its was twisted and dark and soo demented!!
i completely abhor draco in this one-shot!!
i felt so sorry for her. for some reason i didnt like hermione all that much either. though i felt a wee bit for her. but my heart went out to pansy.
i love the name you chose for the one shot "Paramour"
what made you think of it? ^_-
i loved how you incoperated the lyrics in with the emotion and intensity of the atmosphere. the dread!! ^_^ and the way pansy felt wowieee!!
~MirrorAuthor's Response: Aw your reviews are always so refreshing ^_^ Thank you sweet heart ^_^ I actually did a dictionary search for a word that fit the definition I was looking for ^_- Report Review
Ahna, that was gorgeous!! I can't even begin to describe how good it was! I love the fact how you made Pansy speak the lyrics. Very well done!Author's Response: Thank you sweetie ^_^ Report Review
Wow! That was absolutely amazing.
Draco really messed up. I can't believe he killed Pansy, then left her in the tub for all to see. How stupid could one man get? He might not even get to the Dark Lord, who knows, maybe someone in the Order will kill him instead or maybe they could both kill him together, but I doubt that could happen because they'd just end up killing each other. Honestly, how could Draco be so stupid?
Oh! For Pansy, was she a ghost, or was it only in his mind. And when he said that he had already taken care of it, did he mean killing Pansy?
I really like how all the words from Pansy was from the lyrics to "Never Again" (I love that song!) I think this is one of the few songs-fics you did that didn't use a Evanescence song. I congradulate you on that, all the dark Evanescence and their matching fics can cause the person to want to read something happier afterwards (not that they aren't well-written, just so, so dark), not that this story wasn't pretty dark. I liked the change.
Now that I've rambled on nonsense for far too long, I'd like to say brilliant story and I can't wait to read more.
10/10Author's Response: That is the question. She was a manifestation of guilt, whether you interperet that as ghost or mind is completely up to you ^_^. I know! This is only the second one I believe that did not use Evanescence.. how odd! Report Review
Hunny, that was simply amazing, and possibly one of the best things to have come from your lovely mind. beautiful imagery - chilling and disturbing, but you know i love that. i was confused in the beginning, but then i worked out she was a ghost once you mentioned her hair looked wet.. i had a feeling about what had happened...
what wonderful characterisation Celtic. Absolutely stunning Draco. you handled it so well - his guilt, his complete manner - the whole flight or fight...wow. i can't put it into words. it was breathtaking. and Hermione was excellent - but Pansy! she was suberb. i loved every little thing about her. the final scenes in the bedroom were amazing. i could feel how freaked out draco was, and i loved the way pansy's ghost (or vision of his guilt) moved around the room taunting him. excellent work.
i will dream of this fic, i know i will. its another that is going to stay with me and another that is going straight into my favs.
*hugs* beautiful darling!!
Maji xxAuthor's Response: Wow, eh? Hee hee. Aw Maji, how I love thy reviews. I think I may have mastered.. or semi mastered... my Draco. Finally. lol. Dontcha love how you just feel miserable for Pansy? Aw. It amazes me. Dream about it eh? Wowzies. Report Review
Firstly I'd like to say that I love this song. Secondly: oh my God! You incorporated the lyrics into the story extremely well. I loved it how you made it seem like the music video as well. This is such a powerful song, and the way you applied it to Draco, Hermione and Pansy was just awesome. I also loved the way you made Draco murder Pansy. The entire thing was very believable and I loved the ending. To sum all my ranting up, I loved it. You've wowed me again, Celtic, and as a result this is going on my website spotlight. Excellent work! ^_-Author's Response: Hey Mel my darling. It was the music video that inspired this ^_-. This is a very powerful song, I adore it! Aw website spotlight?? Thanks sweetie ^_^ Report Review
That was kinda scary...but I liked it. I like how Draco was potrayed, as awful it truly was. I never interpreted the lyrics that way, but it certanly made me think. Author's Response: Thank you ^_- I am glad I could stir a new interpretation for you ^_^ Report Review
WOW! AWESOME! :D that was incrediable! Wow! You definitely gave this justice mate, that was astounding! The banner is gorgeous btw, I love it. The powerful imagery and words you used in this were superb and everything in it equalled a mind blowing read! You're a brilliant writer! This was so damn good! :D 10/10, favs and on my site, rock on Ahna! Rock on! :D xoxoAuthor's Response: Aw tis my Kate who is not feeling well -hugs- Aw shucks I'm brilliant? Report Review
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