LOVE IT!Author's Response: Thank you :3 Report Review
This story was so funny! It's ok that there will be no sequel sometimes you just have to write a story that won't take a year to post haha : )Author's Response: LOL, touche! You're totally right :)
Thanks so much! Report Review
no sequel? =[. this was cute anyway. Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Haha, I just found this again and saw that I hadn't reveiwed! So I'm going to now.
I really like the whole plot of the thing and it was well writen. Lily's little few words thought add something to it, don't know what, but it's good and that's what matters. Keep up the good work! This is in my favorites!
~ElizabethAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for the awesome review :3 Report Review
CUMMON!! YOU KNOW WE WANT A SEQUEL!Author's Response: Haha, I do...but I don't want to write one, I'll let you guys down... Report Review
Please? Pretty please? I'll be your life log fan if you give a sequel! U loved this is as much as James loves Lily! Puh-lease, mommy? *pout*Author's Response: Haha, that face wont work! Sorry, but I dont have the time... Report Review
Um, good. But I wants a sequel and I'm sad there is none. :(Author's Response: Sorry :( Glad you liked it though :) Report Review
thats really funny! and cute. :D :D loved it.Author's Response: Thank you :3 Report Review
Wow! why no sequel? It's brilliant!Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it! Report Review
omg. I love your writing!! Its crazy how good you are!!
Weasley kidAuthor's Response: Haha, no need to be, I'm not that good...and no, I'm not being modest :3 Report Review
this is really cute. i know you arn't goig to do a sequel, but you should let someone else do it... you or they could really do somewhere with this keep up the good work!Author's Response: Seriously, if someone wants to, they can, but I'm not. Thanks for reading, though, glad you liked it! Report Review
hello! i've just come from reading one of your other stories (the one where they snog in the broom cupboard). i liked it so much, i came to find another, and find another i did!
well done, yet again!!Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you like my stories! Report Review
this was so cute i love the ending Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it :) Report Review
that was cute!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
aww so sweet! really really good, well done!Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
I was upset that you used to word retard and surprised that the mods let it in at all. That truly took away from this fic for me. I am surprised that nobody else left a comment about this. I don't care if it's common slang in some circles, it's wrong and so increadibly offensive. We see Lily shortly in book 5 and just judging by that, I think we can draw the conclusion that she would never use this offensive term. One, because she's from the UK (therfore not privy to use American slang prevalent in 2006), and two, because she was shown as kind and compassionate, not at all subject to use a term that is cruel and degrading to a whole group of humanbeings. Author's Response: True, true, I see your point. I will change that right now. It was wrong of my to use it, it was a slip of the tounge. But I do have cousins from the UK (also, I am Australian) that do use that term, so yeah.
I am very sorry, and will change it now. But it was only a comment, many people use it and it sort of has a different, less offensive, meaning now-days.
I appologize for using it. Report Review
this story ROXZ!but you killed it by saying no sequelAuthor's Response: Hmm, I really thought I would spoil it by putting in a sequel... Report Review
Author's Response: Lol, I am glad you thought so! Report Review
I'm actually really glad there is no sequel. Because this is amazingly funny and w/ quite a good personality. We all know what's going to happen. leave it at that! no sequel needed! I adore this story - quite amusing. Oh, you captured the personalities perfectly, too.
and a 10/10
DragonetteAuthor's Response: Lol, you are the only (besides me) who thinks that :) But, no, there's no sequel. I probably would have killed it if I did. Which I am not :)
Thanks so much for the review, I am glad you liked it! Report Review
pretty good...sorta fluffy and fast-paced, but still goodAuthor's Response: Lol, the fluff was intended. This was a totally pointless story :)
I am glad you liked it :) Report Review
haha. very lovely.Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
good story i likeAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
ha ha!! Excellent start there mate!! Real smashing intro if you ask me. Comic like James, sweet like Lily. I like it.Author's Response: Haha, I am glad you think so! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Lily really was going through a type of emotional roller coaster in this fic wasn't she? From furious to happy to thrilled to lethal to competitive, it was very interesting and I liked it. I liked how James was portrayed and I liked how Sirius was portrayed. Good job! YAY!Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you liked it! I love torturing Lily :) It is so much fun! Report Review
Wow, this is just.. AMAZING! It's hilarious, and I love Lily here! Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you like it! Report Review
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