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Review #26, by SNS Epilogue

15th September 2012:
Oh. My. God. This was so good. I feel like I'm going to cry. Okay, that's not just a feeling.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it!

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Review #27, by Dobby Epilogue

11th August 2012:
wow. Definitely the best maurauder fic I have ever read. When I first saw the 96 chapters, I didn't think I would read the whole thing, but every chapter was something new and interesting. You really captured their personalities, and explained so much about their actions in the books and movies. I cried so much, especially in the last few chapters. You put the emotions into words so skillfully.

It's safe to say that you could have a real future in writing.

Good luck

Author's Response: Aw, wow, thanks! Yeah, I'd have the same reaction seeing 96 chapters. I read one that was 121 chapters, but worth every chapter, I'm really glad you liked this and think I could have a future writing. Thanks for reading!!

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Review #28, by winky Be At Peace

11th August 2012:
this chapter made me cry. very well-written

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Glad you liked it!

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Review #29, by Hedwig93 Epilogue

9th August 2012:
I just finished reading all 96 chapters and I just have to say that this could be the Long Lost Story Of The Marauders! You are a brilliant and patient writer! It's sad how The Marauders had to end but they definitely left their mark. 10 stars :)

Author's Response: Their story is sad, that they all died the way they did, but they definitely made their mark :) Thanks for reading!

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Review #30, by Derex Epilogue

21st July 2012:
Yep, I almost cried at the end. I knew how the story would end, but you wrote it so well I could see myself as a bystander to all of this. Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks!! Glad you liked it!

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Review #31, by Arek Epilogue

15th July 2012:
This is the third time I've read through your amazing story, and the third time it has brought tears to my eyes. If you would ever see me in real life, you would not think that the beefy 6ft7 ex-high school football quarterback would tear up at any story. Thanks. Thanks for writing one of the best stories in the written history of novels.

Author's Response: Wow, you've read this three times? I think I only read it through once (not counting when I wrote it since there wasn't much reading of it involved except to check for errors). But I'm glad you still like it!! Thanks for reading!!!

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Review #32, by Phoenix_feather123 Epilogue

16th June 2012:
I. feel so lost. you wrote the epilogue so. i can't explain what i am going through right now

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

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Review #33, by Phoenix_feather123 Crashing Down

16th June 2012:
NO no no i wish remus would know the truth now but he will have to wait for thirteen years! :( I wish this hadn't happend but i knew it would

Author's Response: It would've been nice if he didn't have to wait that long, but then so did Dumbledore. Thanks for reading!

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Review #34, by Phoenix_feather123 The Traitor

16th June 2012:

Author's Response: It really is all Peter's fault... Thanks for reading!

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Review #35, by lily :( :( :( Epilogue

20th May 2012:
that was so sad i am crying silently right now. For Real.

Author's Response: Aww, well I'm glad that means you like it? Thanks for reading!

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Review #36, by lily Old Life and New Life

20th May 2012:
so sad but so nice they named him after moony's dad and james

Author's Response: Yeah, that idea was actually what inspired me to write this whole thing. Thanks for reading!

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Review #37, by lily page ragen No Next Year

19th May 2012:
i have absolute complete dibs on brutally murdering Snape and Wormtail i also have dibs on serius james and moony for either marrige or dating

Author's Response: Hmm... I don't know, you'd have to fight me for Remus, or Sirius for that matter :p Thanks for reading!

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Review #38, by lily page ragen So Little Time

19th May 2012:
that is soo sad what did james ask lily and i am crying rite now at 11:33 at night while reading rhis

Author's Response: Is it sad I had to go back and look at this chapter to remember what it was? James was asking Lily if it was alright if he kissed her. Thanks for reading!

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Review #39, by Diannika Epilogue

10th April 2012:'s

Author's Response: Thanks for reading :)

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Review #40, by iheartremus Epilogue

1st April 2012:
Hi, I just wanted to let you know that this is my favorite Marauder fic of all time. I read it in its' entirety on MuggleNet FanFiction, eagerly awaiting each new chapter. Even my sister got hooked, and she's not usually into fanfic!

Thanks for your gift for writing, I still have yet to find a fic like this :-)

Author's Response: Aw thanks! I'm glad you (and your sister) liked it :)

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Review #41, by Marylina Epilogue

15th March 2012:
Excellent that was brilliant! I love this fanfic

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it :)

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Review #42, by daisyq444222 Epilogue

8th March 2012:
Hi! I just wanted to say thank you for a great story! It took a long time to read but it was worth it. I enjoyed how you showed the development of the characters and that the story was mainly based around, not romance (like most fanfics), but friendship. You should keep writing!

Author's Response: Haha, yeah it is long and I'm glad you liked that it wasn't about the romance (romance is fine, but I always wanted to keep it about their friendship). Thanks for reading!

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Review #43, by Creepy Spiders Life on the Moon

7th February 2012:
*sniff* I'm rereading this story for the third time. And Remus saying goodbye to his parents STILL makes me almost cry. Argh, and I hate the fact that I feel so sorry for Peter when his dad died. I'm mentally screaming to myself, 'why are you feeling sorry for him?! He does not deserve to be felt sorry for! He's a filthy traitor! NO, stop feeling sorry for him!!' Oh well. I know I'll hate him again by the time I reach the end of this.

Author's Response: Wow, three times? I've only read through it once and it took me three years after I wrote it to do that. I liked writing the scene where Remus says goodbye to his parents. Out of all the parents, they were my favorite to write. I guess Peter is still sympathetic here, so that would be why you feel bad, but yeah hating him at the end isn't that difficult to do. Thanks for reading!

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Review #44, by Creepy Spiders Stand Off

7th February 2012:
Ahh, I just love this chapter so freakin' much. The way you write Remus and Sirius is quite wonderful. I love all their interaction. Whenever I read a story where they act differently than they would in your story I scream in my head, 'NO, they can't do/say that; that's OOC from their characters in You Want to Make a Memory!' For me, your Remus and Sirius are the real ones. I think if J.K. Rowling herself wrote a book about the Marauders and Remus and Sirius had different personalities than they do in here, I would consider them OOC.

Author's Response: I loved writing this chapter, so I'm glad you liked it :) Haha, that's funny. I really would love if JKR wrote a story about the Marauders. It would be interesting to see how Sirius and Remus act as kids in her eyes. They're definitely my favorite characters to write. Thanks for reading!

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Review #45, by Creepy Spiders Loyalty

7th February 2012:
Great chapter. :) exactly did Sirius convince Remus to eat four helpings of dinner?? :)

Author's Response: Sirius likes to annoy Remus to the point of insanity, so clearly that was it :-p Thanks for reading!

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Review #46, by TeaLupin Epilogue

6th February 2012:
I'm crying right now. This was a very good story, one of the best i have read. But with a tragical ending. I love reading about the marauders. But why did they all have to die?
My favourite character is, and will always be Remus Lupin.
Another fanfiction i love is "moonlight" by adoranymph.

Author's Response: I know, the Marauders are awesome and it stinks they all died (well, except for Peter). Lupin's my favorite character too. I've never read that. I may have to check it out one day. Thanks for reading!

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Review #47, by Lauren Dangerous Games and Christmas Plans

23rd December 2011:
Great!! No way to describe how amazing! Reflects personalities of characters really well while using jk rowlings ideas! I mean that in a good way! Needs a bit more of James/Lily conflict, maybe how James tells his friends how he feels about her. Other than that superb!

Author's Response: I know what you mean. And you're only on the sixth chapter ha, James/Lily conflict will come up eventually. Thanks for reading!

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Review #48, by Bellatrixtonks Epilogue

28th November 2011:
Stupid stupid peter. Of course I already knew what had to come but I couldn't help the large amount of hate to peter for what he had done. I loved this story, on how you set it out, the way the characters talked, like they would in real (eg. A movie of it, it describes their character) I was hoping they would make Sirius their keeper but I knew they were going to die sooner or later. I must admit, you had me crying like a baby in some parts. All in all I thoroughly enjoyed this story and would love to see more. Bye and keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: It's not hard to hate Peter :-p I'm glad you liked how I made the characters talk because they're dialogue was something I really wanted to get right. Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #49, by RiverMaiden Epilogue

11th November 2011:
Hi, I've already reviewed this before (and by the way, the story's still amazing) but I was just looking at your other reviews and you mentioned twice that you were inspired by another finished marauder fic. So now I'm really curious as to what it is. I look for marauder fics a lot but it's so hard to find good ones, so could you please tell me the name and author of the story that inspired you, and which site it's on? Thanks. :)

Author's Response: I knew I recognized your name. Yeah it's called Forever Alive by Mordred and it's on ff . net. I write on there as well, so that's how I found it.

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Review #50, by Werewolf_love Crashing Down

5th November 2011:
Alright, well I just finished reviewing your epilogue, and I admit the review was far to short, but I was still in shock and in a loss for words because of your story. Your characters are brilliant. A lot of the time, people go overboard on Sirius and Peter's personality, making them to extreme. You nailed them right to a tee. I love the way you portrayed Peter, who is often a very difficult character to write, and people tend to write him out completely, or write him as the bad guy from the beginning. You nailed his transformation to the dark side perfectly. I love Remus and Sirius. They were perfect. Made me smile, made me cry, made me fall in love with them (although for a bit there I thought you were going to pull out the Remus/Sirius slash, glad you didn't in this story). You didn't miss a trick in this story. Every minor character, every sub plot got written in, like Regulus, or the kid who nearly had his eye poked out or the spiders in the forest - every little detail was so thought out, there was no place I could of thought "hey this couldn't of happened because of this". It wasn't until Harry was named though, that I accepted the parents' names. I thoguht that the parents names were wrong for the people (Harry being Remus's father, not James and I believe John was Peters when I thought it would of been Remus's) but when you tied it in later, it made much more sense. I also loved how you had an explaination for everything. You didn't just take for granted Lily hated James, and just had it assumed, you wrote in a whole evolution of Lily beginning to hate James. Most importantly though, this story stands up on it's own, very unlike most fanfiction. If you took away the HP books (good lord, please dont though) this novel would stand by itself as a sucessful, brilliant book. Very, very well done!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked how I wrote Sirius and Peter (especially Peter because, towards the end, I wasn't sure if I was getting him. His turn to the Death Eaters was something difficult to write, though it was also a lot of fun). Remus and Sirius are, obviously from this, my favorite characters, but no definitely not slash in this (I can see why you might've thought it could end up like that at some point though). I think Sirius even acknowledges this somewhere in the fic that he feels like he has to protect Remus like an older brother would protect his younger brother, so that's a lot of the basis of their friendship. Harry Lupin's name was decided way before I even wrote this for the very reason in the story. I do see why you would think that John should've been Mr. Lupin's name (but in my lack of creativity, Remus's grandfather's name is John, but he's only in one or two chapters). I wrote this before DH came out so Lily did have a different reason for disliking James at first, so I'm glad you liked how it came about. Oh God, no one should ever take the HP books away but that's really nice that you think that :) Thanks for reading!

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