Way too short! But thanks for finally updating! Keep up the good work

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Way too short! But thanks for finally updating! Keep up the good work

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Whew! Thank-you for updating (finally) - I was glad to get back into the story....I missed George & Bess! But that chapter was way too short and I need more! Pls update soon!

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OMG - another fantastic chapter...you're really keeping me on my toes. I love the tiny details like how Bess explains why she contiued to date George even knowing he was pretending to be Fred. And the stuff with Mundungus. AND, I can't wait to see what's happening now with Fred! YOU MUST UPDATE THIS SOON! Seriously, I'm on pins & needles, here!

Author's Response: I am planning on updating this soon. Sorry, RL has reared it's ugly head and I haven't had any free time to devote to this guilty pleasure. Thank-you for the compliments...!

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Ooo...spicy! Great love scene, you should be writing books. Seriously. Really, I hate to sound like a broken record, but another great chapter. You keep me guessing!

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Okay, that was, bar none, the best impression of Lupin I've read. Wow, really good. That was, really, really spot on. Great chapter. I love all of the little touches you added - very creative!

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Fantastic chapter. Really great. So hot. Loved it. I really like the characters. I can't wait to see how you're going to resolve this.

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Hmm...very interesting. I like it. I'm really curious to see where you're going with this. It started out like a straight romance fic, but it's turning into something else. And you wrote Dumbeldore really well! I'm impressed!

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Good chapter, but I want more!

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Okay- wow! that was a fantastic first kiss. Loved it. It was hot & spicy. And the rest of the chapter was most excellent...I loved the conversation at the end where they're telling her about Dumbledore & she asked if Harry Potter bought his way onto the Quidditch team. Clever!

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Good chapter, but not as good as the others. I suppose a lot of this is just exposition...so I'll forgive it if the next chapter picks up the pace

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Wow, really good. I like the length of the chapter, too. It's like a real book length or whatever. I like your story because it feels layered....and all of the various layers with the different characters and quirks give it a reality that fits in with the JKrowling world, yet, you've still got your own flavor.

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Wow! Great beginning. I'm intriguied and I'm curious to see where this is going, although I have some ideas...

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are you ever going to update?! i need more of this story!

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are u coming back and posting?..cause i REALLY like it..please please please continue at your earliest convenience!

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Um....are you ever going to update this? I want to know what is going to happen..? :o(

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Gosh what a great story so far. You should really start writing original material. I'd certainly buy it!

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OMG! This story is so friggen awesome, it's like a real book or something. You should like, write for real or something! PLease update this asap, i can't wait to find out what is going to hapen, and whats happened to FRED!

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ahh! ooo! suspense! i love it!

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damn suspense!!! so good...must discover what is happening...UPDATE VERY SOON! :D

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YOU STOPPED!...i can't believe it! **stares at screen** ::still sits and wait patiently for more:: ~starts to get un-nerved and tries to keep scrolling down~ !! starts to throw random objects at computer!!...that was NOT nice...but the chapter was REALLY REALLY good...i LOVE it when they fight!...it makes u realize how much they really LOVE each other...hehe laters and <3 ::tackle hugs:: PWEASE up date SOON!

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*clapping* Wow! That was really, really, really good. I loved this - I think it was written really well, I could totally picture everything in my head and now I'm dying to know what's going to happen! How is this going to end! Why didn't Bess confront George about him spying on Herbert?

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omg! i loved this chapter! keep writing!

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OMGAW that was PERFECT!...::sighs::...u really know how to make a reader happy ""gives a goofy smile""...SO glad u updated!...hehe can't wait till the next! laters and <3

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wow, i really like this story. its very interesting and the plot is really unique. i can't wait to find out wat happens next, so update asap! please! it's progressing so well, very well paced. i can't wait to see how you're going to end it!

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