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Review #26, by LadyofErised Meet Norah

14th September 2014:
Hi, just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story! I love James stories and was just having a look through and yours caught my eye and I have to say having read it ALL last night that your James is definitely one of my favourites ! Aside from loving James, your whole story is really well written and I love how you've kept so true to the characters both JKs and your own throughout. I think you've written all the Potter children perfectly, though especially Lily - so much like her Mum but with streaks of her Dad in there too. Also all your original characters are great, I love Elle, she's very relatable and I think you've created a really great character there. Really hope you update soon as you left it on such a cliffhanger and I really want to know how it all pans out! Congratulations on a really great story and I look forward to reading more as it comes :)

Author's Response: Thank you m'dear, it means a lot when people say they're enjoying reading my story. It's like my little treasure! And I bow down to you for reading it ALL in one sitting!
Oh thank you! That was the main thing I really had a hard time with! I kept thinking throughout the whole thing 'that isn't how he/she would react' or 'that is completely OOC what on earth was I thinking writing that?!' but I'm glad people are telling me different :)
Well, by the time I am writing this, the next chapter should be up and I think you've already reviewed that one :D
So enjoy!
~Aimee xxx

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Review #27, by ScoroseOTP Lily Bought Me Some Really Sexy Lingerie... Yeaaaah, That Happened

13th September 2014:
Poor Charity! I bet she's way beyond angry and more offended than anything that her little sister didn't tell her that
1) She had a boyfriend
2) They'd been dating for 2 years
and 4) She was engaged.
I'd be a little more than angry if my sister did that to me!
Although, at the same time I felt really bad for Elle who has literally just been thrown into the deep end and is having to lie to everyone who cares about her most.
I'm really glad that you've chosen to explore Lily more in this chapter (I have a soft spot for Little Miss Potter!) She seems really sweet to start with and so innocent, especially in contrast to what just happened with Charity.
So they're going on holiday! What could go wrong with that! I'm so looking forward to it!
Bless her! She tried to stop it all but Ginny insisted, that's so cute.
Oh my stars... her Dad does not seem happy... and it's Charity's fault... Ummm... that's not good.
Well that was nice... he changed his mind quickly. I'd really like to know what happened between Elle and her Dad though. That poor girl though, I'm really feeling sorry for her.
But to be fair, you could suddenly get engaged to a much worse person who belongs to a really horrible family. At least she got James, the Potters and Weasleys!
Lily's so sweet, she's really head strong which makes her remind me completely of her Mum, which I'm sure is intentional, but you've done a really good job with that!
Oh my stars (again) that's a lot of money! I'd be the same as Elle if her "fake" almost sister-in-law suddenly started buying me all sorts of stuff. Especially if she decided to buy me sexy lingerie! I would probably die of embarrassment, not too dis-similar to Elle!
I love how Ginny desperately wants to get to know her daughter-in-law! She's so sweet!
I'm so glad that Charity, Darrell and the kids are accepting and care so much about Elle, it's really good to hear.
Were they talking about their Mum? I'm rather intrigued to what that meant, although I assume it's going to make me sad or angry... so maybe I don't?
Harry and Al! That was adorable and the thing is... I don't even doubt that would happen! I love the weird family!
I love how Harry gets in trouble! That's so Ginny!
James! He's really playing this one up isn't he? I quite like it though, he's a lot of fun.
Although not as fun as Elle is! He really had that coming!

I literally love this story! It's really great! I'm glad you'd posted on the Hufflepuff review tag the day I decided to take part! I'm really looking forward to reading on! I hope that they have a fairytale ending and end up together! I really do!

Emz xxx
(Your fellow Hufflepuff friend!)

Author's Response: Hello once again Emz :D hehe!

An extra-long review today! Wow! I'm really glad that you are liking the story and that you took a chance on reviewing one of my stories in the review tag :) And basically, all I can say is you'll have to wait and see what happens with the whole family, it gets interesting... especially the underwear situation. I loved writing her embarrassment because I could just imagine it in my head as I wrote it.
And the ending practically wrote itself, I knew I wanted a witty line and a bit of flirtation between the two so that's the result.
~Aimee xxx

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Review #28, by ScoroseOTP So... I'm Engaged?

10th September 2014:
That is the sign of a good night! I like the idea of her work being so kind and Kelly being so casual about talking about James, because I'm sure that's exactly what waitresses do!
James seems so vulnerable at the start of this chapter, right up to the point she caves.
(Just saying now, I LOVE THE IDEA FOR THIS STORY! It's fantastic. Already!)
He bought her an enagement ring, and shoes. Oh my stars, he's amazing. And really cute!
Ginny! That was so sweet! She just wants the best for her biggest boy! It's so so cute (I'm sorry I keep saying "Cute")
All the questions! Elle is a good actress, I must say, she's very convincing and has some good stories.
The way she talked to Annabel was really cute too, I love little kids!
I actually love the way James pre-warned her! They are really really good at this! They convinced everyone!
I'm seriously intrigued still! I'm defiently going to continue reading soon!

Well done! You're still of writing is really good! I'm impressed!

Emz xxx
(Fellow friendly Hufflepuff!)

Author's Response: Hello again Emz :)

Yeah, I wanted the whole work place to be kind because of all the stuff that's happened to her, it would be just harsh to have a bad work environment to work in :D
Thank you so much, glad that you're loving the idea of the story as I struggled with trying to make the fake girlfriend angle work at first then moved onto the fake fiancee instead :)

~Aimee xxx

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Review #29, by ScoroseOTP Welcome to my Crappy Life

10th September 2014:
I'm very intrigued! I would rather like to know what happened!
I'm feeling rather sorry for her but I like the character you've created. She seems real, which is sometimes hard to create.
I also like all the other characters you've created, her sister and co. all seem really sweet, kind and understanding, so I'd like that to prove true. Her Dad seems like someone to be wary of and I'd love to find out why. Molly seems like a LOT of fun as well as Dom! Fred and Al also seem like a lot of fun and like typical boys! I really want to hear more about James... he seems troubled, I'd rather like to know why!

Going to check out the next chapter now!
Well done!

Emz xxx
(Fellow Hufflepuff friend!)

Author's Response: Hello there! :)

Thank you, that's something that I struggled with, trying to make Elle a realistic character. And you'd have to wait and see in the next chapter (even though you've already reviewed that one at the time I'm writing this, haha).

~Aimee xxx

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Review #30, by Loonylovegood67890 Meet Norah

7th September 2014:
Oh my Gods, I need an update! This was such a cliff hanger and I hope James understands - I think he will be supportive to Elle. I loved reading how she gradually fell in love with him and how he did with her under the circumstances of their engagement. I wonder what will happen when the families hear about it being fake to start with (if of course they do find out?). I felt so sorry for Elle in the last chapter and throughout the story has been written with so much emotion! I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Author's Response: There will be an update in a few days or so! I have finally finished writing chapter 18 and I need to wait until an edit has been through the queue on one of my other stories :) And you'll have to wait and see what happens with their families, I'm not really sure on which way I want them to take the news as of yet but I'll tackle that bridge when it comes to it!
Thank you for a lovely review m'dear! :D
~Aimee xxx

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Review #31, by Isabelle (again) Meet Norah

30th August 2014:
Hi me again. I asked about the update schedule. But I decided to write a real review. =D I love the way you write because it is so relatable. You explain the emotions of the characters really well. I feel what they are feeling, believe it or not. Especially those embarrassing moments (that seem to happen to Elle quite a lot) make me feel as if I would want to dig a hole, jump in it and never come out. You never fail with the cliffhangers though. I do not like them, but they are what keeps me anticipating a new chapter. =D This is one of my first reviews so forgive me if you find me rambling. I really love your stories! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Hello again Isabelle! :D
Thank you, relatable characters has been one of the main things I wanted my characters to be and in some parts, I think I need to work on it :) Oh I know, I feel exactly the same when something embarrassing happens to Elle, I even blush it's ridiculous but then again, at least that's a good thing right?
P.S. You aren't rambling at all! It's a normal amount :)
~Aimee xxx

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Review #32, by Isabelle Meet Norah

30th August 2014:
Hi! This is my first ever review although I have been reading since the beginning! I really love your story! But may I know what is your schedule for posting a new chapter? I check your story every week for updates and get disapointed when I do not see a new chapter. Sorry if you have mentioned this before but I seldom go through reviews.

Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I'm really glad that you love it :) I'm just in the middle of hurriedly uploading challenge chapters before the deadline so it'll be a while until the next chapter but I promise it won't be a long time! :D And it's no problem, it was an honest question :D
~Aimee xxx

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Review #33, by harrypotterfan13 Meet Norah

28th August 2014:
well hey there...!!!
ok dont get mad...but i hate you i hate you i hate you...!!!
who does this to their readers..huh..?
cliff hanger after cliff hanger...u r going to be the death of me...!!
well...i have been reading your story from the day 1 u updated...u r one heck of a writer girl...!!
but i never got a chance to review (sry 4 dat btw) bt my personal lyf have been a hell for past yr almost :-(
but HPFF have been my escape spcly stry lyk urs..!!
i really love the characters u have in this stry and the way u use them..!!!
and u actually made me fall in love with james...:-*
i dont knw where to begin but lets start with the warning...I DNT CARE JUST MAKE SURE THEY END UP MARRYING OR I'LL DIE :-P
I loved the way u write about their chemistry as frnds then as lovers spcly how u wrote those intimate scenes between them...u have got some style made me smile lyk a fool but blush at the same tym...!!!
the best thing u take ur tym building the characters their background and plot in total..!!!
i love ur plot...and i'm dreading the chapter wen their families will find out about the truth of their engagement...plz dnt be so harsh on them...!!
ohh and i would love to read about the bonding between lily and elle i always wanted a younger sis bt never got one so it make me smile that how elle is that for lily...!!!
you knw wen they get married i would love to read their vows plz dnt skip it (its a request from a jelle lover) spcly after the way u wrote that section where they expressed their feelings that y they love the other..i was swooning...wink wink...!!!
i dnt knw how u do it bt one minute there was love in the air and another...boom...tension tension tension...!!!(although it was brilliant)
any ways as i was saying plz plz update soon i'll be waiting...lots of love...!!!
(sry if my review is kind of confusing i was so eager to review that i jst started typing without first collecting my i promise a better review next tym if u promise a faster update...i knw i'm evil :-P)

Author's Response: AW :) This review has put a massive smile on my face! It's honestly fine if you're life has been hassle, you don't HAVE to review anyway it just lets me know if you're enjoying it or not :D I'm in love with this James as well, I just want a boyf like him :( And I can't promise anything... ;) You'll just have to wait and see what happens eventually :D
I can't really say anything else other than you'll have to wait and see what happens between James and Elle because it should be interesting ;)
~Aimee xxx

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Review #34, by ochalke5 Meet Norah

26th August 2014:
Please update soon! That was some cliffhanger!
Amazing as always. Love James. Love Elle.

Author's Response: I'll try and get the next few chapters written and uploaded soon but no promises just yet! :) And thank you!
~Aimee xxx

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Review #35, by sleepingcarrots Meet Norah

26th August 2014:
Oh my lord! Please please upload more as soon as possible. This THE best story I have read on this site by far and this chapter has finished on the cliff of mayhem. I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you lovely :) I also get a massive smile on my face whenever someone says they enjoy my story and characters :D The next update should be soon, I'm really busy atm :)
~Aimee xxx

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Review #36, by justanotherpotterhead (not logged in) Meet Norah

25th August 2014:
Oh my merlin I love this so much like so much ! I have never had a fav fanfic till now but this is by far the most addictive and well written and amazing story. I just love it. Update update update as soon as you can cos I can't wait much longer. Sorry if I'm ott I'm excited :)

Author's Response: Awh :) You're making me blush! I'm really glad that you're enjoying it because it makes me happy and gushy on the inside :) Updates will probably in the next week or the week after because I have a lot of stuff to do in RL and challenge stories.
~Aimee xxx

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Review #37, by Chaz Corner Meet Norah

23rd August 2014:
Wha? Stupid, stupid cliffhanger! I am currently hating you.

~ Chaz

Author's Response: Aw :( please don't hate me! And I promise the next chapter explains it all :D
~Aimee xxx

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Review #38, by madness Meet Norah

22nd August 2014:
This is such an amazing story, I've loved reading it so far and can't wait for the next chapter. Talk about suspense much.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, it means a lot! And I was really hoping that the cliffhanger would be received well and it has, thank God! Not really sure when the next chapter will be out though!
~Aimee xxx

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Review #39, by Anonymous Meet Norah

20th August 2014:
One hell of a cliffhanger there! Please update soon eek

Author's Response: *bows humbly* thank you very much m'dear! I wasn't really sure how you'd all react to it but it's been good so far :)
~Aimee xxx

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Review #40, by yerawizard27 Meet Norah

19th August 2014:
No! I can't believe I've run out of chapters! AND RIGHT AT THE CLIFFHANGER... GAH!

I sat down and started reading this story a few hours ago and only just stopped. Elle is an adorable character, and honestly I'm so glad that, through her, we get to see representation of anxiety and panic attacks. It's not very often there are main characters with genuine panic disorders, and I appreciate the awareness you're bringing by writing about them.

This chapter blew my mind, The way it switched so quickly, from the Jelle (The Jelle, oh my gosh, the Jelle!) To something so sad. I'm sure Elle didn't really kill her mother. If I were to put money on it, I would bet she was the one driving the car when the accident happened and she blames herself.

I'm new to this story now and I don't know how often you update, but please, please update soon. I have to know what happens next!

~Rachel x

Author's Response: Howdy Rachel!

Ooh, unlucky for you! And that's one of the things I wanted to include because I suffer from anxiety and panic attacks and not very many stories have representations of them (or not very good ones) so I thought it would nice to express the feelings through a character :)

I KNOW RIGHT! The last two chapters have been so jam-packed with Jelle and whenever I was writing them, I was getting hot under the collar! LOL! You'll have to wait and see whether you're right or not ;)

And I swear the new chapter should be up soon... ish. But it won't be a month like a few chapters ago :)

~Aimee xxx

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Review #41, by Valerie Meet Norah

19th August 2014:
This book is so amazing and emotional like jesus christ woman are you trying to kill me?!?!?! Please post the next chapter soon because I need to know what James is going to say!

Author's Response: I promise I'm not trying to kill you with all the feels... yet. Thank you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it :) It really warms my heart when people like reading my stories :D And you'll have to wait and see what James will say ;)
~Aimee xxx

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Review #42, by Celeste Meet Norah

19th August 2014:
*takes a deep breath* oh my god.
I was not expecting that. I dropped my phone when I got to the end I thought it was her sister that was driving and was the reason her mum died. Not Elle. Wow. I think James will understand when she fully explains. But yay she admitted to her self fully the depth of her feelings for him.

Another fantastically stunning chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: I told you it wasn't what you'd expect ;) And you'll have to see James' reaction in the next one to find out what he thinks... mwahahahaha, I'm evil!
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and enjoying my story!
~Aimee xxx

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Review #43, by caapotter Meet Norah

18th August 2014:
What the hell? Why would you let the chapter end here for Godric's sake!!! I'm sure she's overreacting.
Caa xx

Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see if she's overreacting or not but it's not what you're expecting... or at least I hope it's not what you're expecting ;D
~Aimee xxx

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Review #44, by kassandra466 Meet Norah

18th August 2014:
Oh my goodness, that was intense. I mean talk about cliff hangers. James and Elle compliment each other so nicely. He is constantly there to support her, I think tat if Elle is honest with him he will be understanding. At least I hope he will. They can't break up, I won't allow it. Haha, but in all seriousness it was another wonderfully flawless chapter and I literally can not wait for the next. I was so excited when I saw you had updated.

Author's Response: Intense is what I was going for and I'm glad that the cliffhanger has been getting similar reactions from most people :) Which is a good thing! Well, we'll see what James' reaction is soon but not in the next chapter... there's hint for you ;D
~Aimee xxx

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Review #45, by Missy Meet Norah

18th August 2014:
I just stayed up until 3am reading this story. I am so addicted! It's so well done and I absolutely love the characters. James and Elle are both so relatable and I absolutely love them together. Please continue writing because I'm literally on the edge of my seat wondering what will happen next. Thank you for a wonderful story!

Author's Response: WOW! Thank you very much! I agree that James and Elle are lovely together, they just compliment each other perfectly ;) And you'll find out what happens soon... ish.
And thank you for reading and reviewing my story!
~Aimee xxx

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Review #46, by Missginny29 Meet Norah

18th August 2014:
OMG this chapter was so dramatic you left it,on such a cliff hanger, I can't wait to find out what happens next please update soon! This is my favourite story!

Author's Response: Well thank you very much for it being your favourite story! :) And you'll have to wait and see what happens but the next chapter won't be telling you James' reaction... that's a massive hint right there!
~Aimee xxx

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Review #47, by Midnight spark Meet Norah

18th August 2014:

I have staring at the screen with my mouth open for more than a minute. My sister just came and stuffed a chewing gum in my mouth. That was when I snapped out of it.

Oh, just update soon! You know, maybe in two or three days. That's my limit. I'll probably snap if it takes longer than that.

Author's Response: You'll find out what happened soon enough my deary ;) It's all very secretive. I really hope you haven't snapped yet because it has been over a week, haha! But I'm serious, it should be soon. I hope.
~Aimee xxx

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Review #48, by LittleMissStoryteller Meet Norah

18th August 2014:
Omg, I need more!!! This is so good! I've been checking everyday to see if you had updated it yet and I got so excited when I saw you had updated again!!
What do you mean she killed her mum?!?! PLEASE EXPLAIN!
I may or may not actually be completely and utterly obsessed with this story but, in my defence, it is really good!!! I LOVE IT!!! This is really good, just: well done for writing such a good story!! xxx

Author's Response: You'll have to wait to hear the explanation I'm afraid my lovely :) It won't be long though which is probably not a bad thing! Thank you so much, I really enjoy reading everyone's reviews on it :D
~Aimee xxx

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Review #49, by Grace3 Meet Norah

18th August 2014:
OH SNAP!!! The other chapters were GREAT but this is AWESOME, this story keeps getting better and better. You don't know how long I've been waiting for this chapter to make its appearance and now it has. I hope nothing changes between Elle and James they are the power couple. PLEASE POST SOON!!! THANK YOU FOR HAVING THE STRENGTH AND COURAGE TO POST A DELIGHTFUL AND A WONDERFUL INGENIOUS PLOT. I THANK MY LUCKY STARS THAT I WAS LUCKY ENOUGH TO STUMBLE ON TO THIS EXQUISITE STORY. THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR GENIUS WITH US ALL!(THE DREAM IS STILL ALIVE FOR MORE WONDERFUL CHAPTERS TO COME!!)

Author's Response: new Power Couple = Jelle! I absolutely agree but you'll have to wait and see ;) MWAHHAAHAHAH!
~Aimee xxx

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Review #50, by happyanon Meet Norah

18th August 2014:
You can't just... i waited so long and oh my god!! I knew it was life support! I knew it! Ugh and somehow I also figured elle had something to do with the accident i doubt tho that she actually killed her mother. If they were in the car then they must be arguing over something and something happened so she blamed herself. Frankly the dad is being a complete as shole and a git. I look forward for the next chapter hopwfully very soob. I think its the first time i dont have much to say because well i barely registered that it was the end of the chapter and then bam CLIFF HANGER. I couldn't even formulate a response woman. All i got out was a loud "WHAT" . in which my cousin yet again pointed out that talking to my phone isnt normal i really need my psychiatrist again. No matter, i knos Elle will give a heartfelt explanation next chapter hopefully james will listen before jumping to conclusions and hopefully THEY STILL GET MARRIED BECAUSE DAMN IT WOMAN THEY BETTER END UP MARRIED OR I WILL DIE. anyway, congratulations to you for the cliff hanger award i have just decided to give you! Hahahaha pls update soon! Xoxo

Author's Response: Oh bet I can ;) Congratulations for you fabulous deductions... but you may or may not be right or wrong. But then again, you might be right about the situation but on the other hand, it might not be what you're expecting :) confused yet? Tehe.
And I know, majorly hating on her Dad. I so wanted to reach into my screen and slap his head off his shoulders for how he was treating Elle :(
Muahahaha! I'm really glad people are reacting well to the cliffhanger and that people are still guessing as to what has happened because I definitely didn't want that to be out there straight away or it would ruin the plot! :)
All I have to say about the marriage thing is; wait and see ;)
*bows graciously and accepts award* I would like to thank HPFF for getting me addicted to fanfiction, I would like to thank my parents for letting me have unwavering access to the laptop every day and of course I would like to thank all the people who have favourited or reviewed the story! It means a lot! *exits stage and faceplants over dress*
Thank you again for another lovely review, yours are always the best!
~Aimee xxx

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