For crying out loud, can't Sirius leave the poor girl alone? Gosh he's a pain! xP

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Yeah, I like this chapter as well. The dog part was amazing! (And yes I know that was Sirius)

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Ok this story is fast pased, but very funny indeed. Once more, keep up the fabulous work. (And if you were wondering, HPG stands for Harry Potter Geek. )

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Wow this is a great chapter, seriously. ;D Keep up the good work!

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I cried sooo much when I realised she was about to die! I couldn't even move on and read more for a good five minutes... That was so depressing! Thanks for writing this awesomely amazing story :)

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I can't believe it ended that way! It was a perffect ending to a perfect story,pure brilliance.

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Wow. Breathtaking ending, sad but endings can't always be happy. Thank you for this story, and I hope you continue writing! :)

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I am so not happy with you. You killed her! Ugh!

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Which Trelawny are you talking about? Because she wasn't hired until after the prophecy, which was after Lily and James graduated

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read this story twice already.. I love it :)

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I loved this story. It was heartbreaking, it was heartwarming, it made me laugh and cry and clap and jump up and down. the *only* thing that bothered me, and I mean the ONLY thing, was that Sirius gave Adara a jewelry box for her birthday, and he told her it needed a password to be opened. she never found out the password! and I thought there would be something special inside or something, I dunno. but yeah, other than that, it was a really beautiful story.

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You're right, I did cry. Only a little, because of how you ended it, but I still cried.

I love the fact that you had MacKenzie and Dara's dad come and retrieve Dara and Saiph from the death spot, but that you still saw Sirius' dispair. (Wow, that is ont big word for me)

any ways, I loved this story. I am going to read the sequal, because although I like Elizabeth, Lily and James HAVE to be together, it's the rule of cannon

KEEP WRITING :D

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Oh my gosh! You must have cried so much writing this, because I think I cried more durring these chapters than any other stroy except one. (and the main character died, in the most tragic of ways.) I love this story, I love how Dara has mixed emotions about everything. 11/10

KEEP WRITING :D

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Wow! It's been like 16 chapters since I reviewed! So I will grace you with my writing.

I like how Adara is getting upset about Sirius and BB, but not admitting that she likes him. It makes me go 'oh Adara, Ravenclaws aren't supposed to be this oblivious!'. Love it!

KEEP WRITING :D

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Great job! Mysterious, but didn't give away the 'furry little problem'. there needs to be something for the future!

KEEP WRITING :D

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“Mr. Black, I think both Mr. Potter and I would very much like it if you stopped trying to push him off his stool and instead found an empty one.” I love that!! Anyway, I probably won't review a lot because this story is already finished, so it won't take me too long to read. I'll leave random ones though! It'll brighter up your day!! KEEP WRITING :D

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So, I just started reading this story a couple of days ago. I have fallen in love with it! It made me cry in a few places, but in a way, that's a good thing :D I tried to stop crying but- I failed. Such a good story, loved every second of it! Thank you :)

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This was the first story I ever read on this site, and I loved it back then. I've just re-read it about a year later and love doesn't really cover how much I love this story.
I have to say I cried again, even though I knew it was coming.
You're an amazing writer and I'm reading more of your stories at the moment. Especially loving Tempting Fate at the moment.
Thank you so much for posting this story on here, it's truly amazing! :D

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This is my second favorite chapter. I was so happy to find out Adara was pregrant, but when ever she wanted to go get chocolates from the house were Wormtail was i felt i was at the movie theater screaming at the girl not to go in, knowing all along that a shadowy figure was hidding behind the next corner about to kill her, and it did. I like to think that Sirius (after going to find James and Lilly to tell of Adara and Saiphs death, needing condulence or maybe needing to warn them, finding them dead, having his encounter with Peter, and getting locked up in Azkaban) found truth and comfort from Adara, and through her help he remanded sane, and is now happily living with his family in Heaven also, gift given to him by Harry. ( Leave it to me to make someone death in to sappy happy ending.)

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hi,just started to read your novel, it seems interesting.I like how you are combining jk characters with your o/c. I don't know why but i'm hoping that Sirius and Addie end-up togather. Hope i see more from the mauduers, I'll have to read on.

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Wow. That's a really good story! I liked it! Adara and Sirius are SO CUTE. The ending was so sad thouuugh!

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This is a very good first chapter, you introduced the characters really well and they seem incredibly well thought out and written. I can't wait to see where this story is going.

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Okay, I intended to make one biiig review for the last chapter, where I'd pretty much sum up all my thoughts about your story.
But, I HAVE to say this.

Sirius's parents never joined the Death eaters. Only Regulus did. And, I hardly think that they'd intentionally do such things to Adara, only because she wasn't a Pureblood. Because Voldemort and his followers only hated Muggle-borns, and not Halfbloods. And Adara is a Halfblood. It would've been okay if the Deatheaters just killed her father and sister because of Claire - I mean, not really okay, but okay for the story. And if Regulus himself messed up with the Quidditch balls, simply because he loathed his brother. But, this big plot just doesn't seem realistic. Sorry, but it's true.

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Just thought you should know that Quaffle is enchanted, too - with some kind of spell that makes it fall slowly, or something like that.
Nice chapter! :)

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Oh my Rowling. This ending was beautiful and yet heartbreaking. I had flipping waterfalls coming out of my eyes by the end of this. So amazing and I have been completely OBSESSED with this fanfic over the past few days (it's on my list of my all time favorites) and I am going to start reading the sequel right away! :') I feel, throughout this story, I've grown to know Addie and it absolutely broke my heart when she (and Saiph) died, and how Sirius reacted. I really did not expect that. I absolutely love your writing, please continue forever!



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