ERMAHGARD that was a great ending. Still really good quality with words and spellings and grammar and all of that unfun stuff so YAY!!!

Author's Response: You wouldn't happen to be a fan of danisnotonfire would you? :) And I'm happy the quality of written communication impressed you!
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Ho.ly.shit. Please excuse my language, but I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT!

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ahahahah Professor Vector - I see what'ca did there :)
Anyways, I really like the story so far and I like the fact that the chapters aren't uber long so I can end at a chapter if I have to leave suddenly rather than lose my place and start all over again. Really good grammar and spelling and stuff, which is really good for me because I get a bit OCD at that... And I really like that you don't PUSH Rose and Scorpius together, I like the way you put them hating each other with a bit of ambiguity towards their feelings besides hatred and yada yada yada... Good job so far!!

Author's Response: Haha, slightly unimaginative but it's such a good name! :)
Thanks, this really has made my day! I'm not sure if you've reviewed this before, but if you haven't- welcome! I'm glad you like the length of them, sometimes I feel mean that they're so short, but watching out for grammar can get tiring after a while! I get so crazy about that too, my friends all hate me when I correct them. Or maybe they just hate me in general... ;)
I tried to let Rose and Scorpius develop their feelings, and I hope that I maintain that throughout. Sometimes I feel like ending with: 'and then they got together THE END', because I want them to so much! Stupid story plan... I hope you like the way it unravels anyway!
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I am so totally in love with Scorpio. When I read that he woul do what ever he can to impress Rose when he first met her, I said out loud AW. Cant wait to see wat happens next!

Author's Response: Welcome! Thanks so much! I am totally in love with Scorpius too! HE'S MINE! Haha, I'm glad it made you 'aw' though, I hope what's coming up soon will too!
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yes finally they're gonna get together

Author's Response: Maybe... ;)
You know me, I like to drag things out. XD
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I'm joking. :)
Its actually really good so far. I quite like it. x

Author's Response: Thanks, although keep your reviews to 12+ in future! I'm glad you like it and I hope you read more!
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P.S. Don't press enter quite so much- I get tired after excessive scrolling... ;)

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Toby can go swim in the lake for all I care, Scorpius is the best

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ok, if you have a huge workload i'm worried because I have been doing ABSOLUTELY NOTHING! :O
Back to the chapter: ooh i just realised, is toby GREEN named after someone fantastic and wonderful? ;) i will look very stupid if he's not!!!
I do like Toby and feel sorry for him but I think that scorpius and rose are perfect together!! When he said he couldn't imagine a time when he wouldn't love her I physically 'awww'ed out loud! And I'm so glad that he told her he loved her!!
Keep up the good work!! :)

Author's Response: Haha, he may be! And I'm so pleased to hear that- but I will not rest until you cry! ;)
Hopefully the next one will be along soon!
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Ew, the way you described Draco makes him seem repulsive... at least he didn't scream 'GET YOUR PAWS OFF ME, YOU DAMN DIRTY APE' in a terrible american accent.
Rose saying that quidditch is only a game, in the words of my dad (about footaball, not quidditch) 'IT'S NOT JUST A GAME, IT'S A LIFESTYLE'
Another brilliant chapter!! :)

Author's Response: Yup, that was my intention- although in my eyes Draco will never be repulsive! Haha, that was an awful scene, his voice coach should be ashamed!
And your dad is completely right in what he says about 'footaball'! :)
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OMFG, AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO NOTICED DAN AND PHIL? Personally, i think that Dan should marry me... I also liked the character Eleanor ;) I really liked the quidditch scene and the bit with Scorpius and Rose is so sweet!! THAT STUPID DOOR/MAN INTERRUPTING HIM!! This is my favourite chapter so far!! :)

Author's Response: Haha, that door/man was Draco Malfoy... Oh Ellen... ;) But thanks! Don't worry, you noticed Dan and Phil and now my life is complete! (DAN IS MINE!) I was like crying as I wrote that bit with Rose and Scorpius, not sad at all!
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I really like it but I feel super bad about her boyfriend and think hat Rose should too, have the rest to ready though!

Author's Response: Welcome, thanks for reading! Yeah, poor Toby's got it hard, but we can't pick who we are attracted to! I think Rose has forgotten about Toby a little bit, so perhaps a reminder might force her to either love what she's got or let Toby go... We'll have to wait and see though!
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I meant she clearly loves Scorpius. Sorry:)

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I Know you like Toby but he seems so clingy and annoying although Rose should just break up with him, she clearly loves Toby. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Like??? Like? I LOVE TOBY! He's just in love! And she won't break up with him just yet...
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I think Toby is realizing that having a GF who only said yes out of pity does not mak for an awesome relationship. He just might run into someone who rocks his world because she is just THAT into him. Sounds better than just getting ditched.
Good chapter

Author's Response: Yeah, but he loves her too much to leave her... I don't think she pitied him all the way through, but the relationship is starting to go downhill- clearly! ;) Maybe they'll end up together in the end though- we'll have to wait and see!
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omg D malfoy is such a douche

Author's Response: Thanks, I really hated him when I wrote this chapter. Then I looked at my Draco wall and I forgave him... ;)
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AAHHH! He has a PONYTAIL?! Pahahahaha :) Hope you start doing longer chapters again, this one finished too soon :)

Author's Response: Haha, I thought you'd like that! Thanks, I like doing longer chapters too, hopefully, there'll be more coming up soon!

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I thought that was an awesome fight. Draco can't admit when Scorpius is right. He is so busy trying to play the part of his father, he never realized that his father had gotten it wrong all those years ago too. With Scorpiuses attitude, I think he might be able to break the cycle of bad Malfoy fathers :)

How was that for nice? I loved the chapter, see you soon :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks- you're the nicest of the nice! :) It's the Malfoy curse! You know I just got an idea for a sequel- thoughts?
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Great chapter! But do you think Draco would be attractive when he's older! Also i wonder where you got the inspiration to dress draco in a leather waistcoat. It was good to see Draco and Scorpius's relationship!

Author's Response: Thanks- and Draco is attractive at all ages; the film got it wrong! ;) Oh, the idea just came to me in a dream, you know how they get!
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LOOK I'M LEAVING A REVIEW! Technically I haven't read the whole chapter yet because its REALLY LONG (but I'm sure excellent) and I'm tired, but this will keep you going untill tomorrow! Sorry for not reading it all now :)

Author's Response: Okay then, thanks for leaving a review- although next time do it when you've read the chapter! It's longer than normal, but hopefully you'll like it.

Alexis
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Just read my review back and I spelt beaters wrong, Sorry :(

Author's Response: Haha, what is it with people and spelling mistakes recently? ;) Don't worry, I'll forgive you!

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Yay! Draco's back. Rose reminds me so much of Hermione when Ron gets poisoned. I love the beaters Phil and Dan, I wonder why you called the beates Phil and Dan? P.S I saw a paint called Lupin yesterday:)

Author's Response: Haha, it's not entirely positive! Yeah, she really does! I didn't even think of that! :) And, no reason... ;)
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P.S. Ew, werewolf paint...

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*Scorpius (sorry about that!)

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Well, Scorpious is injured. Of course his father will hear about this :)

Author's Response: Yep, although it wasn't from Scorpius! ;)
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I really liked the dialog at the beginning of this chapter! The whole thing was extreemly gripping and I really want to know what happens next!! This was one of my favourite chapters!! :)

Author's Response: Haha! Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter and hopefully, the next one won't be too long!
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Loved the flash back style of this, really good and interesting! Now I can see why everything is like it is!! Keep up the good work, my talented friend!! :)

Author's Response: Aw, you're not useless! I'm glad you like the chapter, and don't worry- I will! ;)
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