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31 Reviews Found

Review #26, by gems 

21st April 2013:
Great story so far. You have kept true to the original characters. The story flows well from the original. I look
foward to reading more. Best Potter fan fiction I have read.

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that you like it so much. Best Potter fan fiction? Wow, that's quite a compliment. Thank you so, so much for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #27, by Katie :) 

20th April 2013:
Such a great story upto now.. Keep it up :) it's keeping me sane whilst doing my finals for uni, aha! Love the bit "Nice save, Ronald!" :'D Kudos x

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that you like it! Oh, good luck on your finals :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #28, by Katie 

20th April 2013:
Very good :) lovely the bit about Molly's reaction

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I figured she'd be quite upset about it.. ;)

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Review #29, by Ginny_Weasley43 

18th April 2013:
This was really good. I like the change to this year from the last. It is cool how Harry is moving into a flat. It was really good. I liked it a lot. Please update soon.

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed this! This year will probably be a bit different from the first one, and I hope you'll like it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and I'll update ASAP :)

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Review #30, by DracoGal 

18th April 2013:
Awe our Golden Trio (and Ginny) is starting to grow up! I'm really happy for Ginny and Hermione. And it's awesome that Harry got a flat. But why is Ginny so upset? She's his girlfriend and should be happy for him. Did she really think Harry would want to live at the Burrow for the rest of his life? I loved this chapter please update soon! :)

Author's Response: They really are! :)

I guess that Ginny is upset because Harry kept those plans to himself, and then just shocked her by announcing that he was going to move out. Surely she knew it would happen one day, she just wasn't prepared for it ;)

I'm so glad that you liked this! I'll update as soon as I can :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!


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Review #31, by FriendofMolly 

18th April 2013:
marauder5,
You packed a lot into this chapter, for which I thank you. It was interesting that you had Ginny struggling with her future. More than a few stories have her either so brilliant during her trial that she is hired on the spot, or is led to believe that she will be. Ginny doesn't strike me as someone who puts all her pygmy puffs in one basket. She wondering what she might do instead made the arrival of Gwenog and the Coach that much more exciting. On the Harry front, why oh why would he buy a flat without mentioning it to Ginny? I do want to hear more about it, if he doesn't turn around and cancel the sale. We all know that Hermione gets her Ministry start in Regulation of Magic Creatures. Your version was more graphic than I've read. It makes sense though. One would think that a Phoenix wouldn't be around long enough to be cursed, I guess anything can happen. The problem werewolf sounds like he took more than lessons for Greyback, as Remus was child when he was bitten. Certainly a heartbreaking situation.
I want more!
FoM

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I really appreciate the fact that you always share your thoughts on the events of each chapter, it's really helpful!

I'm glad that you liked my take on Ginny reflecting on her future. It's just something that I can see happening as she watches all of her brothers succeed. (btw, I love that saying: she doesn't put all her pygmy puffs in one basket. Brilliant!) As for Harry's flat, you'll find out more in the next chapter. The werewolf probably admired Greyback quite a bit, and it's very sad indeed.

Thank you so much for your comments, and for reading this story. It makes me very happy :)


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