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Review #26, by BellaLestrange87 Prologue

13th May 2016:
This is for the Blue vs Bronze review battle!

I really enjoyed this. It was a really well-written look into Voldemort's perspective. I really like the added information: that Voldemort was trying to get rid of the Malfoy family by assigning them Draco a task that couldn't be fulfilled.

You wrote Voldemort really well. He appears really sadistic, as he should be. His enjoyment of Lucius's and Draco's pain was really obvious and fitting for the leader of the Death Eaters.

You're making me feel really sorry for Draco. He's so enthusiastic and eager to prove himself now and we all know how his feelings change over the course of sixth year.

I didn't see any typos and I'll be back at some point to read the next chapter.


Author's Response: Wow, that was fast! Thank you! I've always wanted to write Voldemort and while this prologue is only to set up for more important things later in the story, I was more excited for it than for the rest of it. XD

(Which is why I will be writing a Draco centered story later...)

Thank you for the review!

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Review #27, by dreamgazer220 Kiss, Kiss

24th October 2015:
I didn't realize chapter 3 had been posted! My bad. Have I told you that this version is so much more realistic than the one before? Cause it is. Can't wait to read what happens next ♥

Author's Response: Yes yes we have both grown. I only just posted it a couple days ago. I didn't know it was validated lol. Can't wait to write more!

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Review #28, by dreamgazer220 Number 3

20th September 2015:
Another great chapter! You've improved so much over the last ten years :) And I think this version is much more realistic than the previous flagship. I also like that she's friends with Harry to tie it back to the Hogwarts world. Well done! Can't wait to read more, even though I've already read the next chapter... :-D

Author's Response: Thank you! You are my inspiration lol. I can't wait to get started on CM after I get a few more chapters up.

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Review #29, by dreamgazer220 Prologue

3rd September 2015:
Nicely done :) I can already tell that this one is going to be much darker than your previous versions just based on the prologue. Can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad we're going home!

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