I love stories where Severus is sexy. This was so well written. I'm quite jealous.

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Amazing! I love the the writing style and the way it was written. Though... *shudders*... Severus snape? But anyway, utterly outstanding! Many thanks, Becky x

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Thanks for the idea of what is allowed and what isnt ... but it seems double standards are cropping up here. If someone knows what half of this segment means then they will surely know what the bodily fluids are called? Im kind of joking but kind of not. When I was 14 I read Lolita in school about a Pedastric relationship. I know you are trying to keep things subtle and truly I do like that you are doing that it's good honestly it is xx

p.s I feel kind of sick having read this, Severus Snape is a contemptable character, I cant think of anything more gross than this situation lol xx

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wow. kudos to the fantastic staff writer(s)!

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this story is so good who would have thought to give lucius a sister and have her marry severas this is good

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this is really great... al LAST i know why my chapter's getting rejected... amazing tutorial..
i always knew snape had it in him...

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Thank you for writing this tutorial, I found it very useful and I do believe I have to go back and edit one of my chapters before I post it now :) Thank you very much!

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Thanks for taking the time to write this, you guys are absolutely amazing. Aside from the fact that it's wonderfully written, it's really nice of you to make this tutorial. I bet many people weren't sure as to what "graphic sex" meant, but this answers all questions, so thank you for that, it's very much appreciated.

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pretty good i'm impressed not many could write a snape OC well you did better than well the last one i read was ok but not great like yours keep up the good work

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Loved it. See, Snape does need a hug...or two...or three...

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Wow, I'm surprised that you let this much into a sex scene. Not that I disagree with it--I find it perfectly reasonable. It's just that you guys are SUPERSTRICT with your other limitations, and it's a bit surprising you haven't done the same with this one. This tutorial made me the most content, because it is one of the less limiting ones. And it is perhaps the only one that a fully agree with. I get a feeling that this site is more for younger people. Because there's been bestsellers that have shattered your rules to pieces. (For example: the crucifix scene in the book "The Exorcist" is pretty much NC-17; "Slaughterhouse-Five" contains numerous references to beastiality; "A Clockwork Orange" depicts rape; "Lolita" is about an adult-minor relationship; and those are just a few.) And some of these books are read in schools. Whatever. As the staff, it's your choice what you allow and what you don't allow.

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we're allowed all of that? wow! maybe it just seemed like more...

i'm pretty sure i'll never cross that line, i would be too uncomfortable to write anything like that anyways! :D

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Wow, that was actually quite a bit more than I thought would be allowed. Very enjoyable and a helpfull read too! Not to mention well-written and very good piece of work!! Thanks for writing it!

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lol! that was so sweet!

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Snape seems so much more alive in this story. . . Good example. I like how it's not just sex and sexual terms thrown around.

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I realize this piece is an example, but I just wanted to say BRAVO:) This is excellent!

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This is definitely an excellent tutorial in that it provides a rather clear example of what is acceptable for a sexual encounter in a Mature related story. Thanks to the staff for taking all of the time to write the examples for this section of the site. :) On another note, whoever actually did write this one did an excellent job of heightening the passion of the scene by actually providing small snapshots of what his life with his wife has been like. Great work on that. :)

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i can't believe snape would do that!

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o deary me... eh..... very descriptive.... i think i will feel very awkward now when reading the new HP book with Snape, heh heh heh

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FINISH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!

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sick......bad.......thanx.

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