If I didn't love this story so much I'd be angry at you for leaving this chapter so short! I can't wait for chapter 14, don't leave it too long :)Author's Response: I'll try and update soon! Thank you so much for reading my story :) x Report Review
great job on this chapter, and believe me, I know what tests are like, on monday we start standerdized testing(the ISTEP+=Indiand state testing somthing plus) belive me. any way cant wait for the next chapter! five bizilion out of ten! Report Review
OH MY GOD.
HE KNOWS!!! he knows. Omg he knows...
I am so scared. And... Happy.
Yay, what a great chapter, I'm so happy you have written more.
I can't wait to see what happens next, I love this book and I hope this motivates you to write more soon. ASAP.
Lots of love, Tragic.Author's Response: I'll try and update soon :) Thank you so much for reviewing, and the encouragement! Report Review
I wish we got a longer chapter...and I hope James isn't upset that she held out for this long. I hope we get another chapter soon! :)Author's Response: I'll try and get the next chapter out as soon as I can (: Thanks for reading x Report Review
This is amazing! The best OC fic I've ever read by far; Violet is relatable and frankly, a great character, and you nailed the personalities of all the canon characters :) there's a really original plot, just discovered this fic today, read it all and am OBSESSED cant wait for more! xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to me that you are enjoying the characters and my story :) x Report Review
Damn you for leaving this chapter like that. You better update soon or I'll go crazy. :D I really do hate cliffhangers like this.
But it was a good chapter. James finally knows, I hope we get to see his thoughts on this soon. And Rose feeling guilty and trying to make up for it was sweet too.
Please do keep it up :)Author's Response: Hehe I'm sorry about leaving the chapter like that :L I'll try and update as soon as possible! Thank you for your review x Report Review
OMG!! WHY SO SHORT!???!?!?!
I loved this chapter. I hope Chastity gets thrown off the Astronomy Tower. Grr.
I wonder what James will say to Violet now he knows? I hate you for all this suspense!!
P.S, that quote I used in my last review was from a "Dork Diaries" book. I don't remember which one. But It's a good book ;)Author's Response: I'm sorry for the short chapter! And I hope so too, but unfortunately things aren't always that simple :D The Dork Diaries sound funny, I think I'll add them onto my list of books to read! Thank you for reading and reviewing x Report Review
ahh too short you left us waiting for so long ahhh. but even thought it was short it was fabulous! GAAaah I hope James is good because if he is a douche then that would suck rly rly badly. Like I'm gunna kill him if hes a douche because i love Vi! Update soon Author's Response: Sorry for the short chapter! Hopefully the next one will be longer. You're gonna have to wait until the next chapter to find all of that out :) Thank you for reviewing! x Report Review
Omg, I am totally hooked on this story! Please update soon, I can't wait! :) xx Report Review
Oh my god what's going to happen next? Update ASAP pleeeaaase!!! Report Review
Ah it was so good James finally knows :) Please tell me you have the next chapter in the queue and it will be up soon? James and Vi HAVE to get together within the next two chapters i don't know if i can take it anymore, that you for updating, sorry for complaining so much xoxoAuthor's Response: I'm afraid the next chapter isn't in the queue quite yet, it's only been a day! I'm trying my best to get it written quickly, I promise you :D And don't worry about complaining, I really appreciate all reviews xo Report Review
please update as soon as you can! I can't stand the cliffhanger! Report Review
That's REALLLY GOOOD! Report Review
I would have liked this chapter to be longer, but that is purely because I enjoy reading this story so much and after all the cliffhangers I want to read as much as possible! I'm glad James knows, as long as he doesn't think that someone else is the father, because we didn't actually see him find out anything other than Violet being pregnant...
I like all the characters in this story (except the mean ones, like Chastity, of course!) and enjoyed reading Rose's point of view. I hope you update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I'm sorry this chapter felt so short, but it was over 3000 words and took a verrry long time to write, haha :D I'm so glad you're enjoying the characters, I'll update as soon as I can! :) Report Review
Enjoying this story so much! Can't wait to find out what happens next, especially how james will react! Please update soon :) x Report Review
I really like Rose's POV and I'm so glad James knows even if it wasn't Violet who told him. ♥
I was on the edge all through reading this.
I'm glad James was there but he could have at least said something or have an expression on his face (maybe a chapter in his POV *hint hint*)
You have no idea how loud I just screamed when Lily whispered to Vi.
ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME RACHEL BECAUSE THESE CLIFF HANGERS ARE NOT GOOD FOR MY HEALTH/SANITY!
I SERIOUSLY can't wait for the next one!
P.s Even though it's ages away good luck with your exans :DAuthor's Response: Yay, James finally knows! (It took us 13 chapters, but we got there eventually)
I'm sorry the cliffhangers are bad for your health/sanity, but I love them too much to stop writing them!
Thank you so much for reviewing, and I'll try not to take so long again for the next chapter! :) xx Report Review
PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!! I really want to know what's going to happen! I really love this story! Please write faster! It's always so exciting so see a new chapter!! Great job with this story though!! It's one of the better fanfics I have read there are some real duds out there! :) Report Review
You need to keep writing. This cliffhanger business is bad for my health :P
That being said, wow! The new POV was bit refreshing and I'm glad that somebody finally clued little Jamesy in, although it looks like he's upset (I would be too).
All that being said: I liked how James was laughing after the break-up. I've done that so many times that I just wanted to hi-five the kid. We shall deal with the female population together (I realize he's fictional. . .oh well)!
Yay, thanks for a good read,
soapman333 (Jack)Author's Response: Haha I'm fairly certain James would make a good wingman for you, but unfortunately, he isn't real. You must work alone, I'm afraid ;) Thank you so much for reviewing, it made me smile! x Report Review
Arrgh! Either your chapters are really short, or I'm reading really fast! I check everyday to see if you've updated, I'm hooked on to this story! It's really good :)Author's Response: Sorry this chapter was a little shorter than normal, but it was still over 3000 words! Thank you so much for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying my story :) x Report Review
hey, you know i am in love with this fanfic, so u should know how hard it is for me to keep waiting for it to update it have been so long, in one of the responses to a different review you said it would be up by friday at the LATEST well it is saturday! I don't mean to complain but i am in love with this and i have read to other fanfics while waiting but they were not half as good as this one, i love this story line and am getting very impatient, sorry for complaining but UPDATEAuthor's Response: I'm so sorry! In all honesty, I put the next chapter in the queue well over five days ago, and I'm not really sure whats taking so long! I'm hoping it will be up by tomorrow, but its out of my control :/ I'm so glad you're enjoying this story so much, it truly means so much to me :D x Report Review
Woah. This story kept me awake until two in the morning. I thoroughly enjoy it :0 thanks for posting it.
soapman333Author's Response: Wo this was the 100th review! Seriously soapman333 I think I may be in love with you :D Report Review
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON PLEASE! I just started reading this story today and it's fabulous and holy crap that cliff hanger!Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I actually just put the next chapter in the queue today so it should be out by Friday at the latest (: Thank you so much for your review x Report Review
I love this so much! it is in my top 5 fanfics and believe me i have read a lot of them!! I have had this tab opened for so long checking everyday to see if you updated and i will keep checking until you do. Vi and James would make the cutest couple, so please have them go out soon :) i hope the baby and vi are alright if anything happened to either of them I would be so upset :'( PLEASSSE UPDATE SOON! I finished the last chapter like 3 weeks ago! xoxAuthor's Response: Aww thank you so much, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! The next chapter is in the queue so it should be out very soon! :D x Report Review
that little bitch she better stay away from vi if she wan'ts to live. I think al is gay and that lily will tel james she's pregnant. 92329374298749236291/10 Report Review
This is really good. Please update soon!! I want to know what happens nextAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter will be out really soon, I promise ;) Report Review
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