I loved it. Muggle jammies-how cute!!!!! How incredibly cute! But Petunia and Lily playing together? Strange, but possible, I guess. Please write a sequel and/or more stories like this. It's good to know that there's still some good authors in the world today. James also predicted Harry would be Seeker and catch the Snitch every time-or almost every time. Good bit there. "Brave in baby blue," I love it. And a lion with "brave" on it in a Muggle shop? What a coincidence! I absolutely LOVED it!!! WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!Author's Response: Well, I am absolutely touched, thank you so much for that wonderful review!! I think what I am going to do, since Muggle Jammies had such a great response, is make it a series of one shots based on Lily's pregnancy. So, don't worry, there's more to follow! Report Review
awwww. ok. what ev.
Author's Response: Don't fret though, because after I answered your last review, I had an idea that I might make into another chapter!! yay!! Report Review
Ahh...very nice! I love Lily's enthusiam!Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I thought having her enthusiasm was very important, because it seems that Lily's character is very bright and uplifting in the books, so I wanted to make her the same way in this story! Report Review
is it done cuz i don't want it to be done!Author's Response: Well, If I have any more ideas that pertain to it I would be happy to add more, but right now it's going to stay a one shot!! thanks for the review! Report Review
A little to predicatble...all truth...exept for captin in third yaerAuthor's Response: yes, well, what I was trying to go for there was James' enthusiasm for quidditch. And I did put Chaser in there too, not just seeker. I was also trying to evoke some bittersweet sadness, because James said something like "we'll be there the whole time." So, that was also part of it. Either way, James was just kinda talking, he wasn't like, seeing into the future or anything. But thanks for the review! Author's Response: Also, now that i think about it, to James, being on the team as a first year would be awesome, because it hasn't been done before, and he's thinking his kid is going to be like, awesome, so of course his child would be on the team the first year. Did I make it clear? I don't know... Report Review
cute....... loved it! good job!
Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
awwww that was sweet-JenAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
That was sweet and funny! Good job! I really enjoyed reading it! Happy writing~~~DobbyAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for the kind review! Report Review
That's the first LilyJames story I've ever liked and I never read them, oh this is good!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I don't like Lily James stories either because, frankly, they are all the same! But I figured this one would be a little different than all the rest. Report Review
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