Wooo! You finished it! Nice ending, you wrote Hermione and Ron well.
I have to say this line:
"Going for men now, eh Weasley?" Malfoy snorted and Ginny threw the coloring book at his head. "Weasley loves the cock..."
had me in HYSRETICAL laughter!!!
Well done again, i really enjoyed it!Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! Glad you liked it, it was REALLY fun to write ;) Report Review
woohoo! that was so good! Malfoy is SO annoying and Ron's being so cute. Thanks for making it so long! I can't wait for more!!Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review! As soon as the other chapter for my other story is up, I'll put the third and final installment up! THANK YOU! Report Review
That was funny! You should have Malfoy hit on Hermione and Ron yell at him or something. Please update soon!
10/10Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! The third part will be up as soon as I can get it there! :) Report Review
Okay so the review i left for chapter one...i meant to leave on chapter 2 lol, but as i said before, i like it a lot! I think the RH stuff is really sweet, and i find the Draco stuff funny :)Author's Response: Thanks so much--the final chapter will be up as soon as I can get it there with the closing and all that! THANKS again for reading! Report Review
Wow i really really like this story, great characterisation, and a really good plot, update soon :) 10/10 definately!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
this is really good so far. poor ron, being made an ass of like that. i can't wait till you get the next chap out!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Once I get the first chapter out to my new Oliver/OC story I'll have the next one immediately put on to be validated! Thanks again! Report Review
love it, really good, you should have malfoy flirt with hermione and ron get jealous, love how it is in ron pov. pls update soon!Author's Response: Thank you for the review! The second chapter is coming once I get the first chapter of another story validated! Soon soon! Report Review
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