{reviewid: 2698141, reviewer: '%3A%29'}
17th May 2012:
Oh gosh I thought this story was completed, that's why I started reading. Just saw it wasn't, after reading chapter 21! But I love the story!!! So please continue writing, can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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{reviewid: 2689939, reviewer: '....'}
25th April 2012:
UPDATE PLEASE! too amazing to stop now!
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{reviewid: 2686548, reviewer: 'needddd'}
17th April 2012:
please update soon! great story!
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{reviewid: 2683432, reviewer: 'peaches_369'}
9th April 2012:
please write soon... i love this fan fic!!!
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{reviewid: 2676950, reviewer: 'weasleytwins123'}
25th March 2012:
Wow! I've had you as one of my favourited authors for a while now, but I'd never read this particular story before! And I wish I has sooner, because it's brillant!
Dom is lovely, and you write the whole family so well! This story also helps me deal with this strange bout of maternal urges I've been experiencing recently, which probably isn't too healthy at my age of sixteen!
I also like how you haven't gone down the route of Dom and Teddy gettin together. Although, if you do, I'll have no objections, I was definetely rooting for that in the first ten or so chapters! But in the more recent chapters, I've taken a liking to Victoire more. But I love Hayes, and whatever way you go with this story, I know I'll love it!
I also loved the James and Sarah thing, James is just so adorable and lovely!
Also, you've been funny throughout but I literally burst into tears of laughter at this one-
“Last time you said that, your son almost lost an arm.”
“That was his fault I told him not to touch that flamingo.”
It was just SO George, I loved it! Haha!
Anyway, thanks for being awesome and apologies for not reading this sooner! Hope the next chapter's up soonish! Please? :)
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{reviewid: 2676484, reviewer: 'Elvendork'}
24th March 2012:
I miss this story :( Like honestly more and more everyday. I check twice a day now...
Please update soon?
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{reviewid: 2676348, reviewer: 'EagerReaders'}
24th March 2012:
Love the story! Update ASAP. Like tonight ASAP! Can't wait to read more!!
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{reviewid: 2676297, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
I like sarah. Update soon please 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676290, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
I feel sorry for victoire now. 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676275, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Yay im glad hayes got a chance to explain 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676268, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Wow teddy really. 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676258, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Poor dom. I liked hayes 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676257, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Please dont let hayes be cheating on her. 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676078, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
I dont like teddy. 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676076, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
That was great. Loved it 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676075, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Bad timing by hayes 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676064, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
They are so cute!! 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676061, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Teddy annoys me. 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676060, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Teddy likes to randomly show up 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676058, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Im glad her dad is supporting her 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676053, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Oh i like the new guy 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676050, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Oh wow, i do feel sorry for all of them. 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676048, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Well she should tell her family 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676045, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Ginny should be able to help 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2676043, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
23rd March 2012:
Well teddy wont be pleased 9/10 : )
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