I'll be damned if Blaise came into the pictureAuthor's Response: Ha that seems to be the general consensus so far but you'll all just have to wait and see ;D Thanks for your review! Report Review
I just started reading this and I didn't put it down until I finished it all. I'm dying for more! You're an awesome writer. Please update SOON!Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! That really made me feel good and now I'm smiling like this :D Thanks for your review! Report Review
This chapter is so captivating. I don't want Hermione and Blaise to end!Author's Response: A lot of people have been saying that! It seems some Dramione fans are leaning towards, what would Hermione and Blaise be called? Hermaise? Blone? Blaione? Well whatever! Thanks for your review lol :) Report Review
omg so new reader here! im nat btw! i love this story, and draco & hermione are so well written. i love your writing style. hehe i think draco is good in this story, a bit of romance, action, awe that ending part of this chapter so sexy of him! lol! :] i love her new kitten kind of reminds me of aristocats. and harry and ron should be in it more! :/ *sniffs* at least harry not ron lol! im lovin the house unity sorta. update soon!Author's Response: Hi Nat! I've gotten some feedback about seeing more Ron and Harry and I promise I'm listening! As for the rest, it almost feels like it's developing by itself, like with the house unity it didn't really occur to me that was happening until I was going back and reading the chapters ha. Thanks for your review! Report Review
Finally a chapter..thank you for updating I thought you'd abandoned the story or something haha this chapter is good...please update real soon 10/10Author's Response: There's no way I'd abandon this story! It's just hard to write sometimes and I've had a lot of things going on. Thanks for your review :) Report Review
Hey its Tragic here,
IVE BEEN WAITING SO LONG. I love this novel so much, its amazing. A great work of art. Thank you so much for making my night and adding a chapter to this lovely story, i really adore Draco/Hermione fan fictions and yours is one of the best. Im writing one now with Magic, although its quite different feel free to read the few chapters it has at the moment. Thank you once again, regards TragicAuthor's Response: Thank you for your review! You're really too sweet :) I'll try to check out your story and see what it's about. Thanks for letting me know! Report Review
sure, please continue b4 u kill mi itz 2 intrestingAuthor's Response: Thank you for your review! Report Review
ohmySTARS! WHEREEE THE FLIP HAVE I BEEN?!
do not fear i am back! lol soo the fredster is the first ehh? lol that little minx, this is too much for me to handle how did i not review this long time ago?! im slipping hardcore idk what to say-.-
ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!Author's Response: Lol it sounds like you're enjoying it and that makes me happy! Thanks for your review, I hope you enjoy the next few chapters :) Report Review
omg I need to know her answer!!! Update soon!Author's Response: Here we are, waiting in anticipation on a short string with a big fuse. Who or what will light the explosion?! Thanks for your review :D Report Review
OMG let them be together NOW! it was a GREAT chapter, am I the only one who thinks it was a short one? I mean i loved it! so unexpected, so perfect! but idk.. maybe it's me, I gues I just can't wait for more! anyway I know about your writer's block so I forgive you:)! I really hope you write more soon, I love your story! thanks for this chapter!Author's Response: If you know about the writer's block you must be on the fan page ha. Yes it was short chapter, I don't know why but I really struggled with it... It was the kind of thing where I knew what I wanted to say but for some reason just couldn't get it out. It was very frustrating -_- But thanks for hanging in there and I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for your review :) Report Review
moree Dramione action pleaseee:D but fantastic chapter!!Author's Response: It's coming my dear bwahahaha! Thanks for your review! Report Review
This whole story is just absolutely amazing. Your writing makes it so easy to visualize every detail and feel in the moment. I can feel the story heating up, and you're keeping us all on the edge here!! Keep up the fantastic work!Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! That makes me feel really good :) I'm so glad you like it and I hope you'll continue reading! Thank you for your review! Report Review
Normally when I find a new story that's already quite well into it, I read it through then leave one comment on the most recent chapter. I've known what I was going to say for a while - and then this last chapter completely threw me! So, in regards to the general story, I love the idea, although I wish she'd apply the theories she reads to the people in question. Such as when she was trying to figure out Draco's "type", I had been really looking forward to her using a strategy based on that.
I think what you've done with the last chapter is interesting, and certainly a very realistic problem for her, but it feels like the story's got off track from the original idea.
Still, a great read, and I've hugely enjoyed it.Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Throughout the story I've gotten many reviews that a chapter felt off from the original idea, but a few chapters later they saw the connection and realized it was all related! So just stay tuned and I'm sure you'll feel the same :) It's true that new problems seem to be popping up but I promise it's all part of the plan and it's all related to my plot. Thanks for your review, I hope to hear from you again! Report Review
hi I love this story!
I originally found it on wattpad and I was wondering of you could update it on there also?...if that's possible ;) ( I find the lay out on wattpad is better on my phone) if not that's fine:)
thanks heaps and happy writing
PeachesAuthor's Response: To be honest, I have completely forgotten I was even posting on wattpad lol. But I'll try to get on there and update :) Thanks for your review! Report Review
I love love love it!!! All of it! Write more! I need more! ;)Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! More is on the way! Report Review
Please write more. I really like this story!Author's Response: I'm working on it! Thank you so much for your review :) Report Review
Most out of character Hermione I've ever read. You've made her a Bella, you've stripped everything from her that makes her the great person she is. I'm sorry, but I'm really angry right now at myself for reading all of this. What a waste of time.Author's Response: It must not have been a waste of time if you read through 31 chapters :P Thanks for your lovely review! Report Review
I love this story so much! It's killing me, please update soon. The Art of Seduction is very interesting and if you don't update, I think I'm going to go crazy and check on this story everyday until you do. Amazing story, keep it up! :) Oh and I LOVE DRACO AND HERMIONE! Okay, that is all before I write a book on how flawless this story is.Author's Response: I'm sorry it's taken so long for an update but I'm working on it right now (I feel guilty for letting it linger so long) so I promise this time it'll be up soon! Thank you so much for your review! Especially the last part, it made me smile really big :D Report Review
awesome story. never been one for dramione but it's fantastic! I love how Hermione's feeling. keep going!Author's Response: Aw I'm glad you're enjoying it, especially if you've never really been a fan of Dramione fics! Thank you for your review, I hope you'll keep reading :) Report Review
pls pretty pls review!!! i loved this chapter and its gotta be th best one yet!Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I know it took a while to get it out but it seems like everyone is enjoying it :) Thanks for your review! Report Review
More! More! More! I need to know what happens next!Author's Response: More is on the way! :D Thank you for your review! Report Review
I JUST LOVED IT! i think you portrayed haarry's feeling just fine, i mean he is the chosen one. but at the same time i think he really needs to have friends to help him with all this problems he has throughout his life. after i thought about it for a while i did share the same opinion harry had about hermione not being there when needed... you got me thinking for a sec that lupin was dead, but I AM SO GLAD HE ISN'T... maybe just not yet. D: draco was really worried about hermione, wasn't he? he should tell hermione a little preview about what is going to come, i mean he does has something for her right? is blaise involved in all of this as well? i am really anxious to know what comes next, i appreciate you making this chapter longer ! please take care, i don't think we (readers) want you to be sick or having boyfriend problems! see ya next time you update! XDAuthor's Response: I wrote Harry that way because I was so incredibly stressed with college and finals were coming up and it just seemed like... So many people were expecting things of me and I wasn't sure if I was ready for the challenge, which is how I've always imagined Harry to feel with being told he's "The Chosen One" and whatnot.
As for Draco and Blaise, well saying too much about them would be a spoiler wouldn't it? They're both unpredictable, even for from the writer's end! So I guess we'll all have to wait, myself included, to see what happens next.
Thanks for your review!! I love getting long ones where people really tell me how they feel, getting feedback really helps me write :) Report Review
I loved it and it's understandable that it takes a while to update sometime, authors have lives too :) people are anxious to read, that's a good thing! :)
I agree that Harry did act like that sometimes, that's what I like about j.k, her characters showed both good and bad sides!
I hope to see some Draco and hermione action soon ;3Author's Response: I agree! As J.K. Rowling wrote in Half-Blood Prince, "We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are."
Thank for your review :) Report Review
I love Blaise, too! :) But...this is a Dracom/Hermione story, after all...Author's Response: A lot of people love Blaise despite it being a Dramione story! Report Review
Ooh, I'm likin' it...Author's Response: I'm glad :) Report Review
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