{reviewid: 892037, reviewer: 'qwertyelf'}
6th February 2006:
So a handprint for two days? I did that once to a guy I liked because he was like teasing me and taunting me, so i slaped across the face the handprint was there for like ten minutes though he still remembers it even though were really good friends now. boys I LOVE IT
Author's Response: Haha. I know, who hasn't wanted to sock a guy for being stupid? You, know, the hardest part of writing this chapter was getting that right. I couldn't decide whether I wanted her to punch him or slap him. I feel that if the mark hung around for a couple days it might have been a punch. =D
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{reviewid: 892035, reviewer: 'qwertyelf'}
6th February 2006:
Harry is a PRAT but aren't all boys?
Author's Response: Yes they are. Sadly enough, they do the things that hurt the most when they're trying to 'protect' us. They don't seem to understand that's not thier purpose. Daddys and brothers are for protection. Duh.
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{reviewid: 892034, reviewer: 'qwertyelf'}
6th February 2006:
awww that dream was beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 886678, reviewer: 'mum_weasley'}
2nd February 2006:
What a sweet story. Off to read the other ones now!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 885615, reviewer: 'Elveney'}
1st February 2006:
It's a great story!! I'm off to read the other ones, =D
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked! =D
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{reviewid: 885088, reviewer: 'Garn%20Snaretooth'}
1st February 2006:
Very nice piece for the future....plays on Ginny's volatile temperament exceptionally well...please make Sammy the Cat an account!
Author's Response: Thank you! Ginny is my very favorite to write. I think its because she actually says and does the things we all secretly want to say and do.
Sammy the cat is grounded from the computer. And the computer desk. He killed my printer. Haha.
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{reviewid: 858609, reviewer: 'Seductive_Swan'}
14th January 2006:
Definitely a story line worth continuing, pleae do. Like, make a sequel or something; one where they have kids and all of that. Please?
Author's Response: Thanks! If you haven't yet, check out Flour. It's a story in this series. I've been on hiatus due to school, but I'm working on a couple other short stories to go with the series. Hopefully this summer, when I have time to think, let alone write, I'll have time to do a Weasley / Potter kids feature of some sort. =D Thanks for the encouragement!
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{reviewid: 710727, reviewer: 'Amy'}
27th September 2005:
Really well done story. it was awesome
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{reviewid: 710240, reviewer: 'rebecca'}
26th September 2005:
oh my god u should really become an aurthor that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 680443, reviewer: 'bree'}
3rd September 2005:
luvd it! i can't wait for chap. 8!
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{reviewid: 659007, reviewer: 'Ollie'}
21st August 2005:
thats cute....i like it...
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{reviewid: 646235, reviewer: 'hptrump'}
13th August 2005:
good story. Yes it is worth continuing if you have more.
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{reviewid: 642015, reviewer: 'Squishy_Fred'}
11th August 2005:
I think it's worth continuing! I think it's great!!!!!!!!! Go for it!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 636595, reviewer: 'liv'}
8th August 2005:
yes this is definatley worth continueing i love it write more plz
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{reviewid: 615518, reviewer: 'harrys%20best%20gal'}
28th July 2005:
i really liked dat u should rite another chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! Actually, I have kind of written a sequal, and I'm working on a prequal, as well as other sequals. Just so you know, I hope to have a whole series of short stories that tie into this one.
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{reviewid: 610177, reviewer: 'AmberEloquence'}
26th July 2005:
This was a really good story, and I enjoyed it! The ending was really sweet!
-AmberEloquence
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing all the chapters - and pointing out the errors. I edit the heck out of them myself, and I usually do miss a few things...spelling never has been my strong suit. Anyhow, I'm glad you liked it. =D
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{reviewid: 610155, reviewer: 'AmberEloquence'}
26th July 2005:
Nothing to correct in this chapter, so good with that! I think Ron's son is really adorable! And this is random: I have a cat named Sammy too :P
-AmberEloquence
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{reviewid: 610143, reviewer: 'AmberEloquence'}
25th July 2005:
I really liked this chapter! The way that Harry and Ginny interacted was really good, and I like your style. Great job!
-AmberEloquence
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{reviewid: 610124, reviewer: 'AmberEloquence'}
25th July 2005:
I really like this, and have added it to my favorites. Everything flows nicely, and it all just . . . fits. I noticed a few spelling mistakes, but nothing really big.
-AmberEloquence
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{reviewid: 610103, reviewer: 'AmberEloquence'}
25th July 2005:
Another good chapter! I saw a couple spelling mistakes, and you don't need to put thoughts in quotations. Just italics is fine.
-AmberEloquence
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{reviewid: 610070, reviewer: 'AmberEloquence'}
25th July 2005:
You're a really good writer! I'm surprised this hasn't gotten any more reviews! Well, there's only two things I want to comment on: I noticed that some things needed to be capitalized, (The Burrow and Ministry), and that there were a couple grammar mistakes. Other than that, it was really good!
-AmberEloquence
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{reviewid: 610044, reviewer: 'AmberEloquence'}
25th July 2005:
Ooh, this was interesting! I like your wording, and the dialogue you write is very good! The only suggestion I have for this chapter is to not put the Begin Flashback and End Flashback bit, but just put the flashback in italics and make a mention of the date. It makes it a lot better when you are able to do that.
-AmberEloquence
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{reviewid: 599140, reviewer: 'Paddy_Foot_80'}
18th July 2005:
Wow! Awsome story! I never really came round to the whole Harry/Ginny idea but this fic really made me love it! The sixth book helped me warm to it to! (wink wink lol) Anyway this is a great story and its really well written!!!!! You have tons of talent!!!! Please continue! You could probably make harry's worst fears come true when after they get married Ginny gets captured or something.... I dunno but please keep going !!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I havent gotten so far as to after the marriage...or even the marriage. All in good time though.
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{reviewid: 581749, reviewer: 'el%20mago'}
7th July 2005:
Don't you get it? This is an awesome story! You have to continue it! Great ending, I may have said this before but I really like the fics that don't start off all happy, these ones that go on and they don't get together for some time are more real. AnYwAY Great story and I look forward to seeing more from you!
Author's Response: Have I told you how much I like you?? Well, incase I haven't, I really like you. It totally makes my day when I login and see a happy review...that actually has some substance to it. Woot.
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{reviewid: 569727, reviewer: 'el%20mago'}
29th June 2005:
Haha loved the title and the chapter too. If you wanted to know, Harry, Ron and Hermione attended Hogwarts from 1991-1997. Keep up the good work, its sad to see that its ending soon but hey, all good things have to end... cya
Author's Response: Thanks. I can never keep that straight. I was going through my notes ((I know, I'm such a nerd)) and discovered that I even had it written down. Whoops. No worries about it ending. I'm thinking of just making a series composed with oneshots and other short little ficlets like this one.
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