{reviewid: 906996, reviewer: 'michelle'}
18th February 2006:
this is sooooooo awesome! please hurry with the next chapter! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry, but this is a one-shot, and though I may write something connected to this, this will remain a one-shot.
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{reviewid: 906787, reviewer: 'CASY'}
18th February 2006:
SOUNDED GOOD BUT IT WAS BORINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
Author's Response: I'm sorry you think so.
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{reviewid: 905836, reviewer: 'KatieL'}
17th February 2006:
Good Beginning I really liked the little note they shared for Christmas...looking forward to where your taking this ....good job
Author's Response: Thanks, but for now, this is a one-shot. I'm glad you liked it, though!
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{reviewid: 905835, reviewer: 'KatieL'}
17th February 2006:
Good Beginning I really liked the little note they shared for Christmas...looking forward to where your taking this ....good job
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{reviewid: 899215, reviewer: 'charmed%20ravenclaw'}
12th February 2006:
Heh heh that was sweet.
Author's Response: THanks!
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{reviewid: 887248, reviewer: 'sammy%20lupin'}
3rd February 2006:
that was an awsome story and totally funn. im laughing and my brother is looking at me like im crazy. keep it up!! *laughs like an idiot*
Author's Response: I'm glad it made you laugh!
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{reviewid: 876621, reviewer: 'Kimera'}
27th January 2006:
Hmph. Men! Good story, btw. :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 864850, reviewer: 'isis29'}
19th January 2006:
What? What? What? What? you can't just stop there write PLEASE write
it is so GOOD
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and I may write a story connected to it, but if I do it won't be for a while.
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{reviewid: 861855, reviewer: '1BlockedFool'}
16th January 2006:
*giggles stupidly* Haha! Next week! Funny! Also, very sweet and I imagined James and Lily very much the way you wrote them. Very well done, very well written, I applaud you! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm glad you though I wrote them in a believable way.
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{reviewid: 854916, reviewer: 'mischeif_managed'}
12th January 2006:
very very very very cute!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 854510, reviewer: 'Lucy%20Locke'}
12th January 2006:
Nice open ending. I really like this story.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 849846, reviewer: 'potterwoman'}
8th January 2006:
Ha ha! So funny! I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it and found it funny!
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{reviewid: 847410, reviewer: 'theProngsPadfootMoony'}
7th January 2006:
hahahah :D I thought about something like that when I first read the summary! well done though! :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 846693, reviewer: 'Silver%20Whisper'}
7th January 2006:
Very good!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 846083, reviewer: 'aussie_princess_94'}
7th January 2006:
WOW! Awesome fic! It was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet!
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so!
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{reviewid: 844884, reviewer: 'that%201%20mauraders%20chick'}
6th January 2006:
That was cute! I loved the end, it made me smile. Great writing although I had always thought that Lily's middle name was Marie and James's middle name was Harold. Where I got this notion, I don't know but other than that, it was great!
Author's Response: Thanks, I loved writing the ending. As far as I know, their middle names were never revealed, so I just picked random names.
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{reviewid: 843596, reviewer: 'Lily%20Black'}
5th January 2006:
aw... that was cute!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 842358, reviewer: 'Emerika'}
5th January 2006:
HeeHee. Wonderful story! I love how you wrote it! Its just like James to say something like that!
"How about next week?!" omg!LMAO!
Love from Michigan
SuperBowl 40!
Emerika
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! THanks, Emerika!
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{reviewid: 839930, reviewer: 'timeturner'}
3rd January 2006:
I enjoyed how you took the time to explain the difference in her previous view of him. It was an unexpected twist that really helped draw me in to the story. Very nicely done. I liked how you had her so indecisive on the gifts…it happens to many people who are searching for the perfect thing. The ending was cute and fluffy and James’ bit of mischief was a wonderful way to end the story. Great job!
Author's Response: Well, it had to take a lot for her to come to love him, and I dislike that many ignore that. I try to make my fics realistic. The ending was my absolute fave part to write. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 839831, reviewer: 'mmm_bacon'}
3rd January 2006:
that was really good! I could only find one spelling mistake(amazing) and the ending made me shake my head snigger, thinking 'Potter, Potter, Potter, whenever will you learn?' but also the letter response he wrote was cute. He didn't just say a reply he played along and worte it down! I love it and It's absolutely brilliant!
Author's Response: What was the spelling mistake/was it amazing? I picture James as someone who would go with something like that, which is why I wrote Lily/James for this. Thanks, glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 838812, reviewer: 'bluegirl'}
3rd January 2006:
how cute!
nice one shot.
-blue
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 838593, reviewer: 'Anastasia'}
2nd January 2006:
''Mister James Aaron Potter gladly accepts the gift of Miss Lily Anastasia Evans...'' Anastasia?! Why, thank you, I'm flattered! lol Anyway, once again, great story Lynn, BUT...James was way too bold and cheeky at the end!! ~Ana
Author's Response: Lol, it was a coincidence, but you're welcome anyway. Well, I picture James as bold and cheeky, so...
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{reviewid: 837201, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
1st January 2006:
That's really, really cute!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 835942, reviewer: 'Pippa'}
31st December 2005:
I LOVE this story! The ending is so funny, and totally in character. Snaps for you!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 835656, reviewer: 'Maxine'}
31st December 2005:
WoW !! that was GOOD
plzz do more.
Author's Response: Thanks, and I doubt there will be more chapters, but maybe something else connected to this.
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