Whaa, great drama and a little romance at the end! Just how I like it.. I am glad to hear you are better again! I was worrying you had abandoned the story just as so many other writers seem to do just when I discover their story :) Update soon! Flying mandarinAuthor's Response: Ah I'm sorry! I know my update time is waaay too long, but life's a bitch. I promise you I would never abandon this story. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :) -3 Report Review
write more, its so good! Report Review
I loved this chapter!! Really answered some questions I had been wondering about forever!! This is now one of my new favorite chapters and is still one of my favorite fanfics! Please keep updating quickly!! Can't wait to find out what happens next and it really makes my day when I see you have added another chapter! :) you are a great writer! Keep up the brillient work!!
Love from your avid reader!
Xx :)Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, and that it answered your questions! Thank you so much for the compliments and for reviewing :D xx Report Review
aww thats adorable Report Review
Wowww, I'm not sure what to say :/
My reaction would be similar to James. I think I would be more furious than sympathetic, but mostly at myself :P
Her mother...I can't believe it! I was like, "Awww snap! We've got some family drama!" but I'm glad her mother was so horrid, because it made the Potters more sympathetic, as lame as that sounds.
Geez James, could he be any more awesome? He's climbing in yo windows, snatching pregnant women up! (I hope you understand that reference, because I snorted a little)
Jk, he's pretty awesome, and I'm excited for them :DAuthor's Response: Yeah I'm sure if I were a guy I would be furious too, but I'm not, so... never mind. And yep, what is a story without some family drama? :D
James is pretty awesome. He's Harry Potter's kid, what would you expect? Hahaha you can't be on the internet and not understand that reference, I'll admit it, I snorted too (how sexy)
Thank you for reading and taking the time to review! X Report Review
When I read the last chapter and you left us with a kind of cliffhanger, I was wondering if James knew that it was his child or if he thought the worst about Violet. I'm glad you built on that here and showed his concern about that.
And I thought you wrote the reactions of the parents really well. Violet's mother is horrible, but I'm glad that Ginny and Harry are going to try and help as much as possible. And I'm happy that James is going to stick by Violet too.
I'll look forward to the next chapter!
nott theodore :)Author's Response: I loved this review; thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it :) Thank you for taking the time to review... I'll try and update soon. Report Review
Vi's mother ... what a damn bitch! If my daughter got pregnant at sixteen, that is NOT what I would say to her. Damn bitch. Throw her off the Astronomy Tower with Chastity!
I'm so glad James and Vi have sorted things out. When he got mad in the Hospital Wing, I was scared he'd say "I'm not raising a kid. You're on your own", but hooray! The ending was really sweet *tears up* I hope everything turns out okay for them
Great chapter xxxAuthor's Response: I'm so happy you liked this chapter :) Your comment about throwing Violet's mum off the Astronomy Tower with Chastity made me laugh! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review x Report Review
This chapter, OHMYGOD!!! My heart was racing as I read it. James knows and he's completely freaked out. No surprise there, I mean if you found out you were gonna be a dad when she's already four months pregnant, that's gotta be hard.
I squealed when James' entered the office. I'm so glad he wants to know. I offically love him now!!!
I really dislike Violet's mum. She really mean. Poor Violet, I just want to give her hugs.
ASDFGHJKLASDDGFHJKL! THEY HAVE TO GET TOGETHER, THEY WERE MADE FOR EACH OTHER!!! I'm so, so happy right now. James wants to be a part of it and I really, really hope they get together! :) ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
"raiding a child" - Think you meant raising :)
I love this chapter so much and James is a cutie. Really can't wait for the next one!
Soph xx :DAuthor's Response: Haha, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I agree with you about James finding out; one of the many reasons I am glad to be a girl ;) And I noticed the "raiding a child" mistake after I had submitted the chapter, and I didn't want to edit it and sent it to the back of the queue since I had already waited so long to update the story! I'll fix it soon :)
Thank you so much for reviewing :D x Report Review
Wow! this story is so good! Report Review
Please Update Quick The Story's Just Begining Keep Up The Good Writting. Report Review
I hope to read your next chapter soon! I'm really interested in seeing how James handles the news. Report Review
I WANT MORE CHAPTERS! THIS IS AMAZING!!! Report Review
Pleassse write more!! I've been waiting desperately, for what feels like forever for this next chapter!! I really love this story! Your a brillient writer!! Update faster please!
Love your desperately waiting reader!! :D Report Review
Hey. So, you write really well and I think you should totally update soon before I go crazy with curiosity. Please update soon. I want to see Violet talk with James about everything. And I want to see parents. Angry parents. Please and thank you. (There, I remembered my manners.)
KTHXBIAuthor's Response: The story will be updated very soon :) Thank you for reviewing and and remembering your manners! x Report Review
I just caught up to al the chapters and I love it! please updat soon :) I need to know.. Report Review
Hi, your great but i really can't keep waiting for the next chapter so hurry please!!!Author's Response: why does it say I posted this review omg this is weird Report Review
THIS IS AWESOME YOU ARE A GENIUS !!!
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you !
You are the most awesome person in the world ! (and if you dont finish this i might just throw my computer through the window, my sanity is in your hands)Author's Response: Haha I promise I will finish this, I'm just a really slow writer! Thank you for reviewing x Report Review
Just spent the last hour reading the whole story so far... it's brilliant, really enjoying it, keep up the good work, when's the next update? :D xxxAuthor's Response: Thank you! Next update should be quite soon, not entirely sure though :) Report Review
YAH! this is awesome!!! please update soon!!! Report Review
JAMES KNOWS! JAMES KNOWS! JAMES KNOWS! How can you end the chapter there. Do you not understand that this is actual torture! You had better update soon and have lots of James and Violet moments in it or at least have them talk about the poor baby. Seriously, please just update soon for the sake of my sanity.Author's Response: Haha the next chapter is in the queue and should be out by Thursday! Thank you for reviewing :) Report Review
please update soon xxAuthor's Response: I'll update as soon as I can :) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
love the chapter, cant wait to read more about James reaction and Violets condition Report Review
OMG make the next fuckin chapter all ready!!!Author's Response: Its only been a week since the last chapter... Report Review
If I didn't love this story so much I'd be angry at you for leaving this chapter so short! I can't wait for chapter 14, don't leave it too long :)Author's Response: I'll try and update soon! Thank you so much for reading my story :) x Report Review
great job on this chapter, and believe me, I know what tests are like, on monday we start standerdized testing(the ISTEP+=Indiand state testing somthing plus) belive me. any way cant wait for the next chapter! five bizilion out of ten! Report Review
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