I LOVE THEM OMG! SO CUTEAuthor's Response: YES! YES! SUCESS! YOU ACTUALLY LIKE IT.
i am finding this surprising.
and your name isn't at all creepy, greenbush.
thats right. grenbush. Report Review
I LOVE IT ! its amazing and funny and i can hear your voice when i read ;) heheheAuthor's Response: AWW IM GLAD YOU LOVE IT.
and i wonder who you could possibly be.
A KOALA PERHAPS? OF THE CARAMEL VARIETY?
idk man. these are the mysteries. Report Review
Need..next chapter...now!Author's Response: excellent. i shall update asap. penguin promise.
thankss for the review (: Report Review
SO. MANY. EMOTIONS.
WHY. WOULD. YOU. DO. THIS. TO. ME.
But seriously: ALBUS SEVERUS POTTER BACK AWAY BECAUSE THEY NEED TO KISS OKAY.
HOW RUDE.Author's Response: IT WAS VERY RUDE, TWASNT IT.
oh alby, when will you learn to stop interrupting people's kisses?
we need to teach that boy some manners.
MUAHAHA. HOPE YOU HOLD ON TILL THE NEXT CHAPPIE :D Report Review
Whoa whoa whoa! I knew Al would be pissed but I didn't anticipate his violent reaction!! The was an enjoyable chapter, as was the last one, idk why you think the last one was bad :) It fact, although this chapter was more dramatic, I probably enjoyed it less than the last one because the idea of the party was a bit...cliche? But that's just me, reading too many fanfics for my own good :P
That said I still thoroughly enjoyed intro of this chapter (just tickled my funny bone), the kiss (AGJDBDNDKDGTYFFY!) and the mystery of the box has me very intrigued! :)
Keep it up; update, update, update :D
(from the person who is currently not updating haha)Author's Response: aww, THANKYOU :D tickled your funnybone. i endevaour to tickle everyones funnybone so that was a rewarding compliment.
and it was absolutley cliche, but hey, they're cliches for a reason right? (yeah...that didnt make sense)
DA BOX? THE BOX? THE BALL? MYSTERRRYYY
i shall update soon (: (YESSHH, YOU MUST UPDATE TOO, NON-UPDATING CHILD)
penguin. Report Review
OH MY GOD I love it. The dress, the kiss, the PUNCH! Does little Alby have a crush on Halle? Wait, wait, does little JAMES have a crush on Halle? Anyway, this is just so utterly mental that I have to love it. And you- you're as crazy as the story and I friking love it! Update soon, later, now, now. And would you mind calling the penguin Hammy? He looks like a Hammy- here Hammy Hammy Hammy, there's a good penguin! What are penguin babies called, when they're all fluffy and small?
Off point, so update ASAP cos I think I love this story around as much as Halle love rubber ducks, bubbles or pie.Author's Response: OH MY GOD, thankyou :D i am so glad you love it's mental-ness, AND I APOLOGIZE BUT MY PENGUINS SEEM TO BE MALFUNCTIONING. but you may name him hammy. that's a great name. i have no idea what fluffy penguins are called? perhaps fluffy-lus penguin-es. i shall update as soon as i finish writing, and im halfway there (: Report Review
Wow. Excellent story, keep up the good work. I also enjoy pie. We should be friends.Author's Response: wow, EXCELLENT review (: im glad you like pie. we should be friends.
Oh ma Rowling.
I'm happy they kissed.
I've got a better penguin: ('/')
Haha. Update soon!Author's Response: your penguin is actually quite amazing. mine dont seem to be working, which sucks. see look, i'll put on here Report Review
I really enjoyed thisAuthor's Response: that. is. awesome.
THANKS FOR REVIEWING :D Report Review
I really like your story. I havent commented on the other chapters because I just started reading it.
But seriously? You ended it at a shitty moment. A shitty moment indeeedeee.
Um. Continue. Please?Author's Response: ahh, cliffhangers are quite shitty, are they not? muhaha, im glad you like my story, thanks for reviewing and i shall update soon ! (: Report Review
UPDATE AGAIN, MY LITTLE MUFFIN. THE SOONER YOU DO, THE MORE MEDALS YOU RECEIVEAuthor's Response: I EXPECT SOME MEDALS, PIE.
SHALL DO-AROONI, UPDATE :D Report Review
HOLY CRAP ON A STICK.
i say this for two reasons:
1) for the super fast update
2) for the epic chapter!!!
words cannot describe. this story gets better and better every chapter!!!
and btw i did not recieve my penguin for my last review. i expect two now. hurry up with those please.
but yeah. i love the whole albus punches james in the face thing. twas a good ending.
batteries, if microwaved, can often turn into giraffes. if the giraffe is microwaved further, it will gain cabbage like characteristics.Author's Response: GO FISH SUCKS.
i say this for two reasons.
1) go fish sucks
2) go fish sucks
MUHAHAHA. THANKS FOR THE LOVELY REVIEW,FELLOW PIE FANATIC. WE SHOULD BE FRIENDS. DO YOU LIKE PINK ELEPHANTS?
you dont? coz i dont either.
MUHAHAHA. TAKE THAT, SUSAN.
im really glad you liked it,and thanks for the advice. i was actually JUST about to microwave a battery, and my giraffe pen has reached its full capacity.
cabbagesare my life. Report Review
oH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD THE FEELS THE FEELS ARE HURTING MY BRAIN.
BUT IT'S A KISS AND JAMES AND HALLE AND JUST ANKJDHEWIUFRI.
Ok, I'm fine - I swear.
I'm just sorta flipping out because he bloody kissed her back like 'oh hey yeah you, Halle, you're cool come kiss me' ah aH AH NO THE CAPS HAVE STARTED AGAIN UH OH.
I'm going to stop now before the feels take over and this review goes out the window.
Aka, amazing chapter yayayayayay.
(Thanks for the Author's Response: FEELS? YOU HAVE FEELS FOR MY STORY? THIS MAKES ME VERY EXCITED :D
im glad you like it, like really. im overjoyed (:
ahaha, im sure if i was writing from james pov i would describe it exactly like that (:THANKS FOR THE REVIEW :D Report Review
love this story, just giving a review cause you really deserve one, I cant wait until you update again! BTW love Halle's character, so interesting to read about! I also loved the first challenge, it was so freaking awesome!Author's Response: aww, thankyou so much :D im really glad you enjoyed it...SHALL UPDATE SOON, CHICA ! Report Review
1. You are a spaz
2. Halle is a spaz
3. I am a spaz
4. We need to be like bffs or something
Anywho you rock your writing is awesome and I need to stop staying up this late.
ROCK ON, SPAZES UNITE!
So yeah please update soon because I think this is my favorite fanfic out of the oh geez 11 I'm reading, plus one I'm writing.
Shit. Anyways so yes please you rock k jules stop eating sugar.
I'm Julianna, by the way. I drink too much chocolate milk.
That sounded weird. I DON'T CARE!
This is getting long so:
HI YOU ROCK THIS STORY IS AWESOME
KTHXBIAuthor's Response: FACTS:
LETS BE BFF'S OR SOMETHING; COZ YOURE A SPAZ AND IM A SPAZ.
thanks so much for that lovely compliment, and just remember
THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS TOO MUCH CHOCOLATE MILK.
EMBRACE YOUR WEIRDNESS CHILD, IT ROCKS.
thanks for the review :D Report Review
Okay I normally am a lazy bum and refuse to reveiw, but you deserve a good pat on the back fellow crazy. You are truly amusing and I sincerely enjoy reading your work. Cheers. :)Author's Response: i love lazy bums, they're the backbone to the entire word. so thakyou for the pat on the back, i shall treasure it forlife. im OVERJOYED you like reading my work :D Cheerio Report Review
Wow! Just wow that is all I can really say. I love the fact that you got 'true English' from New Girl - I love that show. This was a really good chapter thank you!! :)Author's Response: YOU LOVE NEW GIRL? RESPECT HORSEMAD99. RESPECT.
thanks for reviewing (: made my dayy. Report Review
hi!! OH MY GOD! YAY you finally updated!!
AND THEY KISSED!!
Please say you have the next chapter and you are updating right this second!!!
I like how Albus punched James! It shows how much he cares :) Pretty please say Al is not in love with Halle..it would totally ruin that relationship and I think its sweet how they are like brother and sister :)
Thanks and please update soon!Author's Response: aww, thanks so much ! my tortues (aka tests) are lightening up, so i'll update soon-ish (:
FANKS, PENGUINPOP. Report Review
That was really good!! THEY FINALLY KISSED! WOOO!! And Albus went cray cray on their arses, why doesn't he like that. Don't tell me he likes her? i thought h didn't what is happening you must update right away so i can find out what is going on!!!Author's Response: haha, he al did go cray cray on their arses (: im not one for love triangles...BUT ALL SHALL BE REVEALED NEXT CHAPTER. THANKS FOR REVIEWING ! Report Review
Okay, so I always love it when you update. This is my favourite story on the site at the moment.
I really loved the line "an army of black bracelets up my right arm", I don't know why, it was just a really good description.
*and cue the fangirling*
OH MY GOD WHAT HAVE YOU DONE??? THIS WAS FANTASTIC SHE FINALLY SNOGGED HIM! DO YOU KNOW HOW HAPPY I AM?! ASDFGHJKL; AND I TOTALLY PICKED ALBUS LIKING HER!
Just saying, this chapter was awesome.Author's Response: Okay, so I love it when you review. they actually make me sooo happy :D
OMG THEY DID ACTUALLY SNOG- PROGRESS? I WOULD SAY SO. SHALL UPDATE SOON :D THANKS FOR THE REVIEW !
just saying, your review was awesome (: Report Review
ok child, this was a fantastic and even more crazy than normal chapter, so i will forgive you for taking so long to update.
BUT if that ever happens again, i will steal your computer and update it myself. true story.
so yeah, the chapter. holy crap on a stck, that kid Halle is crazy. crazier than you. please tell her that drinking than many potions in 45 minutes isnt very good for you.
and the whole penguin thing at the end??? i want my penguin. i DEMAND my penguin. please mail it to me as soon as you can. if you dont, imma eat you and your house.
good day.Author's Response: HALLE OD'D. HALLE OD'D.
shame. she was such a quiet girl.
THAT DOESNT EVEN MAKE ANY SENSE. THANKYOU YOU LOVELY PENGUINPOP. if you eat my house you'll either be fat or die.
i'll send YOU a penguin. you know why?
COZ YOUR FACE IS A PENGUIN.
next chapters already in the queue, kiddo. SUCKONDAT, dutta.
thanking you sincerely,
The Pie Society Report Review
Hi! that was really good but I kinda expected a more different scene!! No one made a single comment about how James was the centre of the task! I was sure her brothers at least would have brought it up. I also didn't expect her fear to be known as betrayal. I thought it was more of a fear of hurting those she loved..but in retrospect that does seem like a form of betraying her friends! Is the ridikulus spell working going to be a major part of the plot line from now on in, or is it kind of a side story??
As an afterthought, more James's fear of monsters seems kinda superficial when you compare it to Halle's doesn't it?? :P
Halle as way crazier then usual in this chapter, it was kinda bordering on overboard but it was fun to read! :)
Please don't make us wait as long for the next chapter!!
Thanks!!Author's Response: wow, a long review! this is exciting :D
thankyouu, and yeah i had to have a chapter which dealt with the aftermath of the task, so it was a bit dull :/ the spell is gonna be a side-plot i reckon, probably just something to let Al steal the show (:
i love writing crazy (coz thats what i am) but i'll try and tone it down (:
NEXT CHAPPIES ALREADY IN THE QUEUE. I KNOW. APPLAUD ME.
THANKS FOR REVIEWING :D Report Review
Brilliantly written, made me laugh out loud several times. Well done you! But mind your "you're" and "yours". ;-)Author's Response: aha, thankyouuu... for the review and the tip :D
Oh my God. This chapter was excellent. I like how you managed to mix in the usual amount of I'm-Halle-and-I'm-crazy with the whole -I'm-whacked-out-on-potions; I think you successfully made her even more crazy than usual (which I didn't think was possible but okay). I absolutely adore your story, I ship Halle and James so hard it makes it painful. And I can't wait for the Yule Ball. I'm looking forward to it.
And I really really want Al to figure out how Halle went all nutzo on the Boggart. Because it was super cool :)Author's Response: aww, this review is actually the sweetest thing in the world. yule ball is approaching, and i hope you like the next chapter, just put it in the queue (: THANKS MUCHLY :D
i.I ghave to say something...I know its gonna be hard so take deep breaths.
I AM THE Princess of Wizardkind! I KNOW I KNOW ITS A HUGE THING TO DEALL WITH B!!!
I KNOW WHAT STHE B DOING THERE
HOLY TOP HAT I MISSED YOU AND THIS! BEST CHAPTER IN A LOONNNGGG TIME!i miss this
I only jokes though bro I aint no Princess of Wizardkind
Coconuts have magic in em! You gots to shake em real hard but they can make all your life decisions for youAuthor's Response: you could never be the princess of wizardkind coz...
(psstt. dont tell. im ironman.)
AWW THANKS HOO, MISS YA TOO!! check this out, i just made it up.
your the merlin to my arthur. AND.
your the sherlock to my watson.
i know. shed a tear. it was beautiful.
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