Reading Reviews for The Siege of the Alliance
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Review #26, by siriusfan1990 9- The Italian Breakout

25th May 2016:
Damn.. You killed Lawrence?? Sad...

Author's Response: Forgive me for being happy at your sadness. A good sign that I'm doing my job right! :D
Glad you're enjoying it!

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Review #27, by Santosh 7- Mariettaís Mission

19th April 2016:
this is amazing please update soon
when will the next update be?

Author's Response: Thank you! I don't know an exact date however I can promise it won't take as long as this chapter did.

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Review #28, by Santosh 6- The Edge of Desperation

17th March 2016:
Wow keep these chapters coming it's great!

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! The next chapt (one I had a lot of fun with) should be up shortly.

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Review #29, by Santosh 5- A Fighterís Coward

25th February 2016:
Really good chapter wow i cant belive that the Italian minister has turned on the confederation! this is HUGE. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I've just posted the next chapt now.

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Review #30, by Santosh 4- Party Poppers

10th January 2016:
really good keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks, next chapter shouldn't be too long now.

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Review #31, by Santosh 3- Supply and Demand

18th December 2015:
happy holidays! love the chapter maybe you can do a holiday update?

Author's Response: And to you! Yes, as a TA I can update over the holidays and that is the current plan.
Glad your enjoying it,
SiriusAura92 :)

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Review #32, by Santosh 2- The Traitorís Kiss

1st December 2015:
Wow who would have thought the old head of magical games and sports. I have a feeling we are going to see more of him in the coming chapters. Terrific chapter! When will you put up the next chapter?

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!It won't be too long.

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Review #33, by Santosh 1- The Spreading Flames

5th November 2015:
The best chapter ever update soon

Author's Response: THANK YOU! XD
Possibly the shortest yet best review ever!

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Review #34, by Manny101 1- The Spreading Flames

4th November 2015:
I don't know how you keep outdoing yourself when it comes to these action scenes but WOW THIS WAS AMAZING!
The details are great, the new characters are great and that Meng/Adela fight was just epic (AND BRUTAL!)
It was also nice seeing Ernie again, I hope this is the start of his own part in the story (especially after what happened to him!) but I wish we could've seen him just a bit in the battle.

This is such an excellent, dramatic and action packed start to this and I cannot wait to read what happens next!

Manny :D

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for this, it really warms the heart! :D

Ernie will be seen a little bit more but the reason I kept him out of the way in this chapter was really to keep the Giant out of sight. It made sense story wise for one to be there but action wise I'm kind of saving them for a particular part.

Thanks for the review

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Review #35, by siriusfan1990 1- The Spreading Flames

4th November 2015:
Was expecting an update for sometime.. Great start.. Worth the wait.. Action packed..

Author's Response: Haha yeh sorry about that. My original plan was to post this back in September but a combination of IRL stuff and other projects/jobs got in the way unfortunately.

Glad you liked it though and thanks for the review :)

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