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31 Reviews Found

Review #26, by nevilleslonglostbrother 

15th July 2013:
Personally I think your story is moving along at a nice steady pace, it wouldn't work if you rushed Ginny and Harry back together. A lovely chapter and well happy for George, glad you allowed the day to generally be a happy one and it was nice that Fred was mentioned but George was generally allowed to enjoy his day. It was a great idea to have Ginny notice Angelina's healing properties for George.

I agree with a comment below about more Teddy, now he's getting older and talking it would be lovely to hear more from him but you seem to have your finger well and truly on the pulse so I'm sure you've thought that too.

Keep up the fabulous writing

Your biggest fan

NLLB

Author's Response: First of all, I'd just like to thank you so much for always being so incredibly supportive! This review was no exception and it means so much to me. I am absolutely thrilled to hear that you like it, and that you understand my choice of letting things take their time between Harry and Ginny. I'm also really glad that you enjoyed seeing George happy on this day, and yeah, I think Angelina is a big part of that :)

I'll definitely keep in mind to have more of Teddy when I can. A few chapters ahead, there will be an entire chapter dedicated to a day with him, and I hope you'll like it. Again, thank you so much for your support and encouragement! I just want to give you a big hug, you are so nice to me! :)


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Review #27, by Aurorofthelight 

15th July 2013:
Well, Harry handled that mess rather well, or at least he hid it well! Ginny hid her inner conflict pretty well too - she obviously would have preferred leaving with raven haired wizard! Wonder how much longer she'll string Oliver along and whether Harry will do something foolish in his despair?!?

Author's Response: Yes, and it's a good thing they both did, I think. I suppose none of them wanted to ruin the wedding, right? But you're right, she's beginning to realise that her feelings for Harry haven't changed, and the fair thing to do would obviously be to tell Oliver... I guess you'll see in the next couple of chapters :)

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Review #28, by gracefish21 

15th July 2013:
sooo good!!! I cant wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter is in the queue and will probably be up soon :)

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Review #29, by FredAndGeorgeAreAwesome 

15th July 2013:
This is going to be quick because I'm about to lose Internet, but as usual, this chapter was amazing and your writing is so good!!! I wish you could write a chapter everyday and have it be this good!!! I check for new chapters every day! I can't wait for the next one! This is just a suggestion but could we maybe have a chapter soon that's just all about Harry and Ginny? They're my favourite ship so sorry if I'm being annoying :P
Keep up the good writing!!! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I am so thrilled to hear that you like the story and my writing, and so flattered. You are just too kind :) Harry and Ginny are my favourite ship, and while I won't dedicate an entire chapter to them, something WILL happen between them very soon. I cant tell you what, though, but I hope you'll enjoy it :) And the next chapter is in the queue. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #30, by Moony7 

15th July 2013:
Can you just get on with it already! The whole break-up with Harry and Ginny doesn't feel real. You threw that wrinkle in to exaggerate the drama more.

Ginny knew once dating other people wouldn't help her get over Harry. And still she insists on trying to make that work.

The whole part with Oliver disgusted me (no matter how cool a character he is.) It just felt that Ginny betrayed Harry when Harry hasn't really done a thing (not saying that this is as much Harry's fault as Ginny's. He was harsh in how he broke up with her and keeping a cold distance).

Why can't you just lock Harry and Ginny in a room and let them apologize for how stupid they're being.

I like your story I really do, just not this latest twist in Harry and Ginny's relationship it was progressing in excellent and real direction. Then you just cut the line.That has become the only weakness in your story and for me its just killed it for me.

Sorry if I come off a little harsh, your entitled your own story writing and its really good writing, but Harry/Ginny needs work it doesn't feel real to me. Keep up the good work with the Weasley family! Include more Teddy in the story yeah!

Sorry again for bashing your story, heck maybe I am just exaggerating over one plot-line too much. Keep up the good work! It really is a nice story.

Mischief Managed!

Author's Response: I guess that when you think that someone cheated on you, you just don't see the point of waiting around for them. Ginny chose to date Oliver because she wanted to take her mind off of Harry, because she wanted to move on, but as you can tell, she is now realising that it just doesn't work.

It's really rare that two people (even if they are meant to be) get together at 17 and stay together forever. I had them break up because I wanted to make it more realistic, and because I felt like they, and especially Harry, hadn't really learn how to deal with this kind of problem before, as they've been busy elsewhere. That's why I think they'd handle things poorly and that things would get blown out of proportion.

However, if you're getting tired of this drama, I think you'll enjoy the next couple of chapters. I'm glad that you still enjoy the story, and thank you so much for this review and for letting me know what you think! I really appreciate it :)


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Review #31, by FriendofMolly 

15th July 2013:
marauder5,
Well that ended a bit better than I thought it would. Perhaps between Teddy's wanting to see Harry and Ginny kiss, and Oliver's offhand remark, there might be a light at the end of the dark tunnel. But I know it will still take time. Please don't have Harry find someone to equal the "moving on" that he thinks Ginny has. More please.
FoM

Author's Response: I'm glad you can see the light now! I hope you'll enjoy what happens in the next chapter, which is already in the queue. I'm not going to reveal anything, but you know... perhaps Harry's had enough trouble now? Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!

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