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Review #26, by Lucid Bellatrix

19th September 2005:
I really liked your summary, I know thats a weird thing to comment on, but its eye catching. I liked this so far, I think her worries over the baby are realistic, its going to be interesting to see how she reacts to the birth. I feel that Andromeda's attitude is off somewhat, but that I mean she seems very mature for her age, though its a little unclear how old she is exactly, I have assumed 17-18 based on her manner. I would defiantly like to see where you go with this. :)

Author's Response: She's a bit more childlike in the next chapter, but I still may need to work on it some. She's four in this chapter. Thanks for complimenting the new summary and for reviewing.

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Review #27, by clen3k Bellatrix

17th September 2005:
Very nice. A good beginning and I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Review #28, by padfoot and prongs foreva Bellatrix

6th April 2005:
wow..this is really good pls updte soon and i really really like it...lyl lyl

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Review #29, by magpie quill Bellatrix

5th April 2005:
i really liked this. your much more creativethen i am with my storie. please write more soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm sure your stories are better than you think!

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Review #30, by Helen Bellatrix

5th April 2005:
AW, innit sweet :D sorry, i just thought the ending was sweet! good story, look forward to an update!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update hopefully by May.

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