Oh my goodness!! youve gotten me hooked. I love it. I am personally in no way an outdoorsy person. But it makes me want to get lost in a log cabin with Scorpius Malfoy... but then again who wouldnt haha :DAuthor's Response: Yeah, I have to say I wouldn't mind that at all. Except I'm a smidge too old at this point ... though not for who I use as his portrayal so I don't feel bad. Thanks! Report Review
It was fantastic absoloutly lovely. Ive been trying to get back into fan fic and I have to say this is a pretty great start.Author's Response: So glad you're getting back into it -- thank you for the review! Report Review
I love love loved it. It was super cuteAuthor's Response: Thank you!! I hope you like the rest :) Report Review
I can't believe i haven't actually posted a review yet because i've already reread this like 5 times waiting for the next chapter to come up and i check this page litterally everyday three times a day... *hint hint*
So... can i just start off by saying that i've been in a crappy mood since the beginning of the year (tough year at school) and your story took a load off. I love that it's such a happy story, so uncomplicated, so natural... So... refreshing! i just ... LOVE it, for lack of a better word :P. I like that Scorpius is such a nice guy. I mean i've read some really amazing stories where he's a real jerk at the beginning but then turns out ok, but i really like your portrayal of him.
I loved the dinner section. Ron... PRICELESS. Your whole story is full of humor and love and warmth and i just LOVE it... ok... i better stop...
I LOVE IT!!!
Ok... i'm done. Just PLEASE update quickly because i can't stop thinking about your story. I guess that unlike me you DO have a life and that's why you can't upload chapters all the time, but please take pity on us poor lost souls :P
Ok... i should stop before i freak you out too much with my admiration for you writing skills :D
So... ummm.. thank you seems an understatement but i'll go with that:
Thank you for sharing your brilliant talent and imagination with us,
slightlyobsessedwithfanfiction (as you can see, my pen name says "slightly" :P)Author's Response: Hey now! Well, the next chapter is in the queue as I'm typing this. And no pestering if this is your first review ;) Only kidding, I'm glad you left one though!!
I'm glad this story could lift your spirits. Really, that's why I write. I had stories when I was younger to help me, and now i'd like to give back. So thank you for reading! And thank you for your kind words about Scorpius. I've also seen a lot of stories where he is just really rough around the edges and I wanted to do something different. Take them away from that.
HAHA thank you!! Ron is my favorite HP character so whenever I have an opportunity to bring him to life I will certainly take it.
I'm doing my best to update all 4 stories as quickly as possible -- I promise :)
Thank you SO much for the marvelous review! I hope you like the rest of the story! Report Review
this is actually the cutest thing ever. I'm constantly amazed at how ever chapter is even more interesting than the last, there's only so many things you can write about a forest but you somehow manage to come up with the most amazingly obscure and entertaining ones, it's seriously awesome. love love love this, always looking forward to the next :)Author's Response: Thank you! Ihad so much fun writing this story. It was great to sort of expand on everything and get to know the characters and their own insecurities. Thank you! Report Review
Aw, Scorpius just grows more and more swoon worthy. I want someone to walk through a thunderstorm to be with me, even if I happen to love thunderstorms. You just have a talent for writing swoon-worthy men!
I really, really loved the fact that Rose and Scorpius had that conversation about being insecure and especially loved that Scorpius had insecurities of his own. He's usually portrayed as being insanely confident and as someone with no physical flaws. But I like that you made him have insecurities that were things that others didn't notice or care about and how much that meant to Rose to hear that.
Wonderful chapter! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next and to see how Rose's feelings will continue to develop. :)Author's Response: PENGUIN.
I'm SORRY. I can't help the swoon-worthy men. I have a thing. A problem. I HAVE A PROBLEM AND I WILL NOT SEEK HELP.
I'm glad Rose got to hear that too. To know she's not alone in thinking sh ehas flaws and that Scorpius doesn't think she has any at all. In the same way she couldn't find his. I think it's an important message.
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I know you probably wont see this, but I want you to know that this is extremely good! It would be great if you turned this story into one of your own, with your own characters, etc. You could easily get it published and I would totally buy it! Keep that in mind!Author's Response: What? of course I'll see this. I saw it on the day it came in. I respond to all of my reviews so here I am :)
I'm very happy you're enjoying the story so far! I don't think the story has quite enough to stand on its own to be published, but I am working on my own original novel in the same writing style. Thank you so much for your amazingly kind words! Report Review
OMG !!! Seriously keep writing! I don't think you understand the amount of feelings you have made me feel :-O I love scorpiouse and rose together they just fit and it's so sweet and corny haha and I love how scorpiouse accepts rose for who she is, flaws and all :) you really are a terrific writer! Ill be sure to keep reading, if you keep posting ;P don't let me down!Author's Response: Oh my. That's too many feels. DIAL BACK THE FEELS.
LOL I hope I don't "let you down." I will definitely keep posting.
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i'm not native english speaker...
i also forgot - this is my very favorite scorpius characterAuthor's Response: No big deal :)
Thank you! I am rather fond of Scorpius myself. He turned out marvelous. Report Review
i love this story very much, tks for sharing
it's well written, and i love the characters (all of them), they are all real
the plot is also very interesting
waiting ansiously for the next chapter
but please remember it's fluff? i'm a scorose fan, and fear angsty stories ...Author's Response: You are very welcome for sharing! And thank YOU so much for reading!
I am well aware it's fluff. But it's me. Not everything is going to be rainbows and waterfalls. That's just not how life works. But I'll do my best.
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Hi there, you fantastic author!
Awww, you got a puppy!!! I'm sure Brego is the cutest creature ever! :)
That is such a great story!!! Ah, and all those ScoRose feelings that are filling me right now! :D I started reading this lovely novel few hours ago, and I just couldn't stop! This fanfiction is just flawless!!! Probably one of the best I've ever read!!! And of course you are one awesome author, really! I just want to hug you and thank for writing this piece of perfection!!! :D
Can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the great work! :)
10/10 (but you deserve so much more)
~KristenAuthor's Response: He really is adorable. And he's an absolute charmer, too. He's the favorite of puppy training and everywhere we take him. What a ham.
I'm so glad you decided to give it a shot. It means a lot to me. I will hug you right back! I'm a Hufflepuff... so according to James, I hug.
Thank you s omuch and I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Report Review
Such a good chapter! I love how easy your writing is- not choppy nor awkward. Everything transitions well and works well. You are a great writer and I'm really glad I stumbled upon your story.
Oh! Shiba Inus are fabulous but notoriously stubborn and diva-like. My Shiba thinks that the word revolves around him but they are the most loyal and intelligent dogs. (:Author's Response: Spanish Smurf is back! I won't be forgetting your penname anytime soon.
I'm so happy you're liking the story so far. It has been a great time writing it.
Oh yes. My shiba is very stubborn and a diva. And I love him. He is so great and adorable. And active, haha. I love that you have a shiba as well :) they are such fantastic dogs. Report Review
I swear google chrome is working against me, this is the third time I 've tried to write this review. But I'm dedicated lol.
It's so refreshing to read something as simple as Rose and Scorpius's relationship written so beautifully. It's nice to read something that doesn't leave you hanging on the edge of your seat, but you're still anxious for more :)Author's Response: THANK YOU for being so dedicated. And tell Chrome to suit up because we're in a fight.
thank you so much for your kind words. This story is very different from what I am used to and i'm thrilled so many people have jumped on board with it. Report Review
I was literally reading this chapter with dread because my friend told me they have sex and I was freaking out and YAY,I'm so glad they didn't 'cause that would've been too fast.Ok,I'm rambling.
Anyways,great chapter & I absolutely ADORE your description of Scorpius:)Author's Response: HAHA. Why would your friend tell you that?
That would have been way too fast. For both of them. Your friend is mean! haha.
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I really love this story. It is fantastic and I don't know where it has been hiding all this time because it took me so long to discover it! I'm glad I did though. It's a really different, original version of a Rose/Scorpius story and it's a refreshing read. I love your characterization of them both and Scorpius is such a sweet heart. I'm a little bit in love with him.Author's Response: Um ... on my author page? OH. In a cupboard under some stairs!
I'm really glad you're enjoying the story thus far. I definitely wanted to do a very different take on the pairing than I'd been seeing around the site.
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Wow I think is my favorite chapter yet!! I love this story so much. Scorpius is a sweetheart and I love his banter with Rose. Rose is really cool, too, and I like how she doesn't always know what to say. I hope she gets over her fear of storms a bit :)
I wonder if she'll meet the Malfoys soon? I'm really curious as to how you're going to use Mrs. Malfoy as a character and whether she's going to get better, stay sick, or die. I would really like her to get a little better...I've never really liked seeing characters die though they do all the time. It's interesting reading about death and its effects; I've just never been too fond of it.
I think your portrayal of Scorpius and Rose is really unique and I love reading it. It's such a romantic and sweet story and I like how Rose is sort of discovering more about herself as she discovers more about the mountains.
I can't believe we're already past day 15!! I don't want it to end! Update soon :)Author's Response: I like that you like that about her. Her loss for words in some moments. For me that comes from her painterly side. She expresses in colors and isn't as good with words. I like that about her too.
I hope you like my plotline for Mrs. Malfoy. And she will encounter them in the near future.
Wow, it really is past day 15, isn't it? Wild.
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Brown eyes get such a bad reputation. They CAN be spectacular. I'm a proud owner and I have passed them along to my daughter. Her eyes are gorgeous! Scorpius is quite sweet this chapter although he is not the best influence encouraging Rose to leave with no note for her parents (who are so understanding). However I suppose this is not atypical teen behavior to not fully consider consequences (like her parents concern). Thanks for the chapter. I laughed at your dog's description. Perhaps he has a bit of cat in him?Author's Response: They ARE spectacular.
I am also a proud owner of brown eyes. If you notice, a lot of my OCs have brown eyes simply because people are so easy to use blue eyes to make someone beautiful, but in reality it's not just bright eyes that are beautiful, it's dark, mysterious eyes that are just as gorgeous. I happen to love my dark brown eyes. And I bet yours and your daughter's are gorgeous as well.
Definitely not atypical teen behavior. Silly teens with your hormones and your fish-slapping.
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Scorpius is such a great guy! Not many people would walk 30 minutes in a thunderstorm for a girl. They are so adorable together! Great job with another fantastic chapter!Author's Response: Not many people, indeed. He's a special guy and Rose is starting to see that.
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This was absolutely adorable and one of the cutest chapters yet! This is one of my favourite stories and you are one of my fave authors. I have been waiting ages for this chapter and you have not disappointed, well done! I can't wait for the next chapter in this and many of your other stories, keep up the good work! 10/10 :DAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you so much! i hope the wait was worth it. It's just difficult updating 4 stories at once with the waiting time and such. But I wouldn't have it any other way.
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Wonderful. This is without a doubt one of the best stories I've ever read.Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
I've been checking constantly for your story, I've needed a smile. Happy to hear the move went well. I have cats, but I adore teaching puppies from scratch. Remember two things, to correct jumping on people, step lightly on their back toes and say No., begging at the table, don't watch. and point to the floor. Come and stay and all the rest are easy with treats and love.
Lets see, things I noticed in this chapter.
When Rose woke with the storm she sat there frightened to death trying hard to be like other family members, not seeking comfort with her mum and Dad. It wasn't working, but she wouldn't leave the room, it was like she would rather suffer. Scorpius showing up the way he did showed he has sympothy and cares for Rose and how terrorized she becomes durring major storms. He knew she wouldn't leave for comfort. He came to distract her and lul her back to sleep. There is bravery in numbers.
I also noticed tha between the two of them, the confidence rating has gone up in each of them. Hairy toes, big noses, hips that don't lie, muffin tops, zity backs. Yet Rose couldn't find one physical flaw with Scorpius. Scorpius called her beautiful, to him. He likes the inner Rose, thats what makes her beautiful. What is on the outside is just frosting. Scorpius could also have been talking about family and how they represent their parents and what is expected of them. Hardly leaves time for fishing and star gazing, hand holding and snogging.
I like Scorpius. In the future I can see Rose at the Manor watching television with him, taking away the lonely. Grabbing him when his mother is at the hospital to come home with her for a family meal, instead of eating alone with a house elf. I see her selfless giving. Or maybe I am looking too far? lol
I shall see you next month :)Author's Response: Puppy is learning VERY fast. He's super smart but sometimes he forgets himself. Not shocked, as he is a puppy. But he has some things down super well now. Obedience class worked great for him.
I think Rose tries to put on a brave face where she refuses to seek help, but accepts it if it comes. There is definitely bravery in numbers.
I loved their insecurities. Rose needs to know that she is not alone in thinking she has flaws, but also that they are in her head.
Haha, maybe you are looking a smidge to far... but we shall see ;)
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This is probably my favorite chapter so far. Keep it up!Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
I absolutely loved this chapter. As soon as the storm started, I was just waiting for Scorpuis' knock at the window :P
I thought it was simply hilarious when Scorpuis appointed himself as Lord of the Pancakes and their trip into town was both sweet and eventful, as usual. To be honest, I almost cried as Scorpius listed his insecurities! Now, I'm looking forward to Rose wearing that figure-hugging dress in the future! So on that note, please upload the next chapter soon!! I love your writing style and I'm seriously addicted to all of your stories :)Author's Response: He just can't handle not being able to help. He has that in so many other aspects of his life that it eats away at him.
I love Scorpius' insecurities. I hope it shows just one person that they're not alone in thinking they have faults...
Thank you so much and I promise to update as soon as possible! Report Review
I was rolling in laughter this entire chapter, trying and failing to be silent as it's a bit late and my roommates sleeping. She woke up and asked if I was having a seizure. Worth it though. I truly love this fic and how you portray the characters, especially Scorpius and Ron. I feel like you got them all just right, straight out of the books. Well, Ron and Hermione from the books at least. I'm rambling. Should sleep. Won't. Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Sorry, roommate. No seizures. Just fanfiction and snogging.
I'm really glad you are enjoying the story so far. Ron was really important to me in this story because he is my favorite HP character. So it was a blast writing him.
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You are perfect and I love you. I am 18 and probably way too old to be reading these still, but your story definitely makes me squee, keeep writing lovely (:Author's Response: Whoa. WHOA.
No. Don't think you should ever outgrow something you enjoy. Heck, I still watch The Lion King when I'm feeling like getting my Africa fix on. I still run around playing with my puppy. Fingerpainting. And I've got several years on you, on this side of the computer, and I still write it. There is no age limit for enjoying something. At least in my personal opinion.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :) Thank you for the review and I really hope you like the rest! Report Review
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