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Review #26, by Sunflowers The Court Case

28th October 2014:
Loved this chapter, thank you! 😊

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Review #27, by Shinicha The Court Case

28th October 2014:
Ahh amazing chapter. As always!
I really love how the relationship between Fred and Ryan develops, how they get closer (and are so inventive about coming up with excuses to help each other out)
I was a bit disappointed that Ryan didn't get a Dobby for Original Character, because her character development is just so convincing and I love her so much!

I have to admit though that the court scene seemed a tad rushed to me. I have NO idea about how law works (just those TV shows where there's a "objection" thrown in every few moments)... How come that noone ever saw or bothered to see that the transactions were rigged, even though it was so apparent? And why did Zonko crumble at the first mention? I just thought with all the corruption scandals we're confronted with every day in the newspaper in the "real world", this one was a little bit too easy to overcome. However, I do understand that this isn't but one part in a plot that isn't about wizarding law but something else, so I understand why the main thing that had to be conveyed was Ryan's effort helping, the future of the shop, and James and Freddie making an impact with their new ideas at the store (I'm really looking forward to more store-stories, and how George is going to react to the changes they've implanted)

I was so releaved to read George's letter. It was more of his sparkly self, even though he's clearly unhappy about his situation. It somehow made me feel that after he entrusted his son with his shop that he cares about so much, this letter shows even more that he has faith in Fred, not talking about how to do things, or apologizing, but making jokes and really leaving it up to Fred. That would (on one hand, if it were me in Fred's position) freak me out, but on the other hand assure me that he's trying to get better and trust Fred completely.

Also, I want to punch Zonko.

One thing I noticed, I think here "considered" was supposed to be another verb:

"It considered me she had so many ideas on that subject."

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Review #28, by Spyci Trust

25th October 2014:
I love the fact that I can go back and read this story again and again without getting bored, and that is why it is my favourite of all the stories on this atrociously addictive website.

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Review #29, by youngatheart At the Shop

23rd October 2014:
Loved the father son bonding here and how George knew something was up. I was hoping for him to ease the tension by saying something like "at least your kid will be good at quidditch" or something :) My sister got pregnant in HS and I think she was a bit violent with her hormones in the beginning as well!

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Review #30, by Spyci Trust

21st October 2014:
I legitimately can't deal with how much my happiness depends on whether you update this story or not. It's really bad. And I also can't stop rereading it so I have no time for classes or work. Hormones = better than school.

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Review #31, by potterfan310 Trust

4th October 2014:

OH MY GOD THIS CHAPTER! Talk about heart/gut wrenching.

Roxy is wearing red and gold, this is not a drill. I am SUPER glad she was going to support Freddie/Gryffindor at the match.

"You have to meet my little girl. She's not here yet, so you'll just have to wait around to see how pretty she is." - ♥ ♥ Because I'm not crying right now, Freddie is just adorable and cute and asdfghjkl, George best flipping hang on in there, if he misses his granddaughter's birth there'll be hell to pay!

" I tucked Mum into a cot" - This made me laugh and I have a weird picture in my head now, because I'm assuming you mean something like a camp bed because to me a cot is what a baby sleeps in XD

RYAN! OH MY GOD SHE CAME TO THE HOSPITAL WITHOUT BEING ASKED!! :O Shock horror! And she's being nice to Freddie/comforting him, is this really a changed Ryan I am seeing because finally maybe Freddie has really affected her! SHE CAME OVER HIS FRIENDS! That is saying something in my book, maybe there's hope for FRYAN♥ yet!

"Mom in front of me" - Small typo I'm guessing since practically the whole chapter says mum not mom.

George is awake, at least Freddie gets to talk to him. I love his character so, so much. The way he's joking around despite being ill and in hospital, he's just fab. Fred and George, just perfect in every way those two right down from their characterisation to their talk ♥♥

Can't wait for the next one!

Soph ♥

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Review #32, by hp481516 Trust

3rd October 2014:
I am so glad Fred and George talked! And the line about Mrs. Weasley killing someone once was great!

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Review #33, by RupertsPheonix Trust

30th September 2014:
Oh mah gah. This was a gut-wrenching chapter if there's ever been one!

I love that Ryan showed up, even if Fred's stupid friends didn't even send an owl. (What total douche-nuggets. Bet they were busy celebrating the win with dumb Parise. Ugh that guy.)

Also, good on Rox for sporting scarlet and gold. And for immediately getting Freddo.

Poor Fred. And poor George.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Review #34, by Irishseeker Trust

30th September 2014:
Oh god. This chapter was just...heartbreaking. George and Fred's moment was just adorable and so perfectly written, bravo. Poor George and that line about him sometimes thinking that Fred is going to come back..ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME.
"You have to meet my little girl. She’s not here yet, so you’ll just have to wait around to see how pretty she is." this quote actually killed me. I died from an overdose of CUTENESS.
The Ryan and Fred in this chapter was just spot on and how she showed up out of everyone without even being asked was just what was needed. I love everything about this story and I love it more every single chapter.
Brilliant writing as usual and I can't wait for next chapter. :D

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Review #35, by ABookishBeing Trust

30th September 2014:
I may have sweated out of my eyeballs. A little bit. A lot. Throughout the chapter. I HAVE NO SHAME. Amazing chapter, as always, George is just... I love him and it breaks my heart to see him weak and ugh poor Fred just. I'm very scatterbrained-- I loved the chapter and you made me cry and Ryan was amazing and I feel like praying for George's good health.

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Review #36, by kayleefrank The Nursery

22nd September 2014:
Dude you're so evil! Please update quickly or I'll have to find out where you live and pretend I'm going to do something about it lol. But seriously, can't wait.

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Review #37, by Celeste The Nursery

20th September 2014:
I only just found this story. Read it in one night, and threw my phone at the couch. Wha I want more chapters. I want to know what happens. I wasn't Zonko and that stupid Parise to jump off a cliff into shark infested waters and get eaten or drown. I don't mind which in all honestly.

Oh god what happened to George is he okay. He better be okay. I don't even know.

I do love reading a pregnancy story from the guys point of view it's really refreshing all so I'm enjoying that for once it's Freddie not James, Al or Rose. Makes a very nice change.

Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

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Review #38, by krotti The Nursery

15th September 2014:
I can't wait to see where this story goes.
I love the change on the characters youve made from where most authors go (bookish Rose ends up with Scorpius) and giving some love to George and Angelina

I can;t wait for more, keep up the amazing work!

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Review #39, by hp481516 The Nursery

13th September 2014:
Oooohh I want to know what happens next! This was another great chapter!

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Review #40, by Javery fannn The Nursery

10th September 2014:
Aaargh don't leave us hanging (yes, I'm going to muster up all the un-funny jokes I can think of. Got nothing else to pass the time, dangling from this here cliff, see).

This chapter things seemed to be looking up for Fred (sure, he now has fellow students and Prophet readers alike gossiping about him, but that's bringing Ryan only closer to our dear Freddikins. So close he can taste it... forget I said that.)

And then - pregnant pause - "It's Dad." I hope Dad's not dead, because although dead Fred would appreciate the company up there, Freddie's not ready for a dead Daddy yet. (You know, hanging from this cliff no one can appreciate my rapping skills. It's a waste, really. You should totally let us cliff-hanging folks come down; don't let us down ;P.)

Or leave me up here, because I don't think I'll ever come down from the high of this story. (Sappy smile.) Rock on, hahaha.


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Review #41, by potterfan310 The Nursery

9th September 2014:

First off the CI, that's freakin' adorable!

FRYAN ♥ They're at it again, those two. I love them more than anything when they're together like this. Ryan needs to give into her bloody feelings and admit she actually likes Freddie, because she does. I know she does, deep down she really does. ♥

AWWW, ASDFGHJKL. THE NURSERY, RYAN AND FREDDIE IN THE NURSERY JUST ASDFGHJKL, CUTENESS! ♥♥ I love that there's a Raven and a Lion. Them talking about her first words and dating, babies! ♥ I really, really hope their daughter ends up being a mini Ryan with the most fabulous traits from Freddie, and is in Gryffindor just to really annoy Ryan :p

"And we didn’t fancy each other. Obviously." - LIES FREDDIE! You love her more than anything.

HA, George, I swear he will always win the best father of the year award. Embarrassing Freddie, love it.

Parise, urgh. He's an even bigger jerk than before. Urgh Ollie, she's just as bad.

NOO, GEORGE! Please say the damage control on his end went badly. No!! I hope Zonko senior wasn't the one to do anything bad to him and that's he going to be fine. Freddie cannot lose George!

Cannot wait for the next one, mainly for explanations.

Sophie ♥

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Review #42, by tre The Nursery

8th September 2014:
Mean cliff hanger! still awesome story, so ill forgive it

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Review #43, by ABookishBeing The Nursery

7th September 2014:
Thank you loads for the chapter dedication, made my day!
I got my dose of Fryan, I think I can hold up until the next update.
The raven-lion canvases made me so happy, Angelina is the best and most considerate mother in the world, I feel like she's exactly what Fred needs even though he's closer with George. The fact that she'll always be there no matter what eases Fred's stress a little, what with George's episodes and whatnot.
I really want to see China's reaction to Fred's coming out.
You had to get back at me somehow. You just had to.
Was George not able to handle damage control? Is it an episode? Is he at St. Mungo's? Is he fine and Mr. Weasley is the one at St. Mungo's? I don't think you're the murdering type, no ones going to die, yeah?
Brilliant, as always. Looking forward to the next update :)

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Review #44, by Consciouslyignorant The Nursery

7th September 2014:
Is it too much to say I hate you? It is? I'm sorry.
Really really sorry.
Just don't stop the Quidditch, I really, *really* what to see Zonko take an unfortunate bludger to the... everywhere even if he is twelve.
So yeah great stuff.
*insert generic bit of begging for/demanding a/threatening you life over a speedy update*

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Review #45, by ohnobeans The Nursery

7th September 2014:
I like how you're trying to make us forgive Ollie. Hopefully it's working for other people, but I still think she's a massive b word.


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Review #46, by Irishseeker The Nursery

7th September 2014:
This chapter was so perfect. The Fred and Ryan fluff was just perfect and it killed me. I cannot wait until the baby comes and it's just going to be an explosion of cuteness and aghhh. The cliffie was awful but I love and hate it at the same time. Every time you update it makes me love this story even more though I don't get how I can possibly love it more than I already do.
Brilliant writing and can't wait for the next update! :D

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Review #47, by RupertsPheonix The Nursery

6th September 2014:
Ah cliff hanger! You're posting the next chapter as I write this, right? ;)

This was a great chapter. I loved the scenes between Ryan & Fred, especially how Cosy they were in Fred's room and their moment in the nursery. :)

Looking forward to the next chap!


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Review #48, by Spyci The Dragon's Nest

3rd September 2014:
I just. No. I can't. I just love his way more than should be possible.

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Review #49, by Consciouslyignorant The Dragon's Nest

1st September 2014:
“One day she’ll realize your full name is just Fred,”
Its throw away lines like this that make this so unbelievably funny and yet believable.
I properly laughed out loud and everything.

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Review #50, by RupertsPheonix The Dragon's Nest

30th August 2014:
Good chapter! I enjoyed hearing from the family again, especially Angelina and George! Good convo between Fred and Roxy too. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!! -Kate/rp

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