Tackled by Christmas trees? No, I've never been in that situation. I can't believe James put on Peter's pants! That's just hilarious! Now, where is Lily? 10/10!! Report Review
James can be so... James sometimes! 10/10!! Report Review
Great chapter!! I liked the dancing in the rain; it can be pretty fun. 10/10!! Report Review
Oh, is James getting jealous?? I think he is!!
10/10!! Report Review
Yes, he is an immature clown! It'll be a miracle if he gets Lily to go out with him. Of course, she'll have pity on him and say yes, sometime. 10/10!! Report Review
That was pretty funny. I really thought it was Lily, but only because James said it was, which you made James say, so...
Ok, shutting up now. Report Review
I can't believe James would be stupid enough to do that! Talking about Lily behind her back, when she could easily hear him! 10/10!! Report Review
Peter collects rocks?? Weird! James really needs to work on his "you know"'s. 10/10! Report Review
Now, James! That is just so mean! I would rather Lily not go out on a date with him, and Sirius win! James'll break Lily's heart, I bet! 10/10! Report Review
Goodness gracious. Please, insert spaces between your punctuation, it gets rather distracting and annoying to read words thatarestucktogetherlikethis with only commas and such. Otherwise, I think this story is quite lovely, so far. Report Review
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i would just like to inform you that yours are the funniest around.i almost wet myself laughing! Ausome story Report Review
YEEEEEEEEEEEES!!!! Lily finally caved!!!! Ah, young love. gots to love it, right?Author's Response: Right you are, grinning_prats, right you are. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
AW-KWARD! poor James.....poor Lily. But hey, how cute is James! You gotta love him, right? OK, so the poem made me laugh histerically until tears came out of my eyes, but, hey, give him credit for trying!
Anyway, great chapter....
- LisaAuthor's Response: LoL, yes, James is so cute. I definitely love him. . .even though he's a fictional character and all. . .About the poem. That was actually as good a poem as I could write. Really. I suck at poetry. LoL! Report Review
I hope you feel better soon.... I definately know how you feel. Once, i wrote an entire chapter, than clicked the preview button, and for some stupid reason it brought me to the Log-In screen. So yeah, good chapter considering.....you know....the frustraution. I liked the tackeling christmas trees!Author's Response: Oh, gosh, I was so, so, SO frustrated while trying to write that chapter. . .LoL, I like writing the tackling Christmas trees. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
that was hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's Response: LoL; ) Report Review
i love your story. totally random. that's kinda how i roll!! lol............. not really, at least not in my stories. you know i kinda hafta wonder if this story were strait to the point would it only be a short story? i'm just joking:) you're great!!!Author's Response: : ) Report Review
Wow...that was really funny...especially the last chappie. Congrats and thanks for putting your time into writingAuthor's Response: And thanks for putting your time into reading and reviewing my story: ) Report Review
You finished!!! That makes me so happy. I love your stories and can't wait for the next one. One little thing. I think that were taking Astrology not Astronomy. Author's Response: Oh, my God. I can't believe I made that mistake! -hides face sheepishly- I am so sorry! What the heck was I thinking while writing that chapter? Report Review
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very funnyAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Oh My God! So GooD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sequal? Author's Response: No, no sequel, LoL. Maybe a sort of epilogue someday (in the far, far future) that shows them during their date or something like that, but that idea's definitely not written in stone. Thanks so much for reading and review! Glad you liked it! Report Review
the end hard to Believe actually no it is not but i liked it happy (belated) birthday to you.but i really liked this story.so it is now time to say good bye to An Off Course Bet Good Ending any way.can't wait for... I can't sat that! oh well Great story. Author's Response: Yes, it's time to say good bye to An Off Course Bet. -sighs- Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
Congratulations! On your story-end and your birthday:) Your story was fantastic, really!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Loyal and Just, my arse. Pfft. Their a sneaky little house. Really.
Hahaha this is so funny. Yóú're so funny! It's all so damn funny!Author's Response: LoL, thank you! Report Review
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