

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