I'm still reading! Don't worry :) I still follow and love this story, I can't wait to see how the talk with Teddy goes and how Dom gets through babysitting. Keep writing Report Review
yay! thanks for updating again! i love this story! Report Review
This is one of the few stories I always check to see if it has been updated. So you still have a reader here! Can't wait until the next chapter! 10/10 Report Review
An update? Yay yay and thrice yay! Great chapter! Report Review
next chappteerrr! been such a long wait but happy you finally updated!:) Report Review
Hey! I liked the chapter, and can't wait for the next one! I sounds exciting. Dom babysitting, and working out issues with Hayes and Teddy. Report Review
Great chapter! Please update soon! Report Review
Oh my god I actually love you right now. I thought this was ever going to be updated and I'm so glad it has *Happy dance*
I love Dom and how you've characterized her. Her personality is amazing and she is so lovable :D The same goes for Fred. He's fun, kind, sweet andf had a wicked sense of humour :)
I think it's brill that they are all different ages, like Roxy being a toddler instead of the same age as Lily, Hugo, Lucy and Louis. Also Roxy is too cute ♥
I like how youv'e portayed James as well, he's sensitive and sweet instead of arrogant and up himself. I also think he and Sarah make a good couple, it shows his good side.
I was re-reading this last night so Correct me if I'm wrong but in chapter five:Torn Dom's middle name is Nymphadora?
I look forward to the next chapter. Dom looking after a baby wayy before her little on is born, should be fun :)
I love this story, keep it up. ♥
-Potterfan310 Report Review
hurry up with the next chapter, yeah? thanks Report Review
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write the next chapter soon! I am in love with this story! I don't know how you make up all these brilliant ideas! Do you already have a name planned for Dom's baby? I can give you some ideas if you want. I will tell my friends about this story too. I love all the new characters in this story. I specially love Emmelyn! As you said, you need some motivation, I am going to give you some! This story is amazing, you are amazing and if you keep on writting, so many more people will read and write reviews and you could get a Dooby award or go on the list of the best of HPFF. You could even be discovered by someone famous. If I was famous I would sign you up right away! Do not give up writting this story, anything could happen. If you need some more ideas I would be happy to give you some. For one, Something could happen to Hayes, like whats happening to Alex and Dom could realise how much she loves him. Looking forward to what happens this Dom and the baby. Looking forward to the next chapter. 10/10!
Catherine / Kitty Potter Report Review
Yay you updated!! I liked it. It wasn't your best but it wasn't horrible. Please update soon :) Report Review
Loved it! You're writing is amazing, please don't doubt yourself. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Hope you update soon! Report Review
Hellooo there! Great chapter and now I absolutely cannot wait for the conversation between Dominique and Teddy and I hope Teddy doesn't fuck it up! And poor Hayes, I really feel for him! Report Review
YAY! SO happy that you updated! I literally checked your page every single day since the last chapter came out to see if you updated! I love this story so much! I thought this was a great chapter and I'm excited to hear what Teddy and Dom's convo is gonna be like. I hope Teddy grows a pair and realizes that he needs to be a part of the baby's life. Please, please, please update soon! :) Report Review
well i dont think domhad any right to yell at vic, teddy sure but not vic. wat she did to her was irreperable, it will always be infront of her, even if she is with teddy it will haunt her for her rest of life, while the press news people will forget in some days, so yup dommy here is being a selfish and it shows that if the situations were reversed she would have done worse than victoire and nope i dont feel sorry for her. Report Review
I loved this chapter!! :D
Don't worry about the update time, I know it must be incredibly hard to keep things coming quickly.
You broke them up!! Dom and Hayes!! Normally when this happens I sway to one character's side but for this I really don't know. I see both points and understand them. I just hope that they get back together soon.
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next, please update when you can. :D Report Review
You don't need to worry! You're writing is so amazing that even if you didn't update for a year you would still have readers! This chapter was amazing by the way but update Tempting Fate or you will suffer the consequences!
...Okay, not really but you still need to update it.
10/10 Brilliant! Report Review
I was so excited to see your update!! Don't feel bad! Even the best writers get writer's block. I love how Dominique is seeing Victoire clearly and is sacrificing to lessen her hurt as much as possible. To be honest, I don't know if I could trust Hayes either. I know they're good together, but I'm thinking it's going to take time. I'm glad that she is being honest about her emotions though. Thanks for the update!! Report Review
yay! i'm so glad you updated! i love this story!!! Report Review
YOU'RE BACK!! yayy :)
i dunno why you didnt like this chapter, i thought it was quite nice. I really like how you've shown that Dom and Hayes' relationship isnt fairytale perfect, unlike numerous other fan fics where relationships are absolutely perfect. But i do hope they get over this rough patch! Is Teddy going to intervene in their problem? Cos he seemed a bit concerned.
And i would never stop reading this story, it's one of my favourites!! Update soon and i hope you get over your writers block :) Report Review
I started reading your story a few days ago, and I couldn't stop! It's absolutely brilliant!
Everything that you write helps the story along -- the characters, the plot, everything. :) Dominique's voice is very interesting and unique, and I love Hayes and Emmelyn. And plus, Dom's relationship with Teddy and Vic make everything so much better -- this story is cool in the way that it's not a Dom/Teddy story.
So, please continue! I really like this story! :) Report Review
Are you ever going to update? :( Report Review
please update soon! its been far too long:( it's such a great story, don't give up on it!!! you can do it!:) Report Review
I miss Dominique...
Update as soon as you can, please?... :) Report Review
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