that was nice i like how you made it sound all like what harry said in the third movie, its CUTEAuthor's Response: I know the idea struck me. I love that scene Report Review
poor amber i promise i didnt see it coming, its not my fault...please forgive me Author's Response: How could you do that to her you fiend???!! Report Review
its me again, hello. anyway well i am running out of thing to say again so i will say t he same thing over. I LLLOOOOVVEEE IT.Author's Response: lol thanks once again Tay Report Review
once again i gotta read more, i gotta read more. im hooked on it now i love it, i love it, I LOVE IT!!!!! ahh going insane. ok im calm. its SOOOOOOOOOO CCCOOOOOOLLLAuthor's Response: lol Tay. Don't overdose Report Review
i love it, interesting twist, cant wait to read the next chapter Author's Response: :) Meep Report Review
haha. well, you're in my faves list so keep it up. ok? -shinymusic626Author's Response: I'll try. I'm halfway through the next chapter :) I hope ya'll like it Report Review
got to love rock-paper-scissors, it determines all. and just doesnt love pink and purple ping-pong balls, i mean come on its awesome. once again nicely done, and im in the story!!!!!! yay me!!!!!!! *claps*Author's Response: Muahahahahaahahahahahahah! Now my plan is beginning to form... First get my friends to like the story, then random people, THEN THE WORLD! Report Review
you know your good at this, and i was just wondering can i have your autograph for the future when you become famous and all. it was really, well i cant even explain it im running out of words to say Author's Response: Aww fankies. And what shall I have the autograph say? "To my dearest friend Tay, am I famous yet?" Yeah I bet you could sell that on ebay now for about 3 cents! wh00t! Report Review
it was very touching. it brought a tear to my eye. now thats the way writing is supposed to be like. you are doing a fantastic job, keep em' comin'Author's Response: Awwww Really? I feel speacial Tay. Real speacial Report Review
oh wow that was...umm..how you say...very strange, in a good way of course. i would never mean anything in a bad way *bats eyelashes*Author's Response: Aww I cant get mad at you *pets Taylor* Report Review
wow!! sirius said ditto!! interesting. once again i really like it and i dont like writing long reviews just cause i cant think of anything to say.. so well keep it up (even though i know you have) nice job :)Author's Response: Hooray. Whats so weird about saying ditto? Report Review
cool!! and trust me im not just saying this because you told me to review or anything i really mean it. how can you and amber make up all awesome storys while here i am just..well...just not being creative. maybe i should try harder, well anyway i really like it thanks for telling me to read it. and now on to the other chapters.Author's Response: Now I'm embarrassed and you can write more and you can write good you just have to let your emotions flow and you can't be lazy. Although it may be embarrassing when you do let your emotions flow DO IT ANYWAY! Report Review
love the story, it's brillant, really and very well done!!!!!! it's so very good, poor amber!!!*tear* but i still luv it. update soon, as fast as you can. fantastic, i love everything, keep it up!!!!!! update please. thanxs 4 leading me to this story, one of my favs now. :) honestly. see ya, talk to you in hogwarts experience. (HE) hehe lol byeAuthor's Response: Aww thanks. Ya made my day. My next chapter will be up soon it has to be validated Report Review
My favorite chapter so far, i loved it, awww.... i thought she really liked remus, i love that ship!!! don't get me wrong, i luv james/lily too, i just think remus/lily would be so adorable, but i absolutely adored this chapter. great story so far, i really love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!8/10 especially the ending. lol. lily's face=priceless.Author's Response: Meh remus/lily isn't so bad, but I just love James/Lily so much more. :) Glad ya liked it. I haven't gotten reviews in a while and really appreaciate it Report Review
I love it, sort of confused on the names though!!!! i mean, when you say James, you mean james but in lilys body right!!! i'm pretty sure, but i love it!!!! it's really good, it's very nice!!! i thought you said you were unsure about your writing, this is an awesome story so far, it's definitely doesn't sound like unsure, well got to go and read more, see ya!!!! :)Author's Response: Well I like stuff when I write it but after I writew it I despise it Report Review
wow, lol! that just cracked me up and made me laugh so much, even if poor Amber is in distress she'll get over it, i think. Anyway Ms. Author can i ask you a question? Yes? okay good. What is Lily on? Author's Response: A doseage of peanut butter and sugar mixed. Highly dangerous Report Review
cute Author's Response: Why thank you. I'll be putting up the next chapter up once I get my internet back. I'm on my friends computer right now :) Report Review
even though i knew it would happen, it was still really badAuthor's Response: Yes I know. Its awful isnt it? *cackles* Report Review
ooooo great new chapter. normally id be far more excited but i just woke up and im having a really bad day so thanks for making it better.Author's Response: I'm glad you feel a bit better. I've had those bad days. I completly understand. Hopefully you'll be better soon. I don't like it when people feel sad :( Thanks for reviewing, you my first one for this chapter Report Review
Heehee - I love the title of the chapter, although I find it annoying at all!!! Great final line, and great banner, if I haven't mentioned that before. Well done! Paloma (anxiously awaiting the next one.)Author's Response: Ok I'll try and update soon. And thanks about my banner, I made it myself :) Report Review
that was so much of a filler chapter, maybe just a littleAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review :) Report Review
You are in so much trouble!!! GIVE US THE BALL!!! GIVE US THE BALL!!! *Starts mob*Author's Response: Uhh Amber I'm getting scared now.. *steps backward and trips and mob comes and carries me away* NoOO! You shall pay for this *grabs peanut butter* Muahahahahahaha! I have their leader! Bow minions bow! Report Review
i think that the story is a bit to modern, especially this chapter but i think that it is really greatAuthor's Response: Yeah I guess you could say that, but as I am a modern person I guess it comes naturally tome. Thanks for the review Report Review
Awesome, Lily is mad at me?Author's Response: More like jealous Ambers XD Report Review
OH NO! JAMES FOUND THE DIARY!!!!! POOR LILY'S GONNA BE SO EMARRSED! Author's Response: *cackles* Bwuahahaha! Yes she is. Report Review
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