{reviewid: 2747048, reviewer: 'A%20Fan'}
19th October 2012:
Where'd you get the inspiration to write this?
Author's Response: tv shows like bones, csi!
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{reviewid: 2747047, reviewer: 'marionne'}
19th October 2012:
YAY! This chapter's so much longer, it's great! Can you write some more H/D action!? Love iT!
Author's Response: yup, will do :)
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{reviewid: 2747046, reviewer: 'Minnie'}
19th October 2012:
AMAAZZINGGG!!! Update sooon soon soon!
Author's Response: thank yoouu
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{reviewid: 2747045, reviewer: 'Emily'}
19th October 2012:
Why is it so short?! :( Wah I want more!!
Author's Response: Im sorrryy! More coming soon :)
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{reviewid: 2747044, reviewer: 'Your%20bestfriend%2C%20James%20%3AD%21'}
| Review #55, by Your bestfriend, James :D! | I see sky |
19th October 2012:
This is really good! Do you know when you will update your next chapter?
Author's Response: soonn :):) thanks for the review james :)
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{reviewid: 2747043, reviewer: 'Alexa'}
19th October 2012:
Really good. Just work on transitions! :)
Author's Response: okay, thanks for the tip :)
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{reviewid: 2747042, reviewer: 'a%20fan'}
19th October 2012:
love it!!! you're story is so good! please update soon!
Author's Response: thank yoouu !
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{reviewid: 2746836, reviewer: 'a%20fan'}
18th October 2012:
i enjoy reading your story..keep up the good work.
Author's Response: thank you !
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{reviewid: 2746227, reviewer: 'karaeagleson'}
15th October 2012:
cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: thank you! :)
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{reviewid: 2746203, reviewer: 'karaeagleson'}
14th October 2012:
love it love it love it
Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you! :)
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{reviewid: 2746192, reviewer: 'karaeagleson'}
14th October 2012:
just started this story this evening. I really like it alot. Do you know how many chapters you are planning? I'm a sucker for long stories I can get lost in when insomnia sets in. LOL. thanks for writing and I look forward to many more chapters.
Author's Response: Thank- you so much! :) I'm hoping for 20-30 chapters! I know exactly what you mean!
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{reviewid: 2745965, reviewer: 'Emma_Felton4Ever'}
13th October 2012:
CSI or Criminal Intent eh? haha good story though!
Author's Response: A crime show was my inspiration! Thank-you for the review!
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{reviewid: 2744526, reviewer: 'hedwiglives'}
7th October 2012:
Ok, so you've got a good idea going here, kind of CSI meets magic. What you need to work on is transitions. Some parts seem very jumpy and slightly confusing for the reader. Also, research a little more for the scenes, that way you can seem more original and really suck the reader in. Good job so far!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I agree some scenes are a bit rushed... I`ll definitely work on that.
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{reviewid: 2744263, reviewer: 'George'}
5th October 2012:
Great story! Can't wait to see what will happen next
Author's Response: thanks george! :)
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{reviewid: 2744251, reviewer: 'angela'}
5th October 2012:
blandie, this is such a sweet story, really impressed.
Author's Response: awh thank you so much :)
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{reviewid: 2744250, reviewer: 'alie'}
5th October 2012:
great, love it jules!
Author's Response: thanks alie!!
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{reviewid: 2742592, reviewer: 'granger_'}
27th September 2012:
loving this story so far cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Appreciate the review, thanks for reading!
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{reviewid: 2742579, reviewer: 'Jenny'}
27th September 2012:
Excellent. More please.
Author's Response: thank you so much! I will update asap!
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{reviewid: 2742557, reviewer: 'a%20fan'}
27th September 2012:
you my friend have a story here..good luck and keep it going
Author's Response: awh, thank you so much! I really appreciate the review!
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{reviewid: 2741874, reviewer: 'AbbyDaiquiri'}
23rd September 2012:
You miss, need to update very soon
Author's Response: thank you!
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