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Review #26, by casa bella I Just Want You

3rd April 2015:
Love this story! Update soon

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm currently working on the next chapter, it'll be up soon, I promise! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #27, by Tabatha I Just Want You

3rd April 2015:
I've literally just read all 26 chapters and I think I'm maybe a little bit addicted to this story.
I think I need help. And by help, I obviously mean another chapter.

That is all. ❤️

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you like it! :) I promise another chapter is coming soon, just need to work out some things and get them down. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #28, by Celeste I Just Don't Have a Plan

2nd April 2015:
I just found this. Read it all in one day and I'm now hoping I can type and post this review before my phone dies.

I wana know why chapter 26 is posted twice I feel ripped off from a chapter.

I'm so frustrated with James he had to go and mess everything up ever since Thee and Freddie's ice cream fight back at chapter 3 I think it was I've been team Freddie. I missed the chapters that he wasn't in it.

When she became friends with Fi and Hope I was like yup Hope and James should so be together. God James if you had only listened to Teddy and Albus earlier none of this would of happend and maybe just maybe you would have a proper chance with Hope. You may still get that chance but her and Thee are going to need to have a long honest talk about that situation.

Freddie needs to pull his head out of his butt and make a move on Thee. Maybe just go for it. So obvious they are meant to be.

As you can tell I quite enjoyed this story. Can't wait for the next update and can't wait for when you post the sequel after this story.

Amazing character development since the first chapter to now. Uhhh silly teenagers taking too long to sort feelings and such out. If they all realised it sooner maybe they would of saved all the heartache.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the story! And you know, I would also love to know why 26 is double posted. It gives me mega rage. I'm going to try and fix that ASAP because it drives me crazy. Thank you for the compliment on development! I work really hard to make sure my characters stay believable in my stories and in glad they come off as reall and deep :) so much heartache and teen angst, am I right? No worries, we'll get there! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #29, by happyanon I Just Don't Have a Plan

30th March 2015:
Omg DOROTHY YOU GET OUT OF THERE AND MINGLE RIGHT NOW. i thought we're over with all this wishy washy!! Omg!! LIKE GO AND GRAB FRED AND BE LIKE IM SORRY YOU WERE RIGHT I MISS YOU I LOVE YOU AND I WANNA HAVE YOUR BABIES. DAMN IT DOROTHY WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS!! Ahem.. okay so maybe I was a bit insensitive, she did just find out that James dont actually love her like she would have hoped (omg hoped hope HAHAHAHA) but come on everybody (ALBUS!) said it was a bad idea. Ugh this is why SweethearT but you didnt listen so instead of being all sad over there how about you get out and have fun! Screw James. He's a jerk anyway! I mean, who does that? Seriously. Yes Im not over it. Its not like he apologized anywaY i mean who can say that if dorothy did not accidentally read the freakin letter (THANK YOU HECTOR THE OWL YOU ARE MOST WONDERFUL ) that james will tell her or will actually have the decency to stop dragging the relationship? HE PROBABLY WONT. OKAY WHERE'S FRED? FRED STOP SHOVING FOOD IN YOUR GOB. LISTEN TO ROXANNE AND GO AND FIND DOROTHY AND BE THE BEST FRIEND THAT YOU ARE. NO SORRY! ACTUALLY WE'RE TRYING TO BREAK THE FRIENDZONE HERE SO ahem, freddie bear,how about you try to slowly apologize for you know leaving and then mayne admit to yourself how you really feel while we're at it. OKAY I should really stop talking to your characters yeah? I love Fiona and Louis they are the best!! Yeeah! much love! Xoxo pls update soonest!

Author's Response: I'm so glad I sparked so much emotion in you, darling! I promise, Fred will be returning more as the story progresses, pinky promise! As for James and Dorothy...they're both stupid. Let's just leave it at that. I'm super pumped you're still loving Fiona and Louis! It's so nice to have a couple that actually succeeds to be together, right? And Hector is the BEST. Love that bird. I'm so glad you liked the chapter, I will do my best to update ASAP!

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Review #30, by Annabelly I Just Want You

22nd March 2015:
It's inly been like a month, but I'm dying here!!! Please update soon!

Author's Response: A month is forever, I know! I'm working on the next chapter now, and I'll do my best to have it up ASAP! So sorry for the death, my dear!

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Review #31, by Alicelost I Just Want You

12th March 2015:
love it please keep writing :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you love it! I am currently working on the next chapter, so don't worry!

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Review #32, by Cinnamon I Just Want You

24th February 2015:
When are you going to update!?!?!?!?!?!

Author's Response: Have no fear! I'm currently working on the next chapter and it should be up relatively soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #33, by SourGrapeSnape I Just Want You

19th February 2015:
Two new chapters so quickly! Thank you for being so awesome :D
I was so scared for a second that Dorothy was going to hope (pun very much intended) that things with James would simply get better, but thank god she was smart and sane enough to call it quits.
I will be waiting for the next part. Hope you update soon! Lots of love :)

Author's Response: I know! I'M ON A ROLL THAT WILL HOPEFULLY LAST SOME TIME! Lol at the pun, and it's nice to hear good thoughts about Dorothy. I'll do my best to update soon, I'm working on the next chapter now! Lots of love back!!

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Review #34, by happyanon I Just Want You

19th February 2015:
As I was reading i feel like I was in and out of my panic attack. I MEAN YOUR BOYFRIEND IS IN LOVE WITH YOUR FREAKIN BEST FRECKING FRIEND. IT WILL NOT SUCK ANYMORE THAN THAT. UNLESS HE TURNED OUT TO BE IN LOVE WITH YOUR SISTER OR SOMETHING. DOROTHY LONGBOTTOM YOU BETTER THANK FREAKING NAGINI I'M NOT FIONA BECAUSE I WOULD HAVE SLAPPED YOUR FACE TO THE ASTRONOMY TOWER. and she's still denying Fred having feelings for her? WHY JESUS WHYUY IS THIS GIRL SO EFFIN DAFT DENSE AND BLIND WHYYY. And James!! Such a pathetic excuse of a man! Ugghh!!! i mean, you first use the girl, despite her having allegedly feelings for You,and then you take advantage of that and you suddenly feel like you're interested in her but hey no stop Here comes Hope and she's some kind of red head or whatever I dont even care at this point!! These darn teenagers and their unclear conversations and stupid messed up feelings.. ugh just WHERE IS MY FREDDY? JUST LET FREDDY BE HAPPY ALREADY. DARN YOU DOROTHY. I CAN'T EVEN SYMPATHIZE with her because she DID NOT LISTEN. Almost everyone told her it was a bad idea. And i mean Albus and if its Albus, YOU FREAKIN LISTEN TO ALBUS DARN IT. ughh. Okay imma try to calm doen, Louis and Fiona that was just sweet and beautiful and I'm really proud that they have come this far. :) and aww albus likes a lesbian? Thats gotta hurt but its funny! Hahaha where does lily stand in this? Anyway, dorothy longbottom ya'll better listen to your best friend ( thats fred) and also maybe snog him up the wall or something. Srsly guurl if you dont get your sh-t together I will really bury you in the forbidden forest after i smack your head with a mandrake or devils snare. Jesus woman it took you how many tubs of tears to realize this? About time you end this Dorothy. Now im done scolding her imma give her the hug. *hugs dorothy* you're just worth so much more love. xoxo much love!

Author's Response: Hey, how you doin'? ;) Being a teenager is the greatest, right? I'm sorry to have caused you so much emotional trauma...almost. ;) Your review has brightened my day, as they always do. I love getting to relive the action through your eyes and making you hit people with mandrakes. You're truly the sweetest. All the love back at you! Xoxo

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Review #35, by zegrindylows I Just Need To Focus

19th February 2015:
I am loving this story so far. I don't usually go for next gen, but this is so unique and fun. The characters are outstanding, Hope and Fiona are hilarious and they play off of each other so well. Love it! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Oh, my gosh, thank you! That's so nice :))) I so appreciate all your compliments, you make me blush! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #36, by Maria I Just Need Help

18th February 2015:
your leaving me hanging! I hate suspense!

Author's Response: Mwah ha ha! I'm sorry for the suspense, but you've got to admit, it's a good tactic! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #37, by happyanon I Just Need Help

17th February 2015:
Oh jesus i never loved an owl until today! THANK YOU MERLIN CIRCE VOLDEMORT FOR HECTOR THE DAFT OWL! i can't even begin to explain how relieved I am about Longbottom finding out! (Even more relieved than you updating this story. Merlin woman where were you??) God James Potter you are an awful person and a prar and a git and i hope you burn. Ugh see this is why girls should not give in easily. THIS IS WHAT BEST FRIENDS ARE FOR. WHAT FRED WAS FOR. PEOPLE NEED TO LISTEN TO BEST FRIENDS because they can provide you non bias POV about this git that you like! Aww no snarky slytherin friend for freddie? Well he's got Fiona she's snarky enough. Haha i love where this is going. I really want like a big Bitch out moment between James and dorothy and fred saving her sorry little bum from the shame (or pain. Meh its her fault) and Albus dancing in the background saying "i told you so" hahaa but does hope like him or using him? Arsgskdl!! So excited! Pls update soone!much love!

Author's Response: Literally, while I was waiting for this chapter to be validated, my best friend and I were talking about how excited we were for your review. AND YOU DID NOT DISAPPOINT! I'm so sorry I've been AWOL for so long, the creative juices are flowing again, have no fear! Hector is the greatest little bird, isn't he? I'm glad Fiona is snarky enough :) And as for Hope and Al, that'll be explained soon, I promise. The next chapter is already done, so it should be up real soon! Much love back!

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Review #38, by mima pima I Just Miss You

17th January 2015:
This was fantastic, I prophesized the james/hope thingy way back way. The update on this story just made my day and I love reading about everything... just... thank you

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! And I'm so glad to have made your day, this review did the same for me! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #39, by Moo moo I Just Miss You

11th January 2015:
I think you enjoy ripping our hearts out and then leaving us with gaping holes in our chests :)

Author's Response: .a little bit, actually. ;) I'm so glad you've become invested enough in this story that I'm able to do that! Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Review #40, by LittleMissStoryteller I Just Want to be Happy

4th January 2015:
I swear down, I need Freddie and Dor to be cute again!! I'm thinking you should match Hope up with James and Freddie and Dor together... Please? ;)
Loving this story so far Hun!! Keep going!!
Love you loads xxx

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the love, and send it right back :) I'm so glad you are enjoying the story, and as for those pairings of'll have to see about that. ;)

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Review #41, by Annabelly I Just Want to be Happy

26th December 2014:
Not to be over dramatic but if you don't post a new chapter soon my teenage heart is going to explode due to angst. Just thought I would put it on record so that you would know your amazing writing will be to blame.

Author's Response: Hahaha well, I can't have that happen, can I? I will do my best to get something up super soon! Thanks so me for the compliment, I'm so glad you like it!

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Review #42, by Mayonnaise I Just Want to be Happy

12th November 2014:
I would like someone to tell me where Freddie is and why he isn't here. I like him better than James and I miss him.

Author's Response: Haha I promise he'll be back in the next chapter! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

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Review #43, by Meep moop I Just Want to be Happy

14th October 2014:
*muffled chanting* FRED FRED FRED FRED


I like this story a lot.

Author's Response: Fred will return, I promise! I'm so glad you like the story, thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!

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Review #44, by mima pima I Just Want to be Happy

13th October 2014:
More Hope and James dynamic... hm. I shall call it "Jope". We need more Freddie pretty please. And thank you so much for the update, I love this story so much. I can't. Ugh, thank you. :)

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank YOU! This is my 100th review on this story! I'm so pumped! "Jope" is hysterical, I'm glad you are invested lol. I'll be updating soon, and don't worry, Freddie will be back soon!

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Review #45, by HarryGinnyLove88 I Just Want to be Happy

13th October 2014:
I wonder, why Dorothy thinks shes not happy...
I think something named like Freddie???

I prefer james and Dor better bout fred jaand Dor are friends for long time, they should make up.

Author's Response: Maybe something like that... ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #46, by Rébecca I Just Want to be Happy

13th October 2014:
This is absolutely wonderful!! Can't wait for the next chapter:))

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I really appreciate it! I'm working on the next chapter now, and it should be up soon! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #47, by happyanon I Just Want to be Happy

13th October 2014:
All 300+ bones in my tiny body will not lie plus my gut.. HOPE AND JAMES. I FEEL IT. ALL THE RESTRAINED RAGING RED HOT GOLDEN YELLOW SPARKS WANTING,WAITING TO FLY. anyone with an eye can see it. Hell my blind bird can see it. and per usual silly little Dorothy still to blind and wrapped up about her fantasy romance with James. Someone has to hit her with a broom or Freds Face maybe.. and then perhaps she'll recognize her true feelings.. or that there's something with Hope and James. Look, they just don't work. Thee amd James. I mean, they are okay I guess. But im a relationship "Okay" just wont cut it. And I get that James has alwaya been Thee's sort of "Ideal Man" but as the Gas Laws will tell you, what is Ideal isn't always Real. BUT MY DEAR FREDDYKINS.. now he's real. There's just something about Best Friends who you grow up with that you can never find anywhere.. and it's always beem Dorothy and Fred. Always was, always have been and always will be. And btw woman, where's our beloved freddie? I miss him! He needs to be happier, he needs a sassy new friend i tell you.. listen to me! Hahahahaha I'm very interesting as to how this whole James and Hope will play out, and how eventually Thee will react to it, how I think Fred will be his charminG hero self again when James messes Thee up ( THAT GIRL WILL NEVER LEARN HONESTLY SOMEOME SMACK HER WITH A MANDRAKE) which btw is still very unfair for him but he's inlove so i cant help him even tho I totes think he needs someone better, i know he only loves Dorothy ( that lucky wench) and Fiona and Louis.. just pure love. But pls update soonm i hate waiting your updates half worried the story has been abandoned. I miss thisss fanfic too muchhh *cries a river* forgive the dramatic review. I do adore the story (or Fred.. not so much on Thee, sorry she frustrates me.. kekekeke) xoxo

Author's Response: Let me just start out by saying this review is amazing. I was cracking up reading it. I'M SO GLAD YOU'RE SUCH A FAN. I'm also sorry I suck at updating. I'll try to be better, but I promise I won't abandon this story! Pinky swear. And James and Hope? What? I have no idea what you're talking about. And have no fear, Freddie will be back before you know it. :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #48, by TheScarletSlytherin I Just Want to Work It Out

20th September 2014:
Please please please pretty please update and get Freddie and Thee back together omg I can't take this please just update!!! Love this story

Author's Response: Haha I'm so glad you like the story! I'm working in the next chapter now, so have no fear! It'll be up as soon as humanly possible. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #49, by ophe3 I Just Want to Work It Out

11th September 2014:
This story is so good! Omg I want more!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #50, by happyanon I Just Want to Work It Out

31st August 2014:
Huzzaah!! An update! Okay first things first woman, ALBUS WAS RIGHT. Dorothy was Freds ever since they were little and there are some things you just dont mess with. Brooding fred huh? He needs a saszy snarky slytherin friend (a girl) for laughs and a bit of fun. It'll bring the jealous monster out of Thee hopefully. That girl is so daft you could smoke it. Next! Hope and James yeah, there's something there I can feel it in my bones.. all 300+ of them. Fiona fiona.. whatever happened to fiona and fleur? Hahaha interestinh, fiona and healing. Didnt see that one. I lobe it tho. And dorothy well i dont even feel sorry for her really. Honey if you can't figure it out, then freddie bear deserves better. Do i sound so emotionally invested with fred? Well lets just say I might have been in a similar (slightly) situation and lets just say Maroon 5 was right "All those fairytales are full of Sh it". But good job and hoping for a new chapter love. Xoxo

Author's Response: Huzzah indeed! Albus is always right. No one ever seems to realize it, but he is. Haha. As for Thee being an idiot...well...she's just blinded by love at the moment. And I will say nothing on the front of Hope and James. HOWEVER, Fiona and Fleur do come back, have no fear! I haven't forgotten. ;) thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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