Yay! Awesome chapter

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Really quick transitions...

Good story, however.

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No comment, it was ok.

A little more dramaticness, I guess?

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I loveee your story so far-- but in this chapter you mention Tonks.. Umm, Tonks passed away in the 7th book-- idk if you remember that or your not going by the book facts..
But, just in case i wanted to let you know. other wise. i love this.

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You're an excellent writer! You should be very proud of yourself for working full-time and still finding time to write an amazing story! I usually only read dramione fanfictions, but this one is irresistible! When people constantly say "update now," I know it can get frustrating and seems rude, but take it as a complement. It just means they are obsessed with your writing and can't wait for more ;)
I'm a new writer, so if you have any tips or advice for me...I'd love it!!! Thanks so much, and keep writing!!

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Awww! Such a good story! My heart broke at the last sentence :(

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:D i really liked this, i hope that you continue to write like this even with real life in the way. I think you did really well with Ron and Hermione's characters and made them realistic and you kept ron the idiot he is which was infuriating but it made the story better. Well done :)

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I first read the story in 2006..the story is as good today as it was then...great job with the editing..excellent characters..still one of the hp fanfic gems..

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Well done ! Keep it up !! Enjoyed it very much !

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Have you read any other of the Harry Potter books? Like the sixth and seventh? They contain a lot of info which your story, I'm afraid, is sorely lacking. I like the story, but suggest you do some extensive research.

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You are an inspiration to me, to say the least! I've only been on this site for a couple of months, and I feel like a amateur; I have absolutely no idea where I'm going with all these story ideas swimming around in my head--Should they break up? What's her name? Should this involve Molly? Wait...what time is it again? It's aboslute pandemonium in there!

This story is--for lack of a better word--magnificent. I felt you hit the characters' personalities right on the nose and you managed to make the events and dialogue all work.

I congratulate you on a wonderful story!

-Hailey (Potternerd1997)

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Oh Ron. He's so wonderful!!!

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I love it! It was So sweet!!

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really good, but i think tha hermione and ginny should have had a better plan that they secretely put into action behind rons back leading up to the break up at the end. really enjoyed it though.

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It was really good. I like your writing style but it was just...uhm...OOC considering the fact that it was Ron and Hermione. I mean, looking back to DH, it was Harry and Ginny who had three children and Ron, one. And Ron seemed just as childish...and he really fit that part perfectly.

And I also didn't like the part about "And then there's people like that bastard Snape, who had no one and died alone, unloved and unprotected." since I'm a huge fan of Snape. That sentence was true but it was a pretty harsh way of saying it, considering the fact that Snape died like that because he loved so much.

But aside from that, it was really nicely written and if you could make up characters of your own, you could probably write your own book!

Congrats,
SeverusLove

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I absolutely love this :)

I don't really like reading Ron/Hermione but you wrote it really well x

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"Keep an eye on your best friend." LOL! That's awesome! ^^

I really liked this tale! It was very sweet, but not nauseatingly so, and it was also well-paced. A very delightful read - thanks for sharing!

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This story was so fantastic. I absolutely loved it. I just wish it could've been longer! It was amazing though. I'll definitely be looking into your other stories.

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Great ending :) :) cant wait to find out miranda's reaction- i already dont like her ;)

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wow. that totally just broke my heart! poor hermione- she did everything right, but nothing is going well for her! I can't wait to continue!

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Love this :) I don't normally go for Hermione/Ron pairings (other then the books obvi) but this is amazing. I love how you write; you give enough details to make it very interesting without making it too obvious. I can't wait to read on. One thing though- i'm assuming voldy is dead- or will we learn more of this later? great job!

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WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!?!?!? WHY WOULD YOU END A CHAPTER LIKE THAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?

I'm just gonna skip to the end now because i can't take all this drama.i just want to find out what happens to them...

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i love this story! it just keeps getting better!

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this just keeps getting better!

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o my gosh!! tis is so goood!:]

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