AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!! God, I love Clara. And James. And this story. And your writing style. So ,please, please, update soon! :DAuthor's Response: THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! The next chapter's in the queue, so hopefully it will be validated soon! Report Review
I don't think it was too descriptive, I really liked it :)Author's Response: Merci mon amie :D Report Review
This was really good. It wasn't too long and tedious and overly detailed, but it was a good length, funny, witty and well written.
I'm excited for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thanks girl! The next chapter is a little longer, but around the same length as the first, so not too long :P Report Review
It's was pretty good. I love the jokes (attempts made by Fred) oooh James not pink yet?? :P
There were a few mistakes, not really big. And I think it's Scorpius.
Hope the next chapter comes out quick..!Author's Response: Scorpius spelling: fixed.
I always spell it wrong -__-
Pink James will come in the next chapter, I pinky swear! Report Review
Man, PMS-ing girl is really embarrassing! But your story is amazing!! I really love the jokes and how everyone's characters are like you'd think of them except not predictable (that's like the best thing ever to me!). Great job!!Author's Response: Oh thank you, this is so nice! Honestly, this is such a wonderful compliment because I was worried about characterization! Report Review
This was a great chapter! I really enjoy Clara. And James is seeming more and more like a jerk as time goes by. Anyway amazing chapter and please update soon!Author's Response: Aww thank you! James is kind of a jerk...but he can also be a big softie :) So glad you like it! Ch. 3 will be up very soon! Report Review
Great first character! The story is looking like it will be a good one! Please update soon!Author's Response: Thanks! Update Status: Complete! Report Review
this is really good please update it soon! xAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
First off, this novel is super cute already. Always am I a fan of awkward characters. She's charming :). Can't say too much right now since it's all intro's and stuff, but I'm liking it right now. I didn't see any gramattical errors, and as my friend so tactfully calls me I'm a grammar *ahem old timey word for prostitute* ANYYYWAAYYYS if that is Asher Monroe on your banner I will seriously love you like...for ever and keep reading this if it sucks(though I highly doubt that). If it's not Asher Monroe then I'm sorry for being random lol.Author's Response: Wow, this is so sweet! Clara is probably the definition of awkward :P There's one more chapter of introductions (gotta intro the boys) and then it's on to a steadier plot.
Yes! No grammatical errors! I'm basically the worst with typos, and I always miss something.
Who's Asher Mun-JUST JOKING IT IS ASHER MUNROE AJSDKFJASLKDJF! He's so perfect and his singing voice omg (activate full fangirl mode)!
Thanks for the review and I'll bribe you to continue reading with the promise of Asher Munroe in an upcoming chapter image!
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I absolutley loved this! I have a thing for witty characters. Update soon :)Author's Response: Yay thanks, I'm glad that Clara's witty :P
Update coming up shortly! Report Review
this is a great first chapter! the introduction to Clara is very good and it was funny when she was having an internal battle with the wall! haha lol can't wait to read more!^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thank you! I hope it wasn't too wordy!
Ahaha that was my favourite part to write.
Ty for the review! Report Review
nice story till now
could you update quickly i would like to read this story
please update QUICKLYAuthor's Response: Merci :D Updating! Updating!
Ch.2 is written and is waiting for validation! Report Review
Oh I like this!
"You knocked me over when you came out of the portrait. Since then I've become rather attached to the floor and have now decided to just stay here forever."
-this had to be my favourite part.
I think I'm beginning to like Clara and her violent tendencies :P and password remembering skills.
And yes I can't wait for James to be introduce.
I like how this is going. Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: You have a favourite part! That made my day!
'Violent tendencies', I like that. Mind if I use it? She definitely has a temper of sorts, and let's just say that it will get her into a lot of awkward situations.
The wait will soon be over, he's making his first appearance in this chapter!
Thank you so much for the review, it was really nice :3 Report Review
You've done a great job so far. Keep up the good work. =0)Author's Response: Awww thanks, that's so sweet :)
I can't wait to meet James. I think this story is going to be good. :)Author's Response:
ASDKFJAS My first review! Excuse me while I have a minor freak out.
I pinky swear James is in the next chap! Thank you for reviewing!
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