Sweet Jesus woman must you always make me cry with laughter?

This story is the best I have read in a long time! You got some serious skills gurrl *insert terrible attempt at American accent*.

So, um.. Basically what I'm trying to say is great chapter.

congratulations, well done and all that other shitniz.

I should probably go now because this is just turning into pointless rambles.

Sorry you had to go through that.

Author's Response: i make you cry with laughter ? THIS IS ACUTALLY SO EXCITING GIRL! HAVA SOMEA BUTTERCHICKEEN *insert amazing indian accent here*
i loved this pointless ramble; it was one of the best i've read all day :D thanks for the review x

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love this chapter! please write more this is like my fav fan fic EVER!!!
love Amy :):):):):):):):):):)

Author's Response: awww THANKS SO MUCH. THIS IS LIKE MY FAVOURITE REVIEW EVER!!!
love hedwig :):):):):)`

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Dhkdjjdbdmdkddy! Always get so excited when this story is updated, and I wasn't disappointed :D I don't even really know what to say, I just overall really enjoyed it. Again, just a tinsy bit predictable that she would end up in James's bed! But oh well, I did find it funny when Halle was getting her memory back!
Looking forward to the next update :D
P.s Chocolate + Dr Who = one of THE best combinations ever.

Author's Response: AHAHA THANKS FOR THE REVIEW LOVELY :D i know, i am slightly predictable but its so much fun writing cliches :) i promise to update soon :D
add tea to the combination and you've got the best sunday ever :D

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CHOCOLATE PIE!?!?!?!?! I WANT SOME!! Where can i get some chocolate pie? I will get some and watch it with next weeks Doctor Who : ) it's so good, like what is Clara?!?
Anyway, THIS WEEK?? THAT SOON!! This is brilliant yay! cause I am currently not so happy with you for ending it on such a cliff.

Author's Response: AHAHA I GOT MY CHOCOLATE PIES FROM THE COOKIE MAN BUT I THINK THEY STOPPED SELLING THEM COZ EASTER IS OVER :'( i have no idea what clara/oswin/oswald is...CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT THOUGH! remember...there's something in the wifi... i shall update soon! i promise! nearly there :)

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please write more, its a really good story!

Author's Response: ahaha next chapters like 3/4 done, so i shall update soon ! thankyou :D

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Can I just say thank-you. Later today I hand in my major project, and I can't remember the last time I had more than 5 1/2 hours sleep in one night. This update was actually exactly what I needed.

As always, I loved the chapter, it was amazing. I think you dealt with the fallout really well and just oof James slightly shirtless, you made my week. I loved Halle's "I'm off to go die of shame" speech - her one liners are always brilliant and I don't know how you do it but it makes me look at my own writing and want to cry.

Anyways, brilliant as usual :)

Author's Response: aww, im so glad my story is actually making somebody happy. you're literally like the best compliment-giver i have ever seen in all my years of eating.
thankyou so much :D


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I DID WATCH THE NEW EPISODE OF DOCTOR WHO, TWAS AMAZING (just like this chapter, back to last name basis, poor Halle and there's such thing as chocolate pie?!).
10/10

Author's Response: AWMIGOD, WHAT IS THE SECRET BEHIND CLARA?
im glad you liked this chapter...the chocolate pies were delicious ! :D

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I agree through bananas
Are usually a pile of mush

Author's Response: i agree.
bananas are mushy.
thanks for the review (:

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My sweet goodness! This is hilarious! And actually has a plot! Update! Please? I reviewed, therefore I have deemed your incredible, story incredible, and so you should update it! Yes? WONDERRFUL! Love it
-J

Author's Response: ahaha, YOU DEEMED MY STORY WORTHY! NOW I HAVE TO UPDATE!
thanks muchly for the review, twas lovely :D
next chappies in the queue, hope you enjoy !

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update? PLEASE? *sobs*

Author's Response: why of course. dont sob. dont sob dear soul! next chappies in the queue :)

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ERM MY GAWD. I DIDN'T REVIEW.
CHILD FORGIVE ME. I BEG OF YOU.
look a caterpillar V
C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C O
L L L L L L L L L L L L L L L L L L



shuttup. penguins are easy.
PUTTIN ON THE RITZ.
rub my elbows.

and knowing halle is turned on by masculine puppies makes me question you. in a deep kind of way. deep like the ocean. bright like the sunshine. chocolate like FREAKING 10 KILOS.

stupid year 8.

anyways i have to go for a run. CUZ IM FIT LIKE THAT.

yeah. milos epic

the penguin has been collected and i thank you.
FORGIVE ME FOR NOT REVIEWING.
only know you love her when you let her go.
ciao my black brother.

Author's Response: your catepillar disgusts me.
penguins are where its at.
*whoop whoop*
THANKS MUCHLY FOR THE LOVELY REVIEW, CHICKEN. HAVE FUN ON YOUR RUN.
im glad you enjoyed your penguin. and you even got a disgruntled hedgehog as well. enjoy that.
ciao my hipster sister.

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Please please update soon! I
desperately need this next chapter!
Great story by the way

Author's Response: thanks very much :) next chapters in the queue, hopefully you'll like it :D

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OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY!! :) *jumps up and down excitedly* and why you might am I so excited? Well I shall anseer that question my young grasshopper. I have finally found an amazing fanfiction!!! yayayayayaay :) Here I was, trudging through the densley wooded dangerous world of fanfictions and I stubled across yours like a monkey might stumble across a yummy banana. Yes, you heard right, your story is a bana and I am a monkey!!! Anywho this story iss so cute and I love the way you write Halle and all her friends. The dialouge is amazing and please update soon! Pretty please with a chocolate frog on top, that's right, I'll give you a chocolate frog! BAM!!! lalala

Author's Response: YES! IM A GRASSHOPPER NOW?
my life goal is officially complete.
wrhfre. thanks for this lovely review. it made my WHOLE ENTIRE DAY. COZ IT WAS SO LOVELY. OMG, my storys a banana AND i get a chocolate frog? what is this?
NEXT CHAPPOS IN THE QUEUE, I HOPE U ENJOY :D

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Great chapter!! Wow bungs are getting so dramatic! I wonder if I was right about Al...if he likes her, that is. Because I mean it's possible that he's just angry because he knows it's not that smart of a choice and he doesn't want her to get used...or something...oh forget it. He definitely likes her. He was hoping she'd kiss him. Then she went for his brother. Ouch. Poor Al :( he's such a sweetheart! He should t have punched James, though, unless James knew he liked Halle...
And we all know James likes Halle. But will he own up to it? It's causing tension with Al big time and who knows where that will go...but also...going off the way he treats other girls (like Erica) he doesn't really seem like the boyfriend type. I hope we see that he is capable of that, though. I'd hate to find out he's that immature and mysogynistic.
If he doesn't remember and Halle doesn't tell him, I'm sure he'll find out about it from someone. What will they say to each other once they're sober? I'm curious for sure.
I also want to know what the cool ball-sphere-metal-thing does! And the numbers!
Update soon!

Author's Response: aha, thanks serendipity1234
hehe, im extremely glad you're actually reading into the story, i put the next chapter in the queue and hopefully that clears up some of the Al-related tension.
hehe, next chapters the morning after, and its a bit awkward, thats for sure. and the cool-ball-sphere-metal-thing shall make its return!
thanks for the lovely review :D

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OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOGMGG WHAT THE CHICKEN DID I JUST READ! THAT WAS BLOODY AMAZING!

Author's Response: WHAT THE CHICKEN DID YOU JUST READ? YOU ARE BLOODY AMAZING FOR REVIEWING LIKE A CHICKEN.

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this chapter was so lovely! its was all warm and fuzzy and nice amd liked it :D

Author's Response: aww, thats what i was aiming for :)

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oh wow. that was amazing

Author's Response: chocolate-like amazing?
FANKS ONCE MORE CHICKENS

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AWWW THE CUTENESS IS UNBEARABLE!

Author's Response: like my face.

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I WANT TO JOIN MCGONIGALS FAN CLUB!
halle and james are so cute omg

Author's Response: i shall make you an honourary member.
FANKS ONCE MORE :D

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OH MY CHICKENS. DO both james and Al like her??!?!?!?!?! what is this... im actually loving this.
thanks for writing it and making it excist
and agian i will say that i want to be halle so bad. yep thats all.thanks man :D

Author's Response: im so glad you are excited.
THANKS CHICKENS :D

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they are so cute omg. can i be halle please?

Author's Response: ofc u can ;)

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ooohhh the tension. i love it!

Author's Response: hehe, are you enjoying that icecream?
T EE NN SSS II OO NN. oh

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I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!! THIS IS AMAZING! E

Author's Response: oh nigga chicken. im pleased :D

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OMG IM FANGIRLING SO BAD! i know whats gonna happen and im loving it!!

Author's Response: TEHEE. FANGIRL, NUTBUSH. FANGIRL.
i command thee.
OH MA SHERLOCK BUDDY, I AM PHENOMENALLY GLAD YOURE ENJOYING MA FIC. I PRAISE THE.
have a penguin.

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this is actually amazballs. If this were a book i would buy it and recomend it to people! YOUR SUCH A GOOD WRITER!

Author's Response: i have absolutley no idea who you are yet ;)
THANKYOU SO MUCH, NUTBUSH. THAT ACTUALLY MAKES ME SOOO HAPPY.
CHOCOLATE.
what kind of chocolate?
CARAMEL. CHOCOLATE. WITH. KOALAS.

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