Reading Reviews for 30 Days of You and Me
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Review #51, by Hope's Mom Together

7th April 2014:
A little fluff is sometimes just what is needed! This chapter (and story conclusion) sure had lots of it. It was nice that the story ended with the affirmation of their love and their shared hope for the future. Ron (in his cameo) was once again the funny, hip(?), understanding parent I have always thought he would be. Thank you for sharing your story. It was a privilege to read.

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Review #52, by Hope's Mom Together

7th April 2014:
A little fluff is sometimes just what is needed! This chapter (and story conclusion) sure had lots of it. It was nice that the story ended with the affirmation of their love and their shared hope for the future. Ron (in his cameo) was once again the funny, hip(?), understanding parent I have always thought he would be. Thank you for sharing your story. It was a privilege to read.

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Review #53, by RupertsPheonix Together

7th April 2014:
I have enjoyed this story so much. Rose is clever, funny, and flawed, and it is the most refreshing interpretation of her. Scorpius is courageous and cowardly at different points, and I love him in both roles. Ron is a wonderfully matured versioned of the Ron we know and love. Thank you for a legitimately wonderful fic.

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Review #54, by Horcrux844 Trust

6th April 2014:
Very well written first chapter. If it were me, I'd probably be wary and a bit more defensive about sharing too much with him physically. Which I think is true for Rose, too, but still. I guess that's why the chapter's called Trust.

I think it was interesting when Scorpius equated modesty with lies, as well. I suppose that must be the excuse of the immodest, but you could also reverse that. I think it really just depends on the context.

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Review #55, by hp481516 Together

6th April 2014:
Congratulations! I really enjoyed this story/ending and I am looking forward to continue reading your other stories. Great job and keep up the good work!

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Review #56, by Victoria Together

3rd April 2014:

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Review #57, by AriesGirl40 Together

3rd April 2014:
I just got my laptop fixed. In all my time without internet, I kept thinking about this story. Kept hoping you didn't kill off Scorpius on the 30th day! lol

I liked your ending, it had hope. The reader could end it any way they wanted, and it would always be the best ending the way they saw it.

I think I will imagine them finishing school and vacationing back in the mountains where Scorpius will fish and Rose will paint. Later a little wine, an engagement will be asked, then Rose just might give Scorpius a preview of her skimpies she's been saving... or not. lol

It's been quite a story, and I enjoyed the ride :)

Bless you in all you accomplish

Patty (AriesGirl40)

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Review #58, by HazelMidnight172 Together

1st April 2014:
I really have enjoyed reading this story. Both Scorpius and Rose showed a lot of growth in character throughout. I love how you left the ending open... I was worried that something terrible would happen in this chapter, and it is great to see two teenagers dealing with their situation in a mature and optimistic way. In my head, everything turned out well for them. Thank you for a wonderful story. :)

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Review #59, by Dirigible_Plums Together

31st March 2014:
Absolutely loved the entire thing

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Review #60, by LightLeviosa5443 Together

31st March 2014:
I'm literally on the verge of tears.

I can't believe this story is over. I loved loved loved loved loved the way you ended this. It was powerful, and beautiful, and I don't even care that it was ambiguous because it was beautifully so! I loved the way that Scorpius kept asking about the lingerie and Rose kept saying no.

The way that Ron walked up behind Rose and Scorpius and what happened last time Scorp tried to paint. Ugh, and then the whole scene where Rose was panicking and then she was just so happy for him. Like it was just such a perfect relationship moment. I'm literally dying from cuteness.

I love the way you do fluff, I'm sad you won't write a sequel (Well, as of now, I can hold out hope, right?) but I love the way you left this. I am going to go read the rest of you stories. Cause woah.

xoxo Sarah

P.S. please never stop writing.

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Review #61, by LightLeviosa5443 Hope

31st March 2014:
Ah. Noo I don't want this story to end.

It's so cute, and lovely, and wonderfully well written. I literally fall in love with every word you write. It's like there's nothing else around me when I'm reading these chapters. They are so incredible and I can feel every single emotion you put into these chapters.

I'm a little sad and reluctant about reading this next chapter, because I don't want it to end. But this one was so wonderful. I loved the way that Ron came into the room and comforted Rose, and then again in the garden. I loved that it was him and not Hermione. I loved how Scorpius pulled a knife on Rose and how she just decided to fish.

Ugh, it was all so wonderful. I can't beleive the story is ending!

xoxo Sarah

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Review #62, by Gaia Together

31st March 2014:
AHh! It's over. I loved this story so much. Well, continue to love, since I have reread it sort of while reading it this time and will probably reread it again. It is such beautiful summertime love fluff. Especially good to read while it is SNOWING THE DAY BEFORE APRIL WHAT EVEN IS THIS?!?!?!

Ron and Rose's relationship means so much to me. Ron is of course a great Dad and is my favorite character in Harry Potter. The teasing but always there for you when you need it relationship is so important to the story, to Rose, and to me. It reminds me a lot of my own relationship with my Dad.

I will say until the end of time that I want this Dom, and I want a story just about her. Or possibly with Alicia too...

Your Rose is great. Insecure but confident. Filled with the dreams and confusion of any 17 year old.

Scorpius I love because of the collar bones. No other reason. Or maybe because he is humorous, caring, wise beyond his years, a dumb teenage boy, and so completely different than any other interpretation of his character that I have ever seen. Probably not those and just the collar bones though...

I'm so happy you wrote this story and stuck with it. I know you had to push yourself to do it at times, but the result is beautiful. I like the ambiguity of the ending. It fits the mood of the story. We don't know what will happen, but we know that these two people push each other and help each other grow and are there for each other. So even though we don't know exactly what will happen, we sort of do. They will continue being there for each other, even when it gets hard. Because that is the kind of people that they have grown to be in the story.

10/10 would def recommend.

Also, you know that winter is way to long and cold when I am craving the humidity in this chapter. Remind me of this moment when I am complaining all summer about how hot it is.

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Review #63, by hai Together

31st March 2014:
that was perfect
and adorable
and i loved this
honestly i just want to thank you, cuz this was the first story i really, properly followed. i started when it was around the chapter 4 mark, and literally i looked forward to the updates every week :D

you are an amazing writer, and this story was sooo fluffy, but at the same time, you covered the serious things really well.


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Review #64, by Penelope Inkwell Hope

28th March 2014:
First, how has it taken me so long to read this chapter. I like it. You know, i really do understand Scorpius. I mean, really it was the more selfish thing, but I can get the desire not to burden people when you feel hopeless. The thing to remember is that people who love you usually don’t see you as a burden, or even if they do, you’re a burden they’d rather have than not.

But I thought his escape attempt fit his character perfectly. And I love how Rose knew just where to find him.

I liked that you brought back that “girls being brave” quote, though I am still curious as to who ever told him that, and why. Was it his mother he was speaking of? Was she already sick back then?


“Rose,” he breathed, face mirroring the shock.”
--what shock is his face mirroring? Because Rose isn’t shocked--her voice tone is bored. Maybe it’s the shock in his voice? Anyway, I couldn’t quite tell, and it distracted me for a second. It’s pretty nitpicky CC, but what other kind could I give with a story this well-written?

Favorite Quote:

"And Dad knew little about plants other than which ones to pick for Mum when he made her mad.”
--This was just so cute, and so Ron. I just love him in this story!

I cannot believe that the story is almost over. I’m excited to read the last chapter, but sort of nervous, too. Will there be an epilogue?

And how did I not realize that you were writing another story? I’ll have to go take a look.

Thanks so much for writing “30 Days”. I’ve really enjoyed it.


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Review #65, by ReeBee Hope

19th February 2014:
NO! I'M CRYING! The sad part? I'm crying about this story coming to a close and I cried more in the last (happy) part than the sad part. Like seriously, this story has changed my life. I don't know why. It just has. I love it. The fact that they still live, they still cope, even when Scorpius has so much o deal with. It is a really amazing story. I don't know. I wish it didnt have to finish. I wish it would go on forever. But at the same time, I want to know what happens. I want to stay with Rose forever. I want to see Scorpius handle and make the best of his situation. I want to follow their relationship forever. Thank you for giving us this amazing story and i really hope, maybe someday, you'll maybe write a sequel (even a one shot).

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Review #66, by Hope's Mom Hope

15th February 2014:
Nice chapter! I loved how Rose called Scorpius out for his selfishness in leaving. I have mentioned this before, but I have really enjoyed your Ron and Hermione in this story. The chapter end does leave the reader with hope for their future - thank you!

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Review #67, by Midnight spark Hope

14th February 2014:
HAHA!! I thought she broke up with him when I read the summery! I'm so glad I was wrong!

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Review #68, by ohmymerlin Hope

13th February 2014:
Hahahahahahaha firstly I have to say thank you for the dedication. I'm glad my angry hissing was of value :p

Okay, so Scorpius is still sick. I don't like it.

But there's a bit of hope??? I don't know... I'm so curious as to how this is going to end! I really hope they find a cure so Scorpius will live! D:

I just love all your characterisations! I can't wait to read the last chapter! I can't believe it's already the end! D:

Oh, and Happy Valentines Day! ♥

- Kayla :)

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Review #69, by hp481516 Hope

13th February 2014:
I really liked the line: “Life was never simple,” I said with a brief laugh. “It was just simpler.” Especially since things got a lot less simple after Rose said that. I am interested to see how you conclude the story.

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Review #70, by ruby_slippers Hope

13th February 2014:
I can't believe this story is nearly over! So crazy!! Just a small note - if scorp dies ... I won't be able to handle it and thus my therapy bills will be forwarded on to you ;)

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Review #71, by NightRook4510 Hope

13th February 2014:
A new chapter! Yay! It's great!

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Review #72, by RupertsPheonix Hope

12th February 2014:
Great chapter! I love grown-up Ron. What a precious dad. :)

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Review #73, by hai Hope

12th February 2014:
1. so one, the story is almost over ;(
2. the argument was so URGHGHHGHGH
3. i guess it was a little unusual for them to make up in one chapter, but it was nice you know? not ending on a huge cliffie?
4. the keepers daugher is good, i like it :)

tk u for being amaziinggg :D

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Review #74, by glassycry Positive

9th February 2014:
Oh my gosh. The fricken feels!

I can't begin to describe how much I love this story. I was supposed to be studying for my exam tomorrow, but instead I spent all day reading this.

I can't wait for the next update, but ugh. I just don't want him to die!!!

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Review #75, by whykay Positive

29th January 2014:
OMG.. he has it! What happens next?! just 2 more chapters to go and I am anxious! Update soon please!

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