It really doesn't make sense for them to leave the bedroom to go to the couch and then come back to the bedroom. They should just stay there. If you want him to carry her into the bedroom, write it differently, this way just doesn't make much sense...

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ITS kewl take your time i thought it was really good but i might not read the sequel

Author's Response: that is fine, i don't like the sequel much. I'm so glad you liked the story!

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Where is this sequel?
10/10

Author's Response: sequel is posted and running

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wow

Author's Response: yeah another one of those types of chapters in this story

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OMG How Can Hermione Just Let Ron Waltz Right Into Her And Her Babies Life After What He Did. But Your Way Of Wrighting Is Fantastic, And The Plot Is Quite Original. Loved It. xx 10/10 xx

Author's Response: well it was difficult but it was mainly because she knew his family would hate her, and she loved his family, and she didn't want them hating George

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So What Excactly Did Ron Do To Her?

Author's Response: well he violated her if you know what I mean, im not sure if I'm allowed to say exactly in a review

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Oo Naught Naught Hermione haha x

Author's Response: I know, Hermione has to have some fun some time right...

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no
hermione has to wake up!!
but this is a great story and ron is just dumb haha

Author's Response: aww, I hope you don't hate me for the sequel. It wasn't my best. I'm so glad you liked this story it was one of my favorites

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ok, well despite the warning, i went ahead and read it. and wow, i'm only fourteen and i really have no idea about any of that, but i must say that's terrific writing. haha i can't believe i'm saying that

Author's Response: Well I'm glad you read it, I just hope you don't come back to kill me later on! Thanks for the reveiw!

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OMG...how could you? I need more, please make them be George's kids and not Ron's!!! George is way better! and better looking, lol!! I can't wait for more!!!


Author's Response: well they are don't worry! And he so is!

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ughh. man.
sequel pleasseee soon!

Author's Response: sequel is up, but no great promises i wrote it in a hurry

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HOLY MOTHER OF ME! YOU HURRY UP WITH THAT SEQUEL!
10/10
OH MY GOD!

Author's Response: it's up and running

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You are so evil to harm Hermione in any way.

Author's Response: she gets all better

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WHAT!??!?!?!?!?!??!?!?! ARE YOU KIDDING ME!

Author's Response: just keep reading!

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What a tough ending can't wait to read the one-shots to find out what happens!

Author's Response: it justs turns out to be a one shot!

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Wonderful! I loved this chapter, however you've made me hate ron more.

Author's Response: i know. i didn't like ron much when i wrote that chapter

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It ended perfectly fine! such a mysterious george should tell ron about the kids being his anywayz its really good fantastic job for a story i will be following the sequel of course as ur loyal reader jaja great job again for a story well written n very romantic!
-iliana

Author's Response: thankyou so much. i have lots of people on the edge with this ending, i could take it so many ways...

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something is wrong and there is an error, the story is missing and i cant read it, just the chapter, but i really really really want to know what happens in this chapter it seems important considering what happens next

Author's Response: i think i fixed it finally...

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good story can't wait for sequeal

Author's Response: the sequel isn't all that grand, it doesn't do the story justice but I'm feeling rushed. Thank you for reading

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I keep getting this weird error, could you e-mail me the chapter, Thankies!


Author's Response: I tried to fix this chapter so many times!

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OMG OH NO! Im going to go read the sequel!.tomorrow

Author's Response: thats good because it's up

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(didnt get to read chapter 12 yet -_-) OMG ! Ginny ya shoulda kept ya trap shut!

Author's Response: i know, i hope you get to read 12

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Hey could you email this chapter to me? It wont work it says "Error locating story text please contanct administrator (chapterid=254584)

Author's Response: i think it should be working now, some people have read it

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I love this, George and Hermione are so right for eachother.

Author's Response: that is what i think

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Oh no... Ron just dump her! This is such a good story I love it


Author's Response: haha no ones mentioned that part to me yet

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