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Review #26, by iatevoldysnose So... Good Talk

22nd April 2013:
You know how you said that it was actually Christmas and not Valentine when you updated the last chapter? Well, right now its nearly ANZAC day. Anyway...

I really liked how you made Rose go through that mourning period, as it would have been a bit weird or insensitive of her like not to really care about what her and Toby had. It would certainly be something that I would do...

I loved the fight! It was so well written! It flowed (as much as a fight can flow;p) so well and was so intense! I really wasn't expecting a fight like that to happen (although I suspected that they would get into a fight eventually). The stuff that Tabitha said was quite harsh! I mean I would never say that to my best friend, even if we both liked the same guy and went through what Tabitha and Rose did. Maybe that's why Tabitha is just weird...haha:)
I really like her character though (not in the way I like Scorpius for example, but in the way that her personality is very well written and that it makes the story very interesting-all credit to you;p)

The memories at the start of the chapter were really good! They were really sweet, and I like how you made Rose try to give up the "memories" of Toby.

Just saying but Tabitha is a biarch.

What do you mean when you say "the water was really cold"

I didn't mind that Scorpius wasn't in this chapter, because it sort of let the whole fight and memory thing sink in. It was actually quite good that he wasn't in it. Not that I don't like Scorp:)

I like your pun! "SPEW-tiful" swag:)

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Haha! Thanks, it felt right to me that everything wouldn't spring into place the minute Toby was gone, I'm glad you seem to agree! And thanks, Tabitha is weird. She started off OK, but I saw a bit of comedic opportunity in her and every story needs a nutcase! (BTW, when I said that 'the water was really cold' I was referring to the dream I had about her that inspired- sort of- this chapter. The basic gist of it was that she threw some cold water over me, and once that happened I was like b***h is gonna die!)
And thanks, it took me FOREVER to come up with that!
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Review #27, by iatevoldysnose Valentine's Day

21st April 2013:
Ok. You know how I said that some other chapter was my favourite? Well, screw that! Coz this is my absolute favourite!
You captured the feelings of all characters so well! And I liked Ada's POV too! I still think Ada is an idiot though...
Everything that happened in this chapter was so perfect! Nothing was wrong in my opinion:)
And yes. I was totally not expecting Tose to be over! I was just gobsmacked, in front of my computer screen. My mouth was hanging open, and a fly flew in and i nearly died. Although my story isnt as dramatic as yours, its still weird...Nah jokes I was sorta expecting that to happened and I would have pelted a hell of a lot of tomatoes ur way if it didnt.
I hope Toby and Rose stay friends though. Although I do wish the best for Rose and Scorp, I hope there's more drama! I'm evil I know...mwahahahaha.
I bet you my evil laugh made you cower in fear under your table or bed and makes you quickly update;)

Make sure you send me a bit of that mince pie/carrot. Although I don't get the mince carrot thing. Unless you meant just carrot and not minced. Anyway, please send some over to me, here in Australia!

Loving this story,
iatevoldysnose xox

Author's Response: Yay! I think this chapter is a personal favourite of mine too! :) Ada is there for my personal amusement, don't worry! I don't know whether to feel sorry for the fly, or for you, but I'm glad the chapter warranted such a response! And it certainly was dramatic, I had to wear a neck brace for two and a half weeks (that was a lie...)! You won't see Toby in the flesh for a few more chapters but he may come back in a big way if I see fit... I'm not sure yet... And now I will definitely update soon... ;) And Australia! That's so cool! I want to go there so badly! :)
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Review #28, by iatevoldysnose The Curse of Ada Plum

21st April 2013:
Oh my god! That was so cute! I loved it and yes, I think it was cohesive! You write Scorpius' POVs really well! You write other POVs well too, but I thought I would just comment on that:)
I think I understand Rose, and how she couldn't break Toby's heart like that, so im not exaclty angry with her. However, I have to say, I REALLY DISLIKE ADA! She may cause Rose and Scorp's relationship to crumble!!!
I really hope it doesn't come to that and that Rose sees that he didnt want to kiss Ada. The archway part was just so adorable and I loved it!! I have to say, I didn't like the end, when Scorp cried...idk but it was a bit weird.

WONDERFUL CHAPTER OVERALL THOUGH!

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Good, I was worried about this chapter! I must admit, I was angry at Rose for a little while, but it evaporated quickly when I started writing the end of the next chapter (that'll make sense when you read it, I hope)! And I dislike Ada too, more than I portrayed here, in fact... ;) Don't worry though, she won't have that much of an effect! And Scorpius can't be all hard and unfeeling all the time! I think though, it was mainly because I liked the last line...! Perhaps that was a bit selfish of me... ;)
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Review #29, by iatevoldysnose Toby and Trouble

21st April 2013:
WOW! I never expected them to kiss again...like right now I mean! I don't mind Toby, but I think Scorpius is better for her! I feel quite sorry for Toby, but he didnt really win her heart at once. I mean, she sort of only went out with him coz he pestered her too...did he just like grow on her?

I have a feeling that Rose will be shocked at this 'news'...it was just so sweet when Rose pulled out of the kiss and she had a look of content. But i hope she does something about Toby soon...

Reading the chapter name for the first time, I thought that Toby would have found them making out or something and I was just so nervous for them!

You're a wonderful author, and I love reading this story! Just everything about it is so amazing!

Hope you update soon, coz im nearly up to chapter 22:)

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: They'll do that a bit more in the future... And I love Toby, but I agree that Scorpius is better for Rose. And I think she's coming around to that idea too! Toby and Rose may have got together because of his constant pestering, but I think that Rose grew to really love him. Otherwise all of these conflicting feelings wouldn't have confused her so much. In fact, I can imagine Rose and Toby staying together for a very long time quite happily. Of course, this is without the distraction of Scorpius, who is way more interesting than Toby... Ach, I don't envy Rose (well maybe a little bit...)
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Review #30, by iatevoldysnose Mr Malfoy Returns

21st April 2013:
Love it. The description of Draco was really good! I can imagine him so well! With the stubby ponytail lol.
Why did fricken Scorpius fall asleep? What was Rose going to say??

ARGH! Why?!

Anyway, I totally agree with you, when you say that Draco looks attractive! Melt!

Haha. Well anyway, I like where this story is going, I like the relationships that the characters have (although I wish Rose and Scorpius' was more than that).

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Haha, it breaks my heart to portray him in such an unattractive way! The sacrifices I make for the good of this story! ;) And don't worry, they'll have plenty of time to say what they need to when both of them are conscious and uninjured!
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Review #31, by iatevoldysnose The Other Seeker

21st April 2013:
OMG OMG OMG OMG!
What is Draco doing here if not to wish his little boy better;)
This chapter was so intense! Love James and his duty to protect Rose. Love his POV too!
What's going to happen to Toby?
And the match was awesome! Good job! Enjoyed it a lot.
How could Denny be so mean?!
And I wonder where you got the names Dan and Philip from? *winkwinknudgenudge*

Probably my favourite chapter!

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Haha, I doubt if that's why he's there... But the optimism is nice to hear! ;) I love James, and I may explore this love a bit further in the future... We'll see... ;) I read every single Quidditch match depicted in the book, plus 'Quidditch Through the Ages', to get the match up to par... I hope I did everything justice! And Dan and Phil...? You know where they're from- and that makes me like you more! :)
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Review #32, by iatevoldysnose The Quidditch Pitch

21st April 2013:
OH. MY. GOD.
That was so awesome!
Awesome chapter! Awesome portraying of characters! Awesome feelings shown! Awesome events! Just pretty much awesome everything!!!
I can't believe he actually kissed her though! And that she kissed him! Argh. As you can PROBABALY see, I'm spassing!
I loved what happened in this chapter! Can't wait to see what Rose is going to do and what Scorpius is going to do, and what James is going to do, and what Tab is going to do!

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much! Part of the reason why I didn't make this the thirteenth chapter was because I wanted to give myself a little extra time to make it better. I hope you think it made a difference! :) It was pretty much on the card from the third or fourth chapter, so I'm glad it was still something of a shock- being mysterious is my favourite thing!
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Review #33, by iatevoldysnose First Impressions

21st April 2013:
Aw! That was so cute! Rose got the wrong message obviously...so does this mean that he's liked her since the first time he talked to her? LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT NAW!
I love the first impression! It's adorable!

Great work!

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Yes, he did like her, although those initial feeling s were soon forgotten! It kind of was love at first sight actually, the old romantic in me was kind of enraptured by that idea!
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Review #34, by iatevoldysnose Malfoy Returns

21st April 2013:
Omg! I did NOT expect him to break up with her! I mean it was sort of obvious to us that he liked Rose, but I didnt actually think it would happen so quickly!
I can't wait to see how Scorpius is going to explain this to Rose. Will he tell her how he feels? Or will he make up some other excuse?
Can't wait to find out:)

Wonderful chapter once again

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Yay! I love the element of surprise! And I felt that Tabithus had run its course, especially after the very strange letter that Scorpius received in the last chapter... ;) You'll just have to wait and see, but whatever Scorpius does, it won't be a quick fix...
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Review #35, by iatevoldysnose Letters of Condolence

20th April 2013:
Oh. My. God. Wow.
That was just wow. I felt really sorry for Astoria! The poem that Tab wrote was sweet, though a bit obsessive like Scorp says. Just wondering, did u write that? Tabbycat and Scorpy are very weird nicknames indeed haha.
Scorp is such an ass! Why did he go out with Rose's best friend? He could've just gone for fricken Rose! Ugh.
At least they haves truced...hope something will happen between them soon;)

Once again, lovely chapter:) Really enjoyed it:))

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Haha! I'm not sure if I feel sorry for Astoria because she seems to treat Scorpius like a five year old who can be controlled easily, and I don't like that... Maybe Scorpius was a bit harsh though! Poor Tabitha, it was unnecessary for me to include the poem but I was cackling like a madman when I put it in the first draft and I just couldn't delete it! And yes, I did write it... Scorpius has dug himself quite a hole, I'll agree... But perhaps it won't be long until he's out of it... ;)
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Review #36, by iatevoldysnose Absence

20th April 2013:
LOVE THIS STORY!
I think Rose sending Scorp a letter was a good idea...they are totally falling for each other. It's just so cute.
Tab is a bit annoying. And I absolutely love Albus!!
I feel really sorry for Tab though...I mean she really likes him. :L
I don't get why Rose is not going to send the last part though...

The part where Rose says she missed Scorp was hilarious!
Lovely story!

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Thank you so much! By this point it is really cute, and most of it was just me daydreaming with chocolate and tea in tears in front of my laptop... It's an emotional process... I KNOW! She is so annoying!! And Albus... Ah, why doesn't he actually exist? In answer to your sort-of question, I think Rose didn't want to write that she missed him because seeing it in writing would be scary for her, and she wouldn't be able to live in denial anymore... What do you think? Would you feel the same way in her shoes?
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Review #37, by iatevoldysnose Working With Miss Weasley

20th April 2013:
Firstly, I love the chapter name and don't think it's lame:)
Secondly, that was actually a bit sad...the part about Scorp and Draco.
Thirdly, I'm glad that they can stay not angry at each other for at least one chappie
Fourthly, it was so sweet of Rose to do that!

Now, I just want to say...DOES SCORP ACTUALLY LIKE HER?
Coz I think he does. But it's just sad for Tab. I don't mind Tab, but she's sort of in the way! Argh.

Lovely chapter!

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Thanks, that was exactly what I was going for. I wanted to show you guys that Rose is actually really nice when she isn't making cauldrons explode in people's faces and trying to curse them in the middle of a lesson... And I started off feeling sorry for Tabitha, but she got really annoying! And I created her... ;) Scorpius may have changed his opinion, I'll say that much, although by the wealth of reviews still above I'm pretty sure you already know... ;)
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Review #38, by iatevoldysnose Duels in Defence

20th April 2013:
Ok ok. I officially think Scorp likes Rosie!
This chapter was so intense! Full of awesomeness!
Great work!
I think they drew the duel:) And I think Scorpius was going to say something along the lines of "Rose, I love you!" Haha nah jokes. I'm not sure but I would love to find out what he wanted to say...maybe it was an apology, or an explanation...
Anyway, I think this is all a bit weird...not the story, more how the characters are acting. I mean it seems like Ros and Scorp like each other, but they both have a bf and a gf. Oh idek.

Great job !

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Really? What makes you think that...? ;) Haha! Thanks so much, it's so nice to see all of your lovely reviews and they make me smile massively every time! I think they drew too, although it was very close! It's possible that he wanted to say that, although I guess we'll never know (I'm not 100% to be honest!!). :) And it is strange, but there has to be some drama at some point, right? ;)
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Review #39, by iatevoldysnose Jealous

20th April 2013:
Woah!
What's going on with Scorp and Rose? And Scorp and Tab? So confusing!
Is Scorpius, by any chance, trying to make Rose jealous? And I remembered that Rose has a boyfriend, so why is she having feelings for Scorp...or is it just me?
Wish I was an Occlumence...then I wouldn't have any of these problems. You get me?
Great chapter:)

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Haha, it's very confusing! He may be, and it may or may not be working- only time will tell... ;) And being an Occlumence would be SO cool! Although I'd feel like only I should be able to do it because I wouldn't want anyone to be see inside my brain... They'd be very disturbed... ;)
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Review #40, by iatevoldysnose Scorpius' Decision

20th April 2013:
This was really good! I think someone's developing some feelings for a certain Weasley...*winkwinknudgenudge*

Love Scorp's POV... Nicely written.

Its funny how Al is so nosy. But I never would have thought that he would, for a lack of word, give up searching. I mean he didnt give up, but like stop or erm...oh whatever! Can't think of the word...

Anyway, wonderful chapter:)

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Haha, it's possible... It was SO hard to get inside his head (as I don't happen to be a boy) because I wanted to make him as realistic as possible. You know, as realistic as a boy with a magic wand can be... ;) And I think Albus is more tactful than his father and his uncle, so not pushing Scorpius was my way of showing that.
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Review #41, by iatevoldysnose Hiding Places

20th April 2013:
ACK! Ok, so that was an awesome chapter, I really loved how even though they 'hate' each other, they were able to have a bit of fun.
And the part behind the tapestry was brilliant. It's was just so cute!

At the part where Scorpius' voice was all tender, I was squirming coz it was just so adorable!!

Your transitions are better in this chapter:) they seemed more natural, so well done!

WONDERFUL CHAPTER!

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wanted to test the water a bit with this chapter so I'm glad you liked it! I'm happy I won you over a bit with the transitions, I've definitely become better at them so thanks for sticking with me through all the suspicious parts!
Thanks for reading and reviewing so diligently!

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Review #42, by iatevoldysnose Revenge is Sweet...

20th April 2013:
Wow. That was harsh of Rose. Yeh, I do feel sorry for Scorp...
I love the bit with Moaning Myrtle. Not that many people actually include her in their stories:) and your username IS moaning myrtle 7...haha:) love the username btw:))

Loved the way she got her revenge:)
I can sense something big thats gonna happen in detention...just not sure what it is...oh well, only way to find out is by reading hehe

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: People do crazy things when they're mad... And I had to do a slight homage to the genius ghost that is my HPFF embodiment... ;) Thanks, I love your username too! And you'll just have to wait and see!
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Review #43, by iatevoldysnose Arithmancy

20th April 2013:
Hahaha. Nice chapter:) I feel sort of sorry for Scorp, I mean he didnt actually mean to spill the ink. But that makes the story interesting I guess. I think I like Toby :)
Love how Rose is good at Arithmancy, just like her mum;))
I was just wondering exactly why Rose and Scorp dislike each other so much...unless its explained in the future chapters. If it is, then don't tell me:)
Great work, even if it was a bit short. :)

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Thanks! You'll feel even sorrier for him next chapter... And you may find out in the future, although not when you expect to... ;)
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Alexis
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Review #44, by I must not tell lies Easter

19th April 2013:
Loved the bit about Ron and Hermione, it was so sweet! And how could i forget the intelligent idioms. Wonderful reading as usual!

Author's Response: Thanks, it's nice to have you back! :) And I'm glad you liked the idioms, it sure was difficult to blend those in so seamlessly... ;)
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Review #45, by iatevoldysnose The Welcoming Feast

19th April 2013:
Love the sorting hat song! It's awesome!
It was a bit confusing for me, when the POVs changed all of a sudden. But other than that I love this chapter:) it wasn't that long but hey, you made up for it by writing a wonderful song:)

On to the next chapter I go...

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Thanks, I really wanted to include that and I'm glad you liked it! Sorry, if you found the change confusing; I try to reduce that as much as possible. I seem to jump between people's POVs because I get bored and I want to give both sides; it'll happen more when you read on, but I think I've got a bit better at softening the blow, as it were... ;)
I hope you like the rest of the chapters and continue writing reviews because I love reading them!
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Review #46, by iatevoldysnose September 1st

16th April 2013:
Love this story so far! Your language flows so well and the characterisation is so good. It's sort of funny how Rosie and Scorp have similar effects towards each other:)
I like Al's character, it seems a lot like how I imagined him...I don't really understand why Astoria is so intent on getting Scorp to stay away from Al...they have been friends for a long time now...I would've thought that she was either used to it or accepted it. Idk though...it's your story. I like it nonetheless and and am going to continue reading it:)

Good work and Keep writing:))

-iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I spend quite a long time on each chapter trying to make it sound right, and getting the characters right and just in general making sure that I don't update a train wreck. So it's good to know that I sort of succeeded!
You make an excellent point, but I always imagined a very dysfunctional relationship between Scorpius and his parents. They sort of ignore him because he's turned into his own person, and they want him back to when he was a little child and he didn't know any different. Astoria's behaviour at the platform was meant to mirror the way she would have behaved on Scorpius' very first day in his first year. She tries to treat Scorpius like he's still her baby, but is terrible at it- if that makes any sense...
Don't worry, I'm not going anywhere, and we've still got a few chapters left!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Alexis
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Review #47, by moaning mryrtle 67 Easter

13th April 2013:
i read it all the way through its an absoloutely amazing story

Author's Response: Haha, I just posted a response saying I hoped you'd read the other chapters! Guess I know the answer now! ;) Glad you like the story, and I hope you'll like the rest! Welcome, by the way! :)
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Review #48, by moaning mryrtle 67 September 1st

13th April 2013:
so far 9 out of ten i love harry potter and this just makes it go even futher

Author's Response: Thanks, I felt the exact same way when I discovered HPFF! I hope you'll continue reading the other chapters! Also, I like your username! Good to know that I'm not the only one who picks an irritating ghost as their penname... ;)
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Review #49, by AriesGirl40 Easter

13th April 2013:
Loved this chapter! Seems Hermione already has chosen a side if there is a side to be had. She called Scorpius handsome :) I hope Scorpius makes a good impression on Ron. Rose needs a good start to her future relationship, or if they ever get married, Ron may need to be sedated. lol See you next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think Hermione was just glad that Rose wasn't dating Toby anymore. ;) And you'll find out in the next chapter, although not in a tangible way... If that makes any sense... :) And marriage?? Steady on- they're only in fourth year! ;)
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Review #50, by MadiMalfoy Easter

13th April 2013:
Aw yay!! I'm glad Ron & Hermione didn't overreact to Rose & Scorpius's relationship--or at least too much. I'm curious to see what happens if/when Scorpius tells his parents! Longer chapters are the BEST because then I can just keep reading :) You kept Ron and Hermione very true to character, so good job with that! Wonderful chapter, I'm anxiously awaiting the next! :) xx

Author's Response: Scorpius will tell his parents, and it will definitely be more dramatic... ;) Don't worry, longer chapters are on the way! And I'm glad you liked my portrayal of Ron and Hermione, I was rather concerned about that! :) Hopefully, the next chapter will be up soon!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Alexis
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