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Review #26, by Paige_Black Spreading the Word

20th February 2013:
OMR I NEVER REALIZED OLIVER WOOD WAS SUCH A . . . DAYYUMMM . . . This will be interesting >:)

Author's Response: RIGHT? hehe.

I hope you like it!

Thanks :)

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Review #27, by Jaime Once Oliver Wood, Always a Captain

15th November 2012:
I loved it so much that minus the first 7 chapters I read the whole thing in one night and was up until 7 am. I would write a review on every chapter but that feels like work since it's midnight. Starting Hide and Seek in a bit. I'll tell you how much I love that series on Friday lol. (PS This thing doesn't rate high enough.)

Author's Response: Wow, that's super impressive! I really hope you like the sequel! And I'm so glad you enjoyed this! It's definitely a quick read once you get into it. Because, duh, shirtless Oliver. Thanks so much for the review!

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Review #28, by beapinkie Once Oliver Wood, Always a Captain

21st September 2012:
Some parts were good and some parts were kind of dull and just dragged on... But throughout the entire story I definately had mixed emotions about Oliver vs Roger.

Author's Response: Thank you for giving the story a chance and thank you for the review! I appreciate it.

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Review #29, by beapinkie Hogwarts is a Masked Ball

21st September 2012:
Yay they kissed! :) well... It was a drunken kiss. And Oliver threw up afterwards, but nonetheless it still was a kiss :)

Author's Response: IT WAS STILL A KISS. IT COUNTS.

Haha, thank you so much for the review -- hope you like the rest!

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Review #30, by ohcai Once Oliver Wood, Always a Captain

30th August 2012:
I really enjoyed reading this. Good job with developing the characters.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! if you're interested, feel free to check out the sequel. It's a hoot. Thanks for the review!

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Review #31, by TimeSeer Once Oliver Wood, Always a Captain

22nd August 2012:
I love this story and how original it is. Please keep writing because you have an amazing talent!

Author's Response: Thank you so much -- I posted the sequel to this story. I hope you enjoy it as well as the other stories I have posted.

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Review #32, by DumbledoresArmyOfOne Oh Captain! My Captain!

15th July 2012:
-dissolves into puddle of feels-
He came back for her! That is the sweetest thing to date in this book. and, as Jane says: Who bleeding cared about Roger?
Amazing chapter, can't wait for the game!

Author's Response: Isn't that the sweetest? I love him. Thanks so much for the review!

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Review #33, by DumbledoresArmyOfOne New Wallpaper

15th July 2012:
ok, not much to say about this chapter other than LEE AND ALICIA ARE AWESOME TOGETHER!
Aleecia forever

Thanks for the review!

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Review #34, by DumbledoresArmyOfOne Brazilian Bon-Bon

15th July 2012:
Ok, a few things. First, libby dressed in pink reminded me of Umbridge. Quite a bit. I was giggling all through that passage actually. Second, the Brazilian Bon-Bon sounds very hot: He had that smile—that I’m-an-amazing-sexy-Quidditch-bloke-and-you-want-me smile. And last, i really want to know what the heck Roger is up to, but i know that whatever it is is going to hurt Jane a lot. Which is sad. But necessary.
Excellent chapter, once again!

Author's Response: Libby as umbridge! SO FUNNY.

Ugh Bastian. Yes. So hot. I can't even. Why do I write so many hot men? I have a problem.

Thanks so much!

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Review #35, by DumbledoresArmyOfOne Birds of a Feather

15th July 2012:
Darn it! Seriously, Jane an dOllie dear need to get their act together and snog each other senseless, proclaim their undying love for each other and then rid off into the sunset on unicorns. Or something.
Awesome chapter, though i'd love to give some of your characters a good talking to ;)

Author's Response: They really do. It's pretty much mandatory. Since Oliver is gorgeous and all. Thanks!

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Review #36, by DumbledoresArmyOfOne Hogwarts is a Masked Ball

15th July 2012:
My favourite quote: Oliver smirked in an I-hate-you-but-look-how-hot-I-am sort of way.
I can just picture that... smarmy smirky supermegafoxyawesomehot oliver xD

Author's Response: Yes, that is exactly how that is supposed to look. Supermegafoxyawesomehot! Thanks so much for the review!

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Review #37, by DumbledoresArmyOfOne Over Drinks

15th July 2012:
Awesome chapter!
My favourite quote is: That smirk would look nice under the Hogwarts Express.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It definitely made me laugh :)

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Review #38, by Gabby Pucci Over Drinks

22nd May 2012:
I'm not sure if this was intentional but I love that their names are Oliver and Dodger (like from the musical/book Oliver! by Charles Dickens?)but that may just be me because I just finished doing that show. Anyways, love the story! Especially when they are fighting.Screaming matches+british accents are the best (;

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!

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Review #39, by Gabby Pucci Over Drinks

22nd May 2012:
I'm not sure if this was intentional but I love that their names are Oliver and Dodger (like from the musical/book Oliver! by Charles Dickens?)but that may just be me because I just finished doing that show. Anyways, love the story! Especially when they are fighting.Screaming matches+british accents are the best (;

Author's Response: Haha, no, it's not intentional actually. But I did notice it once I started calling Roger Dodger. Thank you so much! And I totally agree! Love me some accents.

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Review #40, by NadiaX Once Oliver Wood, Always a Captain

22nd April 2012:

Well, I'm not actually fan of non-existing Potter and changing the age of characters, but the hell with it! I enjoyed the story. The beginning was... not that good. There were few times that I almost stopped reading, but now I'm glad I didn't ^^. It was fun to read. A bit funny, a bit cliché (and that didn't bother me as much as it should, because I fancied Wood - and I still do xD). And it speeded up my heartbeat few times ^^'.

I can't promise I will read the sequel right away. I'm allergic to unfinished stories, sorry ^^. But I will show up when you finish it (or when I lose my mind, and that's quite possible!).


Sorry for mistakes, English isn't my native language.

Author's Response: Thank you for giving my story a chance. I'm glad you could get through it and still appreciate it enough to leave a review. The sequel will be finished once this next chapter is released soon, so I hope you decide to give that a shot as well. I appreciate the support. Thank you for your review.

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Review #41, by luna_lovely Once Oliver Wood, Always a Captain

7th April 2012:
awww, what a lovely ending :D, i'm glad you decided to write a sequel, i really want to know what will hapen in their seventh year with oliver being out of school, and Angelina now captain. i also wonder if maybe jane could play something other than seeker, so she is actually on the team this year. i guess i'll just have to go read the sequel now won't i?

Thank you for writing such an enjoyable story, i will definitely be checking out the sequel now.

Author's Response: Im so glad I decided to do a sequel as well. It really furthered the characters. Thank you so much for the review! I hope you enjoy Hide & Seek!

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Review #42, by rezdawg After the Game

30th January 2012:
woohoo! its about time! :D

Author's Response: I know, right?? Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate all of them!

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Review #43, by rezdawg Here Snitchie, Snitchie

30th January 2012:
amazing quidditch scene, you did a brilliant job of it :) i can not believe its been 23 chapters and jane's still with roger. seriously. i thought it wouldve been over before it even started. what the hell is ollie playing at?.. oh dear.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! Quidditch is something I LOVE (if you read my other story they're all very centered around the sport) so I love to write it.

Roger is a great man :) He's just not quite right for Jane. Unfortunately, she has to figure that out. haha! Thanks!

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Review #44, by rezdawg Ammo

29th January 2012:
the plot thickens... :D i love this chapter, its hilariously awkward xD i can not believe you put jane in a slutty nurse outfit though. omg. although olivers outfit, i would love to see ;)

Author's Response: So awkward, haha! So not Jane! And I loved every second of her being uncomfortable. Thank you so much for the review!

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Review #45, by rezdawg Arrogant Ellis

29th January 2012:
haha, oliver's such a jealous fool.. this is going to get dramatic, i can tell :D

Author's Response: He really is, haha. Teenagers are so dramatic. They absolutely crack me up. Thank you!

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Review #46, by rezdawg Spreading the Word

29th January 2012:
I've never read an Oliver/OC before, and you've got me hooked already, I love it! I like how you've made Oliver seem like a cocky git, he was never really like that in the books but its very entertaining :D and I'm quite happy to be rid of the trio, they would have taken away from the fic rather a lot :

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so happy you're enjoying it so far! I really loved writing this story, so it means a lot when people start reading it.

I always assumed Oliver was a little more cocky than we got to see in the books since he was given so little screen time. It was just my interpretation of him :) I enjoy it a lot. Thank you so much!

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Review #47, by Hope's Mom Once Oliver Wood, Always a Captain

26th January 2012:
I have just finished reading Keep Away for the 2nd time - it's great. The first time I finished I didn't write a review because I was so anxious to get to the sequel. I really like all the characters (except Libby and Mandy). None are perfect but all have interesting personalities with admirable traits. Nice work and thank you so much for writing and sharing your talent with readers. I will now read H&S again - thank you, thank you!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! It was really so much fun to write and you're exactly one is perfect. That's one of the main themes of the story. Okay, all of my stories. Thank you SO much for reading! I really appreciate all of the reviews! They really inspire me to write.

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Review #48, by DrPepperchik Spreading the Word

31st December 2011:
So far I love it! Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I can't wait to see what you think of the rest of the story!!

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Review #49, by fabledheart Once Oliver Wood, Always a Captain

5th November 2011:
i'm not the type of reader that like to review stories since my writing is bad (i'm not an english speaker) but damn this one is exceptional.

this is by far the best fanfic i ever read in my sodding life!!!

you have no idea how this story affected me. i'm a university student (19yrs old this dec) and am quite busy but i always made room to read at least one chapter of this fanfic everyday for the last few weeks. i love it so freaking much!!! everyday i woke up and rushed to classes i cant stop thinking about what might happen to perry and wood and lol i have never been this excited to just settle up everything and go back to my dorm, plop on my bed, turn on my pc and just giggle and squeal to your story. it was a nice feeling, you make me look forward to the next day when there's nothing else i can look forward to. i'm a law student btw. thats why there's so much tension!

and god when i find out there's a sequel i just wish i could apparate to wherever you are right now and hug you so tight you can hardly breathe! your jane is so inspiring, she became sort of my idol lol, i realized i started to act like her, talk like her, be sarcastic and cool and honest and whatnot. she's just so awesome and hell and so are you!!

have you ever thought of going pro? become published and whatnot because you are so talented in writing. i love reading novels and even some of them that i bought is never as good and heartwarming as your work. and dont get me start on some of the fanfics i've read in here and other sites *sigh. how come you didnt win any award? its unfair.

the thing that i love the most about this fanfic is that it is so full of wonderful characters (they are so alive) and i love all of them, and yes, even ellis (he's my 3rd fave character after perry and wood lol can you believe that??) i hate roger and libby and mandy btw. gits. and i love your sense of humor! i love jane's funny thoughts and wood's witty comments and every single words that came from fred and george! its hysterical xD

i'm sorry you had to read all of this nonsense. told you i'm not good at reviewing am i? but i just want you to know i really, really glad that i came across this fanfic. actually i'm a devoted oliver fan since i was 12 (seriously there was one point in my life where my dream is to go to scotland just to kidna- i mean stalk sean biggerstaff xD) so i was always so afraid of reading oliver/oc fanfics. it sort of drives me crazy, the thought of oliver with some girl that is. usually i give up and stop reading after 2 chapters or so, but this one is different. i adore perry's character and i love perry/wood love/have relationship and you are so brilliant to make it look realistic.

and lastly thank you for writing this story and sharing it with everyone. i'm off to read the sequel now~ and just so you know, you're inspiring. and amazing. and awesome. and beautiful, tho i never met you. i wish i could hug you. hahah. may god bless you in anything you do!!! :)

Author's Response: You are truly one of the sweetest people ever. Seriously. You're so lovely! And you shouldn't let things like not being a native speaker get in the way of telling someone how you feel :) They should understand that! And you never know, you might just make their day like you just did mine :)

Actually, yes, I have thought of going pro. I have several short pieces already published and I am working on an original novel I hope to publish one day. Hoping! Keep your fingers crossed for me!

I'm so happy you enjoyed this story. It's very character-driven, as is all of my writing. I love getting inside of my characters. And Jane is essentially me. She's just a little more extreme than I am with things like temper/stubborness, but it works for the story. And she can be thick, whereas I usually am not that thick. But yeah, Jane has a lot of my personality quirks. So I'm happy you like her!

And you're not good at reviewing? NONSENSE. I call nonsense. This is one of my absolute favorite reviews. I know what you mean about other Oliver/OC stories. They're hit or miss, but then again, every pairing can be hit or miss. You know what I mean?

Thank you so much for this absolutely amazing review. Most writers have a single goal of getting published. Of course that's one of my goals, but I always just really wanted to make an impact on other people. And hearing that I'm inspiring means I accomplished what I wanted to. So thank YOU.

I really hope you enjoy the sequel just as much! Can't wait to see what you think!!

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Review #50, by xVivaLaVanilla Spreading the Word

29th October 2011:
Funny thing? I read the sequel before I read this. I just finished reading the sequel and then I see this. I am going to shoot myself! Ahhh! But your a fabulous writer (;

Author's Response: Ooooh gosh. That is such a bad idea, haha. Well, you now know what happens :) Maybe I'll put more caps on there about it being a sequel! haha! Thanks so much! I hope you like this one as well!

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