this has been good so far. i hope that you keep writing this story.

i am wondering if you will get the trio some training before they have to face grendwald.

thanks

readsalot2002

ps. you can get back to me at fanficton . net at the name above.

Author's Response: I've actually got a lot written so far, it's a good way of not doing revision haha.
Maybe not before they have to face him, but before they defeat him I'd think so.

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wow awesome story! This is really intresting, i found it today and read all the way through.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :) The next chapter will be up in a few days, look out for it!

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So clever, how you stayed true to the books in every detail, with Gellert's escape not contradicting the story. I love reading things like this, where you're in the mind of, well, a phsyho. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading ;)

Author's Response: Thanks alot! I plan to keep as close to what I know is canon is possible. There's alot more of Gellert's crazy genius to come :D

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Hi there!

I really like this first chapter! Even though it is short it is jam packed with a ton of intriguing moments. I really like the way you described the duel between Albus and Gellert. You brought to life this lost moment so well in a short amount of words.

I also really like your writing style. I will be adding this to my favorites list to come back and read. I just love it!

Keep up the awesome writing! =)

-SR17

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Author's Response: Thanks again for your great review! The third chapters up and being validated so it shouldn't be too long, keep reading and I'm glad you enjoy it!

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Hi there!

I really like this story! It was so clever to use the poly juice potion to change the guard into Gellert. I really like the way that you describe the scene that is taking place. I felt like I was standing there with them throught the entire exchange. I thought that the plot was wonderful.

I am really interested in finding out what Gellert does next. Voldemort should be worried. One dark lord is one thing, but when you have two...whoa it should be something!

Overall, I think you're awesome! I really loved the story and the plot line. I loved the descriptions and I really think that this is a very original story.

Keep up the awesome writing! =)

-SR17

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I am adding this to my favorites!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for this! Due to a mess up by me regarding validations, this isn't the first chapter, but the first one is just a brief prologue describing the duel, it'll be up soon then i can post the next chapter. Glad you enjoyed it!

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