NOOO!!!
IT CAN'T END.
WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO WITH LIFE? (I HAVE ONE)


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as you can tell i am extremely upset that this story is finished, i always looked forward to the updates cuz this story was so UNIQUE AND WELL WRITTEN.
awesome last chapter, i think you summed it up perfectly, AND I DON'T WANT IT TO END.
damn. im going to miss this.
i cant wait to read more of your stories

till next time (and there will be one)
lOony

Author's Response: I''M SORRY! I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MY LIFE EITHER!

I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and I am so tempted to write a sequel! I would love it if you checked out some of my other stories - reviews always make my day!

Courtney:)

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bro, why is it still a wip? you got my hopes up that the story wasn't over yet :(. I wish it wasn't haha, I love your stories. But great as usual, I wouldn't have had it end any other way:) If I can make a suggestion... YOU SHOULD TOTES WRITE A STORY WITH THEM ON THE GRAND TOUR!! They can get enveloped in a mystery that takes from place to place, and it would be soo good bro. so good. ok well bye love you:D

Author's Response: Hehehe, sorry about that! I didn't want to change it to completed until the last chapter was actually posted.

You have no idea how tempted I am to write a sequel right now, I enjoyed writing this story so much! If I get some more requests, I probably will end up writing something, even if it's just a short story or one-shot.

Courtney:)

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I really like the characterisation of Charlie and her whole story and I like that Tori is a constant obstacle in her life and James as well the whole gang really,can't wait to see what's next! Please update soon x

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review - I really appreciate it.
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it was a bit of a filler-y chapter - except the end where they found the note of course!
poor rebecca - i feel so bad for her :( i hope they find her body or something and let rebecca have her funeral for tori - i think she deserves that!

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Wow this is amazing! I have to say though, when I first started reading, Charlie as a character didnt do much for me. I'm glad I persevered though, because both your writing and your characterization has improved so much.

I like how the two story lines run parallel to each other, in terms of the time of year etc.

For some reason, I don't think she's dead.. Is she dead?!?

Author's Response: Thanks so much - it's great to hear you think I've improved, I've been writing a lot lately!

Thanks again!
Courtney:)

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OMIGOSHOMIGOSH. SHE KILLED HERSELF? WHAT NO.NO.NO.

*ahem* Spaz attack over.

So when I was looking through your author page looking for a story to review I realised you'd written this story and I knew I had to review it. I've been following it since it was pretty new, and loved every step of the way.

Your characters mature and age well, as if they were real. But even more than that *you* improve. Each chapter gets progressively better, from grammar to flow to everything.

Your plot could not have been better, *coughunlessyoumakeTorialiveagaincough* it's totally original. I've not seen anything like it, and I must say, it's wonderful.

The only thing I'd say is that you rush your chapters. Each chapter has enough events in it that you could stretch them out and expand on details and stuff to make them double the length. Instead of just saying, "I walked to the party where my boyfriend was." you could say something like, "I walked into the party and it was wonderful. There were golden streamers everywhere and I could tell that tonight..."

But aside from that it was superb! Looking forward to the last *gulp* chapter.

Please don't make it end,
Liz.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for review! It makes me so happy to hear that I've actually had a follower since near the beginning of the story - I still remember how excited I was when I got my first ever review.

Thanks again!
Courtney:)

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EEEK! THAT WAS A GREAT WAY OF CHARLIE FINDING OUT!
and i guess it was nice that rebecca apologized, and charlie responded well enough.

I KNEW CHARLIE WAS GOING TO BE THE ONE TO SOLVE THE CASE!

also, how could she have been seen in hogsmeade if she was dead? a ghost?

UPDATE SOON, PLEASE! (:

Author's Response: Hahaha, thanks so much! And Charlie was always going to be the one to solve the case, so nice guessing!
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I am in love with this story. Fred makes me laugh so much and i think you've written this so well. i can't wait for more. i am honestly so impressed. i am so addicted, this is so original! you are amazing! i'm waiting for this story to go out with the best bang!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much - I absolutely adore Fred, too. This review seriously made my day - you're amazing too!
Courtney:)

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I read all the chapters in two days! Yayy :D
I love the way you write Charlie's part and although I don't like Tori as a person her part was incredibly well written as well, especially the chapter with the flashbacks and the suicide.
Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Wow, I'm so glad you enjoyed it enough to read it that quickly. Thanks for the review!
Courtney:)

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This is really good! I'm secretly hoping that Tori survived and hid herself and her baby away somewhere, but that's unlikely. I feel sorry for Rebecca and I think Al and James should just get over what happened between them, it's been a year! Family is more important than girls, James is with Charlie now- he should be over Tori!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the review.
Courtney:)

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UPDATE! I need to know what happens! It's amazing, it's awesome, it's epic, even though you left it on such a cliffhangery moment, so just update ASAP or I might just die! (probably not the best term to use with this story)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review - I'm so happy you are enjoying it!
Courtney:)

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FIRST! And I'd just like to say I totallyy guessed she killed herself. Love you and update soon, can't wait for the last chappie! :D

Author's Response: Well done! Thank you so much - I'll update as soon as possible!
Courtney:)

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Wow. I wasn't sure I was going to like this story but I'm so happy I took a chance. You've done a beautiful job and I really enjoy reading it.

I can now see why Becky is so obsessed with finding Tori. Guilt can be such a powerful motivator and it's clear that she feels guilty for the way things went with Tori that last night.

I can't wait for your next chapter. I'm sure it will be as captivating as all of the others.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for giving this story a chance, I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
Courtney:)

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wondering if Becca is 'looking' for Tori because she feels guilty for not helping Tori when she found out she was preggers.

Author's Response: Hmm, we shall see! Thanks for the review.
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Holy crap! That was amazing!!! Im Speechless

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much!
Courtney:)

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Please update soon!! This story is amazing, you're extremely talented

Author's Response: Aw, you have no idea how happy this review made me - thanks so much!
Courtney:)

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Wow. That ending was impressively haunting

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you thought so! Thanks for reviewing.
Courtney:)

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DEATH?
My oh my
What an intensifyingly amazing chapter.
WRITE MORE.

till next time
lOony

Author's Response: Thank you so much! More coming soon.
Courtney:)

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Wow. That is amazing. Yes, dark, but revealing. Can't wait for that next chapter- update ASAP!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thank you so much for the review.
Courtney:)

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AAGHHH!! OMG! SHE'S DEAD! SHE JUST DIED! AND I FELT BAD! BECAUSE OMG HER PARENTS I FEEL SO BAD, IM SORRY TORI, IM SORRY FOR HATING YOU - PLEASE DONT DIE.

omg.

well rebecca is confusing. it must be guilt then, that made her stand up for tori in the present and all.

also, nice going with the whole 'note falling between the bed thing only to be seen again a year later' BY WE ALL KNOW WHO. and i bet charlie is going to solve the case, isn't she?

wow this story is really good, im excited for the next chapter (:

AND AND AND also i feel like albus doesn't deserve the hate he gets in the present, because i mean, poor thing.

UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you so much for the awesome review! Yours always put a smile on my face!

Keep reading and reviewing, I look forward to seeing what you think of the end!
Courtney:)

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Oh god. She killed herself. A really sad chapter, but you've written it really well.
Who was the father of the baby? You didn't make that clear.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. No, I never made it clear who the father was - it really could be either. But in my head, James is the father.
Courtney:)

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This was sufficiently depressing...
She killed herself? Hmm i sort of guessed right. I first thought she had been kidnapped or something!
But i'm guessing that the next chapter - the note will be found yes?

UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Sufficiently depressing? Hm, I hope that's a good thing!
Thanks for the review.
Courtney:)

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I love this story!
It's really original. I think she's going to run away pretty soon, but I really don't know.
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review!
Courtney:)

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i love these! and these chapters seem to be getting better (: the plot, everything, is great :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much
Courtney:)

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So James is the father? Unless there's the possibility that Albus could be?
(awesome story&chapter by the way)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Courtney:)

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