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Review #26, by FriendofMolly 

22nd May 2013:
I have read hundreds of HP fan fictions. There has been a few that took this route. In some Ginny and Ron realize their mistake, in some they don't and Harry exits their lives. I don't for a second, think that this scenario would happen in canon. How you had Harry react was good and bad. Good because he expressed his disappointment at having the two people closest to him accept a strangers word against his. Harry may have kept things from people, only until he could do what he needed to do to keep those he loves from harm. He has never ever lied. It was bad because Ron and Ginny may interpret his actions as not caring enough to beg for her trust and for her to believe him. As if he should have to beg and plead. My heart is breaking for him. It's sad that he doesn't have much choice but to work with Ron. I know how I would have him do. I'll await to see how you do this. I will ask that you please resolve this. Harry doesn't deserve this. Ron on the other hand needs to be transfigured into a spider. Ginny needs to take a good look in the mirror
PS Perhaps Molly or Hermione will knock some sense into these two. If not, they deserve to lose Harry.
PPS. Why is Ruby doing this? Who is behind her? If she comes with in sight of Harry again, I hope he can teach her a lesson without ending up in Azkaban.
PPSS. I beg you to post ASAP.

Author's Response: Hello and thank you for another great review! Well, maybe this wouldn't happen in canon, I don't know, but what we need to remember here is that they are still teenagers. Even after everything that has happened, they are very young, and while they might have learned how to deal with dangerous situations, they still have a lot of growing up to do on a personal and emotional level. But I do agree with you, Ron and Ginny are wrong for questioning Harry! And he doesn't deserve it, which is why he's sort of lashing out at Ginny in this chapter. Haha, I absolutely love this comment: Ron needs to be transfigured into a spider. That ought to teach him a lesson, right? Don't question your best mate, Ron!

I don't want to give anything away, but you obviously know Hermione quite well. I'll try to post another chapter this weekend. Thank you, once again, for reading and reviewing!

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Review #27, by DracoGal 

22nd May 2013:
I'm with Harry! He doesn't deserve to be question, especially by the woman he loves. I do hope Ginny comes around to see the truth before it's too late. And another thing: stupid Ron. I think that about sums it up haha Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for another great review! I appreciate the fact that you always take the time to leave one so much!! :) I'm with Harry too! And yeah, Ron doesn't really see clearly when it comes to Ginny. I won't reveal anything about what happens next but I'll try to update very soon! :)

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Review #28, by Brinda 

22nd May 2013:
Wow love the story line!! i just started reading it today and i couldn't do anything until i was done with it!(even though i wanted to write a review after each chapter) now i am left craving for more! how can they not trust Harry when he almost died for them..hmmph! What a cliffhanger though..looking forward to what happens next!love it!!

Author's Response: You read the whole thing today? Wow, that is amazing! I'm so flattered!! It makes me so happy to hear that you like it, and don't worry, I'll try to update as soon as possible! :) I agree with you, they are being way too tough on Harry right now...

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Review #29, by Brandon McTwilighthater 

22nd May 2013:
Suspenseful ending. I'll be waiting to see how this problem is resolved. This is a really good chapter. This is one of the first times I have seen the couple arguing in a fanfiction. Most fanfics show them as a perfect couple who never argue, but that is unrealistic.

Author's Response: First of all, thank you for another wonderful review! It makes me so happy that you liked this! And yes, I figured that since I'm writing about 19 years in their lives, it would be quite unrealistic if they never had problems.. I'm glad you agree!

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